@ Simi jaan, me here again. Just read & commented on OW. Now, here. Go for it, Sara.
*Sara banging her head* 'yeh kya hua, kab hua, kaise hua ... *umm* & something like that'. 3 months and this ??? Seriously, out of understanding & control thing. Akhir, what had gone that wrong ?? But simply LOVE the way you described THIER thinking & emotions, beautiful. Even , the 'nurse' part was damn awesome. The refreshing 'sprinkles' in the humid situations. The car drive part was also amazing. Live update, huh. Glad to see vicky, atleast some hope. Sab saath hokar bhi, what are they really having ?? The best part was the 'hospital' scene, every ounce of it. Yup, what a family. Simi, get me out of this depression. Is se phele ke mein tera khoon kar du *WHAT?? were you thinking of me doing suicide ??* *keep dreaming*. Overall, superb. Waiting for the 'gol gappe' scene. Again, brilliant part.
Simply can't get over this cruel-yet-powerful man. Till now, we have witnessed him in every mood or emotions but for me, the real story starts from here. I mean no more 'gloomy' or 'ugly' parts, simply the MANEET. Glad that those 2 are gone but just like Maan *& over the fact mentioned by me in your thread through comment* , i can't stop disliking her father. Dadima's words & thought gave me relief. Even HIS attempt, HER acceptance *although to herself* & vicky's change was wonderful. Overall, worth reading story, for sure. Maan is here now, so more fun to read. What surprise-cum-shock ?? And what about 'gol gappe' ??
Do cont soon & do PM me.
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