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Posted: 13 years ago
finally they both confess. wow... loved the update... geet made maan calm and compose... good... come back soon with another update anni
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it very amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago

It was fabulous👏….very weel descibed his state….how much he needed her at that time….he only seeked her to be his side and not any physical intimacy….but all it was only b'coss of rishi, he could controled himself….

But geet did it…whatever he wanted to listen …which made him calm and contended

You very well penned his and her emotionas…. It was mindblowing…beyond limits.

Really you are fabulous writer…you made me to stick to the part and think over their love…which was beyond any physical relation…

Hope now he can win the competition…ofcourse with the help of geet beside him..

Missed pa…😃

Cant wait for next part

Update soon

T4pm

You have not read my commnets for part 31..its on page 27 😭

Edited by Madhuri53 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow What Awesome update...

Song was too apt for it...

Each time u raise bar for yourself in each update...
⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update di...
loved it so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all thank you so much for back 2 back updates ..

Part 32

I was seriously feeling very very bad for maan..as he was continuously working for days and nights for the love of his life and on other hand geet was completely ignoring him…. Well she did for boosting up the confidence in him and to win the challenge.. but again,she didn't think abt his inner turmoil …

Loved these thoughts.. When I was cursed to love, I wanted to just hold you. When I held you, I just wanted to kiss you. And when I kissed you, I desired to go way beyond that. Sitting beside you, without touching you seemed too little in front of my desires that were surging day by day. And now when you are not here, I am dying to just get a glimpse of you. Sometimes you don't realize even small things are so precious, until you are deprived of them.

Was glad that his friends were there for his moral support .. but then rishi's idea..ops that was too bad.. and then came geet to him.. everything was just happening perfectly.. and I loved it..👏

Ops o teri… geet was j coz of thinking of pooja and maan….😆 I thought that will lead to mu but no.. and in the end I was so happy that maan let geet know what he was going through…😃

Geet recalled his fantasies and she was scared … that will he do all things??😆

And you left at cliff hanger….

But I loved it…👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 33

Hmm.. what to say abt this part… it was fantabulous …👏the song was just perfect to the situation.. the music and the words were superb..as if the song was just for this part.. superb song selection..i was feeling very sad when he said … "I just want to crush you in my arms,

I want to hold you tight,

but I also want to leave you for your own good.

I am myself not sure what I am supposed to do,

Oh, what should I do," He banged his free hand on the wall, unable to understand his own helplessness.

I could feel his helplessness here… its all coz of the words you have used .. superb..👏

I was smiling at these lines… It wasn't always easy to be the responsible one. This time he wanted her to leave and make it easy for them. Because he couldn't refuse to something that was not only demand of his body but soul.

And again he left her and didn't cross the limits fro her own good.. oh I so love this maan….

The higher you build the walls around your heart, the harder you fall when someone finally tears them down'… very true…

And then her one move was enough for turning him to her and do what he desired… actually both desired …

I am confused abt these lines of maan… Let me do it,… what he meant be that??? Ummm….😳 ☺️

And then her confession,finally… yeeppyyy I danced.. hey I can dance haan…😉

And both slept happily…😃

Now am gonna wait for next part eagerly.. though I don't wanaa wait but ..have no choice… so come back soon…

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
finally maan got his peace
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both the updates were amazing.It was really intense and passionate,plus the song,really well written.Looking forward to the next chp and thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
you r amazing dear .. Loved it
both updates are awesome ❤️ hope maan win this competition

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