MG FF- PARINEETA THREAD #3

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#471

very well written.

girls r craving 4 a motherly love.

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#472

Wonderful update..

Wishing geet comes back..!!

Loved the update..

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

Amazing... Superb update
Loved it very much!
Loved maaneet-dia,namra's moment
oh! So Anisha ws die
aww Maan..feel bad for him
superb precap
waiting for next
cintinue soon
thankx for the pm

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#474

awesome update...

finaly Anisha suspense is out...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Anisha was killed in accident...why...how...by whom...

Loved little angels antics over eating food...how they were amused to see geet scolding maan

Awesome part

Want more of all three angles

TFP

Cont soon

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#476

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#477

POOR LITTLE BABIES

THEY LOST THEIR MOM SO EARLY IN LIFE

BUT NOW THEIR ANGEL IS INTHEIR LIFE

UPDATE SOON

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#478

loved the part with geet n the kids

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#479

Finally anisha suspense out and me started reading from d last to find out what happened with her lol

Sad she is no more ,leaving those two cuties all alone with maan .

loved the line where she feels she is in maze game with no exit . her suffocation to wriggle out from promise made to anisha , to b with maan and cuties was shown through these lines .

The hug spoke all what they meant to eachother . Their loneliness , the anguish of seperation when they really need eachother and again back in each other lives .

And veggie scene haiyee ash . shayad Maan bhi mix veggie hi khila raha tha kya jo dia ,namra making all yucccky faces . loved the way geet madam glared at him . haiyee "KODAK MOMENT"

A very touchy and beautiful update

c my comments had also started from last part so ash , continue soon . waiting for more on 27th sep

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago