'Mitra'#2 Part 11 Page 86/ 1st November 2016

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

really i thot tat person is Dev...grrr i was wrng in here..
dhamaka update dear

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Not at all Sweety... i told you before also that i always took your comments in a good way only as it just helps me to improve further... nd you know what even i felt the same that really story is moving a bit slow but as nothing else was coming into my mind at that tym so i just tyoed whatever came into my mind but i'll keep your suggestion in mind nd will think something different in next update😃... Luv you sweety please keep on giving me your suggestions in future too

u know what u take criticism or anything in positive manner hence i love u as a person and alsro as a writer not only u many do this

but some r there who only know to bash readers 😭 i think u may have know about whom i m talking about😭 i have never felt as humiliated as that day 😭 when i remember that day i still think was i wrong

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: abinash079

u know what u take criticism or anything in positive manner hence i love u as a person and alsro as a writer not only u many do this
but some r there who only know to bash readers 😭 i think u may have know about whom i m talking about😭 i have never felt as humiliated as that day 😭 when i remember that day i still think was i wrong

i understand dear abpout whom you are talking... just dont spoil your mood by talking about that day... ui told you before also that you dont need to give your valuable opinions to those who just have to took it in a wrong way nd den humiliates without even understanding your point of view or letting you explain their point of view in a polite manner... ur suggestions nd comments are valuable so give them to those who truly cares for it...

Nd ya i Love you too😳... nd dont worry Vicky's Section 377 does not apply over here😆😉
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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Chalo Abi i am leaving now... Actually m feeling hell sleepy... you know i hardly slept for just an hour last night as today was my test in my coaching nd i had to prepare for it... nd after coming back i just straightaway came to update it first... nd now i am literally dozzing off on PC itself... so now going to catch some sleep... Catch up with you later dear... Bye Tc Luv you... nd ya keep smiling always nd keep telling mwe my mistakes too... Luv you loads... Bye

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Superb update...
Loved meera - maan cute fight..
geet's emotions created a wave in maan's heart..
i wish maan vl appoint some detectives and noe abt her past...

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

so I was right. It was Meera.

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Kash Maan ko Dev ka sach pata chal jaaye.awesome update Aakriti.

Don;t make us wait 4 next update 4 too long.

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

woo a surprising part...
i seriously thought ki dat person is dev... bt u gv a shock...
well in a way its gud ki wo dev nai tha...phew...
omg meera n maan ki fight... bichari geet... 2 over possasive frnds k bich fas gayi...

so nw maan is on a mission... MISSION GEET KI LIFE...
lets c aage kya hota hai