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Posted: 12 years ago
nice parts

poor geet

thnx for pm

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

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me tu gai
uff koi bachao mujhe

i can imagine divzy kicking me of from the clef

or may be more than that ?

lolz
divzy aga maar le maan ne slap kiya tha na tu saza tu milni chahiye
hehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago


Hi...

I am new to ur FF...

today I read all 7 parts of ur FF...

it is really very interesting...

please pm me whenever u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ylaraib

me tu gai
uff koi bachao mujhe

i can imagine divzy kicking me of from the clef

or may be more than that ?

lolz
divzy aga maar le maan ne slap kiya tha na tu saza tu milni chahiye
hehehe


i promise i will kick u off the cliff as soon as i can
grrr hate it
Maan wish karega nahi to koi wish nahi karega pakka pakka i will get katti wid u n would never talk to u as well 😭
Divzi dhamkaaofy Laraib 😳

PS: humesha mereko dhamkia milti hai so aaj aap pe dhamki kaam karegi k nahi 😛 so go with what u wnt 😭 yet will read but if u can thn plzzz
plzzz
plzzz
make it na 🤢 will give u 2 kissies on both ur cheeks n tight wala huggie in gft if u give Maan to wish frst 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear...js read al parts nw! Awesum FF! Well written! Pls add me 2 ur pm list! Thanks :) update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

kidhar hai??????????????????????????????/



yehi hon yar will take alittle time sweety but will surely make your wish come true
mujhe tere haat se marna thori he
god meri story ka kya ho ga agar me mar gai tere hat se
lolz
kamine computer ki window or gai thi abi instal ki he will type and update


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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan came out of hs thoughts by the announcement of reaching Paris.

He was very excited thinking that in some time he can see hs geet

Can breath in the same air in which she is breathing.

He already started to feel her near hm .

These feelings were making hs heart beat faster.

On the other hand the brothers are all set to wish her first.

Uv arrange vary tight security for geet and shivam throughout the airport.

Media people were also trying to get some glimpse of the raizada's and specially the Raizada Princess.

Uv reach the airport in full raizada style , with many guards surrounding hm

He was looking extreamly hot and dashing

Vicky and Amy were also not left behind. They reach the airport hiding from Uv's eyes.

Vicky and Amy were hiding in a corner and keeping an eye on Uv and same time also looking for geet

They were wearing black glasses and were having big hats on their head . They were having news papers in front of their faces. Looking like aliens

Vicky: amy hum a tu gai hen lekin princess ko wish kese karen ge . Itni security he . we can't reach hr without telling our identity but if we tell our identity then dada will never let us wish hr 1st.

Amy: u stupdid just wait and watch jese hi princess ai gi we will show our idnetity so that guard won't stop us and we will ran and wish hr

Or jab tak dada ko sab kuch samajh ai ga tab tak hum princess ko pehle wish kar choken hon ge. So simple is that

Vicky: par os k bad kya ho ga . Dada will kill us .

Amy : jo ho ga dekha jai ga . Princess ko wish karna he k nahi.

He ask hm frustratingly.

Vicky shook hs head positively

Amy : tu phir chop raho or han dada k ghusse se bachane k liye princess ho gi na so no tension.

On the other hand veer also reached airport and straightly went to uv

Veer:dada this is not fair

U always wish hr 1st by cheating.

Uv: every thing is fair in love and war and i love my princess . Pehly tu me hi wish karon ga

Veer making baby face: i know no one can win over u in this matter.

Wese ye amy or vicky kahi nazar nai a rahe . Where are these guys

Uv smirked: as usual hiding 4m me and trying to wish hr 1st

Veer: and as usual u are here to flop their plan.

Maan was still inside the plane . He was restless wanted to go out but they were not opening the gates and at last he shouted

Maan: what the hell is happening here why u people are not letting us go.

Air hostess scared: sorry sir but we can't let u go now there is a private jet and some special personality is here and due to the security reasons we r not allowed to let u go .

Hs anger grew more . They r stopping the MSK because of some mere people.

He imediatly switch on hs phone and call the authorities to get permission and off course none can stop the MSK .

They open the door for hm and let hm go but he didn't forgot to give an angry glair to the poor air hostess who was gulping hard and praying to god for hr job.

And maan was cursing hmself for not taking hs jet.

He came out and hs guards surrounds hm .

Hs manager steev came and great hm

Steev: welcome to Paris sir

Maan simply nodded: hmm

Then he look around and saw the hug number of guards and they all were running here and there .

He asked

Maan: is there any problem here?

Steev: no sir this is all for the RAIZADA'S

Maan's head shot up on the mansion of the name .

He look towards the jet and saw the logo RAIZADA'S.

In the jet geet was trying to free hrself 4m hr devil friends

Geet: just leave me yar or kitna ready karo ge mujhe

Shriya: uff geet tu kitna bolti he yar dekh sari lipstick kharab kardi .

Geet: oh god guys bahar sirf media he and u r making me ready as if i m going for a ramp walk.

Shriya: r u mad . U r the princess raizada so u should look like one ok

Sia : le ho gaya

Geet look at herself in the mirror

She was wearing a yellow knee length dress with cream colored long boots and having a small purse .

Looking like a sexy yet cute doll

Geet while looking at hrself: sia ye dress kuchh zada chhoti nai he

Sia: just shut up geet u r looking so beautiful in it

Geet: sachi.

Sia: muchi.

Tanu: geet inka bas chale tu tujhe sirf two piece me bahar bhej den ye dress tu phir b thori bari he

Shriya: tanu tu apni phati hoi jeans par consontrate kar .

Tanu: as u wish

Shivam came in : r u all ready .

Sia: yes absolutely

Geet: bro ye dekho in dono ne mil kar mujhe kya bana diya.

Shivam smiles and kiss hr forhead : my baby princess is looking so beautiful.

Geet making puppy face : i m not a baby

Shivam while pulling her cheeks: ok my grown up princess

Geet: bro mujhe bhook lagi he

Shivam: ok i'll get a sandwich for u

Geet: no . Bro mujhe chocolate wali bhook lagi he

Shivam shook hs head smiling and give hr a big bar of dairy milk

Shivam: ab chalen dada wait kar rahe hon ge.

Geet: chalo

Shivam : wait geet,wear this coat or u will catch a cold .

geet smile and sia and shriya roll there eyes thinking he can never change .

cant see some one looking at her in wrong way specially when she is looking this beautiful,

Maan was still staring at the jet as if searching someone or should i say searching geet

Hs heart was beating faster as if he knows that hs source of life is near hm.

Steev brought hm back from hs thoughts

Steev: sir shell we move ?

Maan: hmm

Maan thought something and asked again: but this much security only for one person?

Steev: no sir not for one person its for shivam raizada and hs friends and specialy the PRINCESS RAIZADA.

Maan's step halted at the place listening the piece of information.

hs geet is here , he was daing to meet hr

maan turn around and look at the door of the jet , just wanted to see her single glimpse

and the door become open

the sight in front of hm took hs breath away , hs angel , hs geet was descending down ,

He just wanted to grab her and take her away ,

precape :

person: happy birthday geet

every one was rotted at there place

and were fuming in anger just wanted to kill hm write then and there

UV came towards hm and punch hm hard in hs stomach

chalo bacha log

opsss sorry bare bacha log jaldi jaldi socho kisko punch kiya UV ne

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan in paris brother ready to wish



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