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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

really beautiful update

and just love the way you showed his emotions

how he shared his fears

and how he ask her to be part of his own self

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

amazing update

maan has gone through so much

n is holding so much pain inside him

that has made him vulnerable

but now geet is there alwayz for him

update soon

waiting eagerly

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

That was so emotional but i loved it.

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cutemishti

@cutemishti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Emotional update.

Maan opened up his heart to his jaan. Atlast he listened to his heart.

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sanj1905

@sanj1905

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

awesome update...waiting for the next update 😃😃😃😃😉

hmmm nice part where maan tells her opens his closed book in front of his jaaan...muaahhh loved it...

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preeti

@pari1689

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

congrats for the new thread..
such a beautiful and very emotional update...
loved it sooo much...
thanks diii for giving us a very beautiful update...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Maaneet date.

Geet getting goosebumps by Maan's
Simple touch. Maan is doing havoc in
Her.
Geet taking him to her favorite spot.

Maan telling his past. I loved it to the
Core who he opened up in front of him.
That was such a lovely date.
He had to struggle a.lot which made him
Like this. N whoever he loved has left him.

So this time wid Geet he was scared to give
His heart away.

The lines said by him touched my heart.
You did a wonderful job di. No need to
Get tense.

Continue soon.

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

congratulation for new thread
awesome, brilliant , beautiful part
loved it
loved each and every line of this part
first time maan is sharing his inner feeling, his life in front of his wife, his life, his geet
first time he shared this to all
loved the conversation
feel sad to hear maan's past
how much he suffered and lost one by one every near ones almost
and it's his insecurity fear that make him stay away from geet almost
but very true say love can happen anything and kisi ka bas nehi chalta dil ke maamle pe
loved maaneet moments
their interaction and geet's try to understand the pain of maan and her promise to stay
this conversation was much needed
this will only make the bond between maaneet stronger and both maaneet will try to understand more
maan's poured out his heart 's word, his insecurity, his feeling and geet understand him also
geet came to know her husband in real more
husband -wife's relationship have to be transparent and understanding so they can know each other more well
maaneet once lacking one thing that was lack of communication for various reason but now they communicate well with each other
maan's life, past and family now open in front of geet
loved the update fully
continue soon

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

really di!!tht was a mindblowingly beautiful update!!simply stunning i wud say.i don't know why bt u always manage to move the intrinsic chord of one's heart which otherwise never is so easy to touch!!there is a homely warmth in ur writing which is soo much soothing and charming.ths prt was indeed needed,to open up maan's inner face to geet,unless geet wud have had a slight hazyness always bout the sincerety of maan's feelings for her.
lovely and marvellous:-)