MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
just loved it

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Part 15



Maan left and geet rang doorbell. Door opened and she shocked to see rahul standing there. She got worried what rahul would have told mohindar.. she went nervous when heard mohindar voice from behind..


"geet beta..you came?


"ji bauji'' she passed glaring rahul. He smirked. " who bauji I got late because ..woh..


"geet beta you dont need to tell anything.. rahul already has told everything what happened there..why you got late


geet got confused as what he said...'' kya kaha rahul ne bauji'' she asked meekly


mohindar- I know beta you had to wait there for interview as maan was busy in meeting.. and also maan had changed venue at last moment..''


geet looked rahul .. he was standing there innocently. " you know geet.. rahul specially requested maan to drop you here as he had something urgent.. otherwise rahul himself would have been dropped you.. '' mohindar told further.



Geet looked rahul and thought what he was trying to say her on road " geet I am sorry .. wo I had to change venue at last moment cause maan had told me to do.. but it was my mistake.. I should have been informed you before about changes but what could I do.. I was hell busy in meeting... maan as well .. '' geet looked rahul who was bending his head down as was very guilt.


"chal beta..you get ready fast and have dinner.. you must be very hungry '' mohindar said


"ji'' she nodded and went to her room.. leaving smirking rahul behind. " thank you so much rahul beta.. if you would not been there for geet what would she do.. at this late ?? I am glad you informed maan.. I want him to thank personally beta'' mohindar requested to talk to maan for saying thank you for dropping geet .


Rahul got alert " wo uncle I think he must be verybusy.. why are you worrying.. I would tell him tomorrow.. after all he is my friend '' rahul said in convincing tone and he succeed.



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Geet was in shower. She was cherishing cold falling water drops in her tired body. Her fresh mind went toward maan. How he offered her lift and she denied. Then again maan followed and this time she agreed... " ek ajeeb si chamak dekhi unki aankho me..ek ajeeb sa junun.. jese wo naraz ho kisi se..bahut naraz..per kyu !! '' her mind went to moment when she touched his hand.. it was beyond what she always imagined. It was like she had touched her most precious hidden desire, a wish of her soul.. she smiled . "geet tu bhi na pata nahi kya kya sochti rahti hai .. pagli he is maan.. The great maan singh khurana.. koi bagal ka munna nahi ..'' she laughed on her own thought.. she twisted water knob and came out wearing her blue suit..


she was drying her hair. And again thinking about him. " per babaji..mai unke baare me soch to sakti hu na.. mere sapno pe toh kisi aur ka haq nahi " she nodded convincing her self and lost in their newest moment. Her trance broke a slight knock on her door. She composed herself and opened. It was rahul.. " aap??''


"kya mai andar aa sakta hu ??'' he asked and tried to enter when geet stopped him saying she was just going for dinner.. we can talk there.. rahul said he wants to talk her alone. " akele kyu'' she dint want to talk him as she felt weird with him.


"wo geet I know tum mere bare me kya sochti ho. But geet please believe me I am not that bad as you think of me.. I want to be your friend.. if you are comfortable. As I dont want to force anything on you. I really care for you as a friend and thats why I told maan to drop you. Hope you will give me a chance to proof myself.. please geet''



geet was stuck. As she dint like him but still he helped her . There should not be any problem in talking sometime.. she thought. She nodded " okk .. m ready ''.. she replied. He smiled. She smiled back and left. " not bad not bad rahul.. you are genius'' he appreciated his own on his plan.. " so now onward maan singh khurana ..be prepared for my round.. you will lose your image, reputation and one most important thing.. and that is Geet.. " he laughed and left for dinner.


(With maan's behaviour and his possessiveness toward geet .. rahul guessed geet keeps important place in maan life. And he now wants to trap geet for defeating maan. For this he now trying to make his image good, in eyes of mohindar and geet and then he would throw his net.. )



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Next Morning



Geet was very excited and nervous at same time. She woke up earlier. She made breakfast in super fast express. She took shower with most concentration. She was choosing her dress with most confused condition. She could not finding her juties (shoes). Which juti she found was not matching with her suit.. she changed suit. Now she came to know her ear ring was dismatched from suit.. "uff babaji mai kya karu.. kuch samjh nahi aa raha ''


"koi bhi pahan lo geet.. tumhaare pe sab achhi lagegi '' she turned back and shocked. Maan was standing there smiling. "aap?? " she whispered. "hmm mai'' he said stepping toward her.. in response she started feddling her duppatta and moving back..


"a..aap..aage kyu badh rahe hai '' her voice shaked


"kyu ..nahi badh sakta ..aur wase bhi I am you boss.. to kuch bhi kar sakta hu '' he staterd with tease eyes.. lil loop smile


"kyaa!! kuch bhi kar sakte ho .. k..ky..kyaa kar sakte ho aap "


" tumhe dekhna hai geet '' he smiled and came closer. she moved back in force, her foot bumped to bed rim .."ahhh'' she clutched her toe in pain. She closed her eyes tight to suppress pain.. she waited for him to ask what happened but he dint come.. " hey babaji..wo aate kyu nahi.. '' she opened her one eyes to see what he doing but shocked to see no one was there.. she lump to her door, balcony everywhere to search him but he was no there..


" babaji..was I dreaming ?? ..per wo to sach me mujhese baat kar rahe thy na '' she pouted and made cry face.. " mera kya hoga babaji.. mai toh abhi se unke sapne dekh rahi hu.. jab wo pass honge toh !!'' a sudden exhale came out in anticipation..



Precap : Geet In Maan Office 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovelyyy lovuuu...superb update😃...ye rahul toh accha game khel rahe h khud ko accha bana rahe h geet ki samne😡...per don't worry teri nakab uthar jayega rahul😡...maan hai naa😉...hayeee geet tog ab din mein maan ki sapne dekh rahi h...i hope maan wo stupid bet bhul jaye n know wo bhul jayega😉...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update buddy 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
this rahul is so cunning geet is not getting his motive😡😡😡😡😡
maan shd really frget bout tht stupid bet now nd accept his feelings too 😡
waiting eagerly fr ur next update maaneet in office 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
do cont soon 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
the update is rahul ko kisi gutter mein phenk do bas...



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Posted: 12 years ago
rahul kamina grrr
awesome update yar loved it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 15
nice part...
Rahul is really a swine...
my alreaady started to think how it will be when Maan will break his bones and nose and all...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome nice, lovely parts
loved them
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz maan geet ko bacha lena iss rahul se...kuch gadbad honewala hai...plz maan save geet...geet dont believe dis rahul plz...

superb n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago

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