MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Maan should tell geet abt Rahul...superb updt...want geet to slap rahul




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

plz maan geet ko bacha lena iss rahul se...kuch gadbad honewala hai...plz maan save geet...geet dont believe dis rahul plz...

superb n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

part 14

awesome
loved it
ye horn bhi na😆




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -padma-

nice update😊

hope to see some maaneet moments in office😉
iss rahul ka kya karoon😡




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

rahuI is pIaying d0ubIe game yaar

and maan i hate him here




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Geet maan ko imagine kar rahi this.. Rahul.. Door raho maan ki Geet se...😡 Waiting for maneet office scenes😛




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




why Rahul is doing so...for Geet only or for any other purpose...



because u have told early that he is just engineer from his company came to handle work here...and he is send by his father as Geet's alliance...

ok may be he don't want Geet to go close to Maan so he can try by himself to make his place in her heart...

why he want to destroy Maan's image and reputation...how is he think so strong to face Maan's power...is Maan so weak in front of him...how can Rahul get so courage that he is trying to destroy Maan when he very well know that he is nothing...if Maan come to know he can destroy him in seconds...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...




Rahul wants to marry geet as their fathers already talked about this alliance.. but he felt maan is also interested in geet ...and somewhere know geet might be attracted toward maan.. .so he wants to ruin maan image in eyes of geet .

here rahul is client of maan .. not engineer .. he is land owner on which maan is constructing . so he is as powerful as maan ... i guess u are messing stories with other ..



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simrancuty



sryy for late reply..

really m nw feeling too sleepy... reading it latenite @2... ufff... awww ..raat ke do baje ff ..good going 😆

so if i go wrong or any mistake...sorry ... 😡😡


again.a fabbb update. luvd it.. hmmm.. this was quite big one... 😃😃
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wah g wah ye kanina rahul to zada kamina nikla ... pr ye kamina plan to tere kamine dimag se hi nikla.. (didnt meant to hurt u) wah kya plan hai...

oyeee jawan sambhaal ke .. teri hi friend hu .. to tu kon ..guess guess 😛😉😆

image bnao fr ruin kro...

uff geet... kitni bholi ho.. uski baaton mn a gae.. paagal..

geet aur uska dreamland.. alwz thnking abt maan... babaji ne usse aur koi kaam nahi dia..

chalo nw geet in office

n more kaningiri of rahul


waiting...




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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 16


Somehow geet got ready for office almost 2 n half hrs before time. Still she was thinking she will be late.. She was running fast and opened door when mohindar stopped her " kaha ja rahi ho beta''


"ji who..bauji..office '' head bended.


"abhi..itni jaldi ??


"ji..wo ..'' she was googling her mind to answer


"uncleji her maan.. mera matlab hai her boss had called her earlier '' pinky said eating her apple.. she winked geet.. geet smiled


"hmm thik hai jaa..'' mohindar said and started turning newspaper. " thanks pinky '' geet pulled pinky cheek and run..


"sun geet.. meri chips mat bhulna '' pinky shouted from behind shaking her head on her friend kiddish act,..



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Geet reached office , about 2 hours before. Office was empty and not fully enlightened. She was wandering not being sure where to go. She cursed herself for coming this earlier.. she sat on waiting chair shaking her legs being irritated .. walked in corridor like alien.. peeped in various cabins like spy.. in short making her boring time some interesting when she shuddered with a sound. "babaji'' she went in direction where heard sound then saw a person. She was not seeing his face clearly as it was still quite dark in corridor but she knew , who he was. She could recognize him in dark even.. her heartbeat got fast to fastest. She clutched her heart , not to make any sound but it was stub born.. it was making loud sound . Thank god only she was near enough to hear her own crazy heartbeats.


She saw he was going to a cabin. He opened door and entered and closed door behind. Her own legs stepped toward his cabin. She very tried to stop them but they had been her biggest foe. So finally she ended up standing in front of same door where across her dream was living.



She peeped from blind. She saw maan was sitting on chair, resting his head back of seat with closed eyes. She could see he was tired and low. She felt a strange restlessness inside. " why he is looking so exhausted '' she could not stop her own heart and twisted door knob, making sure no sound would come. She entered and closed door behind slowly. She looked him . His forehead had some wrinkles. His nose was little squeezed. She knew he had ache. She went closer. Her mind stopped working only heart was ruling and in that state she raised her hand and kept on his head. It was little warm. She felt heat inside her as well. She moved back in jerk.



As she removed her hand, saw his wrinkle went darker. She again collected her entire strength, went closer and touched his forehead again. She saw his stress became light. She smiled. She started caressing his hair slowly softly. Maan turned his head toward her feeling warmth. She went comfortable and started caressing his hair and cheek with more love and care. She felt its only her duty, her right to make him relax from all stresses and aches. How time went she dint know. She was in trance. A spell was surrounded her and in this trance she bend. Went close to his forehead and kept her lips there , touching it smoothly.



Maan eyes instantly opened feeling her lip touch. His movement broke her dream and she moved back shocked. Her hand automatically covered her mouth feeling shame and embarrassment. " babaji..ye mujhse kya ho gaya '' her eyes went watery.



Maan looked her then her face expression turning lost to scared. He recalled all what happened but very few parts he could remember. He still was feeling her touch on his skin. He was looking her confused when heard her plead " m sorry … '' then he fully gained his mind back and came to know she was here, in his cabin, alone..


"what are you doing here ?? '' he asked almost shouting .



She jumped with sudden shout. " m sorry . wo..wo mai..jaldi.. '' words could not come out well..



he saw her fearful fragile shaking body, then her eyes which had tears.. he calmed him down. " tum yaha kya kar rahi thi geet '' he asked calmly, not to scaring her more. She looked him hearing his calm voice. She gathered her lost heart and told she came earlier and no body was in office and she saw him and came to ask where to sit and what to do.



"hmm'' maan said and pointed a cabin beside his own, parted by glass. " wo hai tumhara office.. '' she looked there then him thinking " lagta hai unko yaad nahi humaare bich kya hua .. thank you babaji '' she thanked babaji mentally and left to her cabin.



Maan saw her leaving and then door closed. He sat on chair again in same position but this time his mind was not paining but heart was aching, carving for same touch which he felt some moment before. Her soft hand touching and caressing his hair. He felt heavenly like he was flying between feathered clouds. Her smell attracted his soul and he turned his head wanting more. Then something happened which kept his whole body on burn.. a current passed across his whole body when he felt her lip on his skin. It was like he had been wanting from ages.. her feel , her smell, her presence made him calm yet restless. His desire increased. His wanting increased . it was like a volcano would blast inside him and he would melt in flames of his desire ... " I want you .. I can bear this carve more.. I want to have you , touch you, love you like it would be my last desire '' his mind cried..


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Geet was sitting in her cabin numb. Lost in what she did. How she did .. was she sleeping ?? " stupid, jalli kahi ki.. kya kar diya dekha... abhi se ye haal hai tera.. aage kya karegi haa.. '' she chided herself but knew it was no use. She could not control her already lost heart. His being near her, was making her dream more demanding. She stood and went to partition which was covered with blinds. She removed some blinds and peeped in maan cabin seeing .. he was busy in reading some files.. his body felt her gaze on him. He raised his head and turned to her … when she hurriedly closed blinds and stood , resting her back to glass, calming again her running heart... without knowing , he was looking her shivering shadow behind..


Precap : Maan pulled her more close making her tear in eyes. " how dare you geet '' his deadly voice made her scared

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