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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting ritzy update de do
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritzy & Ash:

Oh, my o my o my.!!!!!! Hey Babaji! What are these two ladies trying to do... apne is tuch devotee ki fragile physical aur mental stithi ka kuch toh khayaal rakhnein ko kaho! Maan Singh Khurana in black see through shirt! Geet ka toh pata nahin but MY pressure, heart beat , temperate has all gone soaring to stratospheric levels!!!! 😉. I have a follow up hospital appointment on Monday; I wonder what the surgeon is going to say when I blame MSK for my elevated readings!!!

And Geet in her pink tops and clingy skirt... it's already having a dizzying effect on her "crazed with desire" husband! This hawt, hawt couple is surely going to burn up the disc floor!

Great to get further glimpses into the carefree, fun loving Maan of his college days and that his friends are so accepting of him and his wife and Maan's return to the friends' circle. I am bit confused about one thing -- This Arjum Singlania is the same as the one who bought HOPE -- right? Hasn't he already met Geet before? From the update, it didn't appear to be the case. Also, from your previous updates, it seemed like there was no love lost between Maan and Arjun but later you mentioned MASK and in this episode, they seem to be all chummy-chummy.

Back to the Maan-Geet sizzling chemistry in the disc -- love the dialogue and lines as they so effectively communicated the intense looks and under currents of electricity that is passing between the husband and wife! Hum surely toh is aag mein jal rahein hain. When oh, when is that first REAL KISS going to happen?????? Hai itni bechaini hai dil mein for that update.

Geet -- this is the leap year. As per tradition, you can take the lead and kiss that numskull of a husband of yours if he drags his feet about converting his step 1 fantasy into reality!!!!

LOVED THE UPDATE. A BIG thanks to the co-authors of this piece.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritzy:

Forgot to Mention --- in Ch, 52, the following para was the piece de resistance!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet looked at him with eyes as big as a saucer. Maan leaned closer and said huskily ' "What if I told you that you own the Honda bike which inspired you and you also own the teenager boy whose huge poster you had in your room."

This scene was BRILLIANTLY conceived -- Hai mai marjawah! I can vividly conjure up the expressions, the husky voice, the tingling of nerves, the racing heart... lage raho, Mr.. deft player of our heart strings...

Before I sign off, a belated but heartfelt BIRTHDAY wishes to you.

Edited by Cyberlife - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tomorrow maanday... coming with the update na? me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
di, when are you going to update???
pls do it fast...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome partwaiting for update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
when will u update?? waiting eagerly dear!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

di im back i m sooo happy i have recovered fully i m back with the back gosh so many days under medication

Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago





first I want to say sorry sorry i knw its very late but cudn stop my self di.

i wished to whis u on on ur birthday but grr i met with an acci but no worrie now i m here heheh...

(di)She is an awesome writer . She has got big following for her stories . She makes feel everyone special Apart from this she is a great friend. we always enjoy her friendship. Aren't we????
her friendship brought us sooo close that it is hard to not chat for one day either. we miss her if we r not able to chat her for one day. her way of saying things, and doing little act with us made us special to her and her to us
yes our only and only Di "Ritzy"
my dear di wish u many many many more happy returns of the day di ...
cum on cut the cake for us ur a sweet frnd for us di ...

"May this birthday offer you as much joy and happiness as you give to all who know you."

lets al sing songs for her cum on... i am soo happy di
To the kindest,sweetest,most generous di i have.May you have an awesome day,may all you dreams come true and God bless you endlessly.
Happy Birthday.
actually i not getting words here i am speechless hearin its ur birthday
(i know i m late)
On your birthday, may u get lots of wishes and praises with sweet dishes & delicacies & kisses from the heart of your near & dear ones...
let the angels showers blessing on u dear a small gift frm me dear di hope we will be friends forever luv u dear di ... GOD bless U di .. once again to my dear ritzy difor being my DI ...to u my dear I Love You Greetingssweetie
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Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 53
awesm!!
geet n her so many facets!!
i m so much in love wid her character!!

waiting for d nxt one!!

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