MG OS - MILAN - Is Jahan Ya Us Jahan -Last pt-Pg 7 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

80

Views

20.6k

Users

38

Likes

327

Frequent Posters

its_me thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#11

MILAN - Is Jahan Ya Us Jahan



PART - 1



Rano Mom.. called Maan entering Handa Mansion surprising the entire Handa family.

Rano stood rooted in the kitchen still looking at Maan. Tears made there way out of her eyes as its beyond her control anymore.

Wow.. Parantheee.. mmm.. aaj to mein bhi yehi khaunga… said Maan while sitting on the dinning table next to Yash

But before Yash could interrupt, Rano appeared from the kitchen with concern written all over her face

Maan..

Beta its not good for u.. said Rano hesitantly

Mom.. please.. Jo char din ki zindagi hai.. usse mein apni marzi se jeena chahata hun.. beshaq do din kum ho jaye pur jitni bhi ho .. but before he could utter another word he felt a sharp sting on his right cheek

His right hand automatically moved to his right cheek while his eyes met angry n red - puffed eyes of his soul.

Before anybody could come out of this shock Geet turned n ran upstairs suppressing her sobs.

Maan.. said Rano gently placing a hand on his shoulder

Mom.. I know kuch zayda hi bol gaya.. Anyways actually mein usse baat karne hi aaya tha.. Kya mein ??? Maan said with smile on his face which couldn't reach his eyes that were trying to hide an ocean of painful emotions behind them.

Taking Rano's permission, Maan climbed up the stairs n entered Geet's room. He scanned the whole room which has so many memories since their childhood. It was the same room, where they had confessed their love when he was only 17 n she was just 15, the same room where they had shared their first kiss.

He was drifted to the memory lane when his eyes caught the sight of Geet crying bitterly lying on her bed cursing their fate.

Flashback - A Week before

After the wait of 7 years, today they'll be one. His eyes were restlessly looking at the staircase waiting for his love to descend to enter in his life to fill it with her innocence & love. As finally, 7 years after confessing their feelings to each other, the D-day has come n its really annoying for Maan to wait for her anymore. Giving up all his patience he got up to go to Meera or Rano. He especially insisted for a day ' time wedding so that they get their share of time together. It was then an envelop fell down from his sherwani pocket. He looked at it n realized it was his lab report that was delivered just before he was called for 'Sehera - Bandi' (The ritual of tying Sehera on the groom's head by his sister before proceeding for wedding). He had kept it in his sherwani - pocket hurriedly n moved towards the stage where Annie was waiting for him.

He passed another glance towards the stairs hoping to see his beautiful wife - to - be but was again disappointed. He sighed n sat back opening the envelop to kill some more waiting time.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Geet was about to step out of her room, where she was brought to freshen - up but more than that coz Pinky wanted to tease Maan some more knowing how impatient he was to get his Geet all for himself. She heard lot of hustle - bustle downstairs. While coming down in a hurry her foot got entangled in her lehenga n she fell only to be caught by the man who had always been her savior. She looked up smiling, only to meet a pair of eyes who had immense pain in them. She looked at everyone present in the hall n then at Maan.

Kya hua?? said Geet confusingly as silence prevailed with an unknown heat in the atmosphere.

None could gather the courage to answer frightening her to the core while she asked the same question again looking at her parents, then at Maan's Parents n finally at Maan who stood there with Geet still in his arms.

Ask your Maan only.. It was Yash who spoke with rage visible in each of his body movement

Yash bhaiya.. Geet said softly yet sternly, completely disapproving his way of addressing Maan

Gudiya please ask him.. how can he say NO to the wedding .. said Yash pleadingly with tears in his eyes

Ji .. it was a mere whisper that escaped her mouth still trying to comprehend the piece of information passed to her while Maan left her n dashed out of the hall not willing to look into those hazels that carry the power to weaken him failing all his tries to stay strong n cold.

Raj Khurana, Maan's father ran behind Maan to give him a piece of mind for such childish behaviour but was stopped by the next set of words by Geet

There isn't anything like that .. there must something really important that he had to leave like this.. please everybody.. don't overreact.. it must be something really urgent n important.. Geet said assuring all the family members. Her voice was confident yet soft. There wasn't any pain or disappointment. Pure love n trust oozing out of each word.

She looked towards Aditya, Maan's best buddy.

Adi bhaiya.. please mere saath chaliye..

Adi n Geet followed Maan in Adi's car. Geet was worried for Maan as what could have happened that Maan has to leave in such a hurry without even telling her the reason which was so unlike Maan. Her anxiety increased ten folds when she saw his car entering the hospital compound. She didn't wait for Adi to even park the car n rushed towards the entrance following Maan. Due to the visiting hours, it was quite crowded resulting Geet to lose the trail of Maan. She peeped in almost all the Chambers of the corridor where she had seen Maan entering. But her world shattered the moment she heard the conversation taking place in the last chamber

R sure doctor ??

Maan I can understand.. But ..

Which stage ?? Are there any chances doctor ?? n please such kahiyega

Maan .. I won't lie.. would it have been initial stage ..

Doctor which stage is it?? Are there any chances ??

Very less..

How much time do I have??

If u get admitted now n we start with our medication immediately ..

Doctor how much time??

Then six to seven months..

N if I don't..

Before the doctor could answer, they both heard a THUD causing them to rush outside only for Maan to get another heart ' wrenching shock.
Edited by its_me - 12 years ago
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#12

omg.. tat was just terrific...

chavvi16 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#13
SO HE IS GONNA DIE HUH
THAT EXPLAINS THE TITLE NOW
BUT WHAT ABOUT MANEET
YOU ARE KILLING HIM OFF THIS IS TOO SAD TO BE TRUE
WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN AND JUST WHEN THEY WERE ABOUT TO MARRY
WHAT NEXT THEN
CHEERS FOR PM
its_me thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: chavvi16

SO HE IS GONNA DIE HUH
THAT EXPLAINS THE TITLE NOW
BUT WHAT ABOUT MANEET
YOU ARE KILLING HIM OFF THIS IS TOO SAD TO BE TRUE
WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN AND JUST WHEN THEY WERE ABOUT TO MARRY
WHAT NEXT THEN
CHEERS FOR PM



I know u all must b angry with me for doing this to MAANEET but sweeties this is another shade of pure blissful love.

Thanx everyone for liking n I m almost done with the 2nd / Last part. Will try to post it ASAP.

Till then please keep reading n COMMENTING.
Edited by its_me - 12 years ago
prerna1 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
OMG that was nice
poor maan and geet
continue soon
kkiddoo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
😲what a shock u give us in the first update itself dear now to me just have one question r u going to give a sad ending kya 😭if yes then plz tell me i would wanna quit as i can't take it plz sorry
its_me thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: payalpari

😲what a shock u give us in the first update itself dear now to me just have one question r u going to give a sad ending kya 😭if yes then plz tell me i would wanna quit as i can't take it plz sorry


I can understand .. but its entirely upto u .. how u consider it ..

well I can only hope u read the next part n decide on ur own..
kkiddoo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: its_me


I can understand .. but its entirely upto u .. how u consider it ..

well I can only hope u read the next part n decide on ur own..

u r making it difficult for me yaar hope its not that they meet in heaven and all bcz it wont be all cool types then too 😭still me trusting u and hope u wont betray me in the end with sad ending or meet in heaven type ending just hope and my trust on u as a reader 😃waiting eagerly for the next part
its_me thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#19

MILAN - Is Jahan Ya Us Jahan



PART - 2(Last Part)

Geet..he said softly sitting beside her on the bed caressing her hair. She instantly turned n looked into his eyes questioning him as this was the first ever time he has called her by her name when they are alone.

Jaan to ab kuch hi dino ki mehmaan hai.. To mein tumhe Jaan kaise kahu.. He said sensing her restlessness

Maan.. she hugged him tight crying wetting his shirt. They stayed in the same position till her loud cries were subsided

Maan tenderly cupped her face n wiped the trail of tears from her cheeks. Kissing her forehead he looked into the deep ocean of her eyes which as always hold immense love only for him

Geet I want to talk to u about something.. Rather I m here to ask u for something.. Will u..

Maan.. aapko kabse mujhse kuch puchne ki zaroorat par gayi??

Geet .. kuch mangna tha??

She tried to search in his eyes the reason for his restlessness which she could feel easily in his touch

Geet .. one last wish…

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Pinky…

Ji Bhabhi..

Wherez Geet???

Ji she is in her room.. I m also going there.. do you want something??

Pinky.. that Mehendi girl told me that Geet hadn't got Dev's name written on her palms??

Bhabhi … wo..

I know Pinky.. Itz really difficult for her.. but please make her understand.. ye shagun hota hai..

Meera handed over a Mehendi cone to Pinky n rushed back towards her room before she breaks down in front of everyone.

Entering her room she found Yash standing near the window looking out deep in his thoughts. She rushed towards him breaking down completely in his arms.

Meera.. what happened ?? Yash asked worriedly

Yash.. I love u .. I love u so much…

I love u too darling.. But please tell me why r u crying??

Yash we r so lucky to be together.. to have each other..

Hmm.. He whispered softly with moist eyes understanding what she was hinting towards

Yash.. mujhse Geet halat dekhi nahi jaa rahi.. Shez like a life - less body whoz just dragging herself ..

Meera.. even I think she needs sometime .. but u know naa.. all this is happening just because Maan wants things to get settled in his presence itself..

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Geet..

She turned n his heart stopped seeing his love in front of him after 15 long days. It indeed was his decision not to meet all these days but only his heart knows how he had survived without getting a glimpse of his life. Today also it was on Pinky n Adi's insistence that he agreed to meet her for one last time before she belongs to some else. He climbed the stairs n reached the terrace of Handa Mansion ensuring that all r back to there respective room after a busy day. There stood in beautiful angel with back towards him looking at the moon.

She turned n the world froze around them. None dared to speak savoring the moment, fulfilling the hunger of their craving souls who were longing for a glimpse of its soul mate.

They took slow steps looking deep into the eyes of each other. Longing, pain n fear were the emotions which very oozing out of their entire being.

Maan.. Geet raised her one hand slowly to touch his face but that pulled the last string of his self – control. He instantly crushed her into his arms soothing both the longing souls. The moon witnessed the serene sight as they pour their hearts out into each others embrace.

After like ages Maan composed himself n pulled out of the hug slowly.

Geet.. its quiet late .. I must leave now… saying this he turned but before he could take another step was stopped as Geet had held his wrist

No one turned, knowing the inner turmoil the other one is going through.

Maan.. aaj mujhe aapse kuch kahna hai.. Rather I m here to ask u for something.. Will u..

Geet.. tumhe kabse mujhse kuch puchne ki zaroorat par gayi??

Maan .. kuch mangna tha??

He immediately turned n tried to search in her eyes as their last meeting played in his mind

Maan .. one last wish…

Geet..

In these last 7 years.. in fact even before that also .. I have never questioned any of your decision.. never asked u anything.. but please today.. for the first n last time .. I want to ask for something.. will u give me Maan??

Geet .. u know u don't need to ask for anything.. just say it.. He said cupping her face lovingly in his palms

Will u give me my life for just one night.. She said stretching her hand out n opening her fist in front of his face to reveal a sindor box

Geet.. He whispered removing his hands n looking into her eyes only to find the endless pain n a hope to live, even if for few hours

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

He opened his eyes to witness the most beautiful sight that his heart had always longed for. His angel was sleeping peacefully in his arms. They have never denied each other anything ever even if it cost their lives, then how could he when she asked him for her last wish.

She got really exhausted after they filled their lifeless souls with their unconditional love numerous times last night. That was a moment when they forgot about every other existence around them, his health, their resolves, right or wrong, nothing existed other then their love. They lived their long cherished dream, their deepest desire or rather need. Be it for a very little time span, but it felt heavenly when they became one and the moment became more blissful as they said 'I love u' in unison.

Geet's eyes filled up when she finally heard him say the words, she had been longing for, 'I love u Jaan' first time after the bitter truth was disclosed.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Dev was already sitting in the Mandap when the Pandit told Rano to call the bride. It was then when Annie approached Maan

Bhai.. shall we go home??

Main theek hun Annie.. Maan said with a smile plastered on his face

But each of the family members present in the hall knew the pain he was going through. They have witnessed their silent bond since past many years n the love after he announced their wedding, shocking everyone.

Geet was escorted by Pinky n Meera towards the Mandap when she abruptly stopped n turned to look at Maan for one last time. Giving him one of her most beautiful yet teary smile she turned n proceeded towards the Mandap.

His vision was becoming blur failing all his attempts to remain calm n unaffected. It was getting difficult for him by each passing moment to stay there n remain composed. His restlessness n pain was increasing with each mantra chanted by the Pandit.

He was brought back to the reality when he heard Rano calling Geet to place her hand in Dev's hand. Never in his whole life had he allowed anybody to even look at his Geet n now somebody touching her. The thought only pierced thousands of needles in his heart. The uncontrollable emotions took toll over him as he approached the Mandap.

Geet.. Rano called again

Knowing her daughters condition, Rano moved to her side n shook her a little, causing her fall back but again as always to be caught be Maan. The sudden fall caused the movement of her Mang - Tika revealing her sindoor filled parting.

A silent prevailed in the environment as they saw the lifeless body of Geet in her Maan's arms. Everybody froze at their places. Nobody could understood anything as numbness spread in the entire atmosphere.

Rano looked at Maan who was sitting numb looking like a dead body himself gawking at the lifeless form of his reason of survival, his love in his arms.

Maan.. Rano touched his shoulder knowing more than any other being in this whole world, its him who had been shaken by the harsh reality their fate had uncovered. Even the disclosure of his illness hadn't hit him the way this ill – moment must have.

Maan beta.. Rano shook him again weeping vociferously causing the next painful shock hitting the already aching hearts of Handa – Khurana family.

Maan fell back on the ground with Geet's lifeless form still in his arms. Leaving the pain of separation behind them, the two souls who were always meant to be together left this world. Never to part again.

Listen to this song to feel the emotions Maan n Geet were going through :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6x37_0oZvBs&feature=related
its_me thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: payalpari

u r making it difficult for me yaar hope its not that they meet in heaven and all bcz it wont be all cool types then too 😭still me trusting u and hope u wont betray me in the end with sad ending or meet in heaven type ending just hope and my trust on u as a reader 😃waiting eagerly for the next part


I ve tried my best but I m sorry if I betray u

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

3 years ago

MG FF - Pyar Hua Chupke Se - Updated Last Part 51 -Mar 10 Pg 123

Hi Maaneetians, As I am again loosing myself in the land of Maaneet, I bring to you this new FF to take you all in new world of Maaneet as I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF - Devil's Den #2; Updated Last Chapter Pg 71 May 18 MG FF - Devil's Den #2; Updated Last Chapter Pg 71 May 18

LINK- THREAD 1 INDEX ************************** Chapter 31 - Below Chapter 32 Chapter 33 Chapter 34 Chapter 3 5 Chapter 36 Chapter 37 Chapter 38...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".