MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
iread it in one go nice ff dear

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omg awesome mindblowing beautifully written FF yar loved it a lot
thanks divzi for pm yar really loved it a lot
do add me to ur PM list,eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

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omg awesome mindblowing beautifully written FF yar loved it a lot
thanks divzi for pm yar really loved it a lot
do add me to ur PM list,eagerly waiting for next update



Thank you so muuch Sona.. 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simrancuty


waooo... ossmmm update yr... luvdit..
geet selecting dress... hayee..
kutta kaminaa kahi ka... kitna grhhh.. ye rahul ka na maar khaane ka mann hai... he dont knw.. ab maan uska kya haal krne vala hai.. bechara rahul teri toh pakki band baji...
msk power... he got info in 2mins. wahhh...
abhi i guess... rahul geet ko force karega.. he will say maybe sm nonsence abt maan.. maan right time pohunch jayega.. n dishummm dishumm..
sryy for late..




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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 13


Geet heard door sound behind . Room was dim lightened. She scared and turned when she heard a voice..


"geet" and then she saw some men were sitting there on chairs and adi came to her. Adi smiled and greeted .. she replied and sited on chair front of men.


Adi- geet they are here for your interview


geet- per adi ..i thought maan would take my interview ' she said being sad " babaji itna ready hoke aayi aur koi faida bhi nahi hua ' she twisted her nose mentally and her interview started. she faced it well and been selected. She was so happy to get this job as she forgot her worry , how she will be there front of maan , for whole day .. she left from there in joy . She called pinky and told she had been appointed. She was on cloud nine.



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After geet leaving adi called maan. He told everything and informed geet left few minutes back. Adi thanked maan and said sorry for scolding him but maan stopped . He said " adi agar tum nahi hote to I never got to know about geet missing. Thanks to you adi'


First time adi sensed some emotion in maan talk. Then he shoved off thinking this is due to his bet, he was worrying for geet.. as of now he knew geet had became maan possession. Yet he thanked him for saving her from rahul. He thought how maan called him and told everything what he had been informed by detective. How maan arranged interview in no time as he knew rahul called geet there on name of interview (through hotel receptionist ). he thanked maan for everything he did for her.



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Maan was walking in hotel parking. He was very astonished with what happened or what could have happened. " aaj agar adi ne sahi time pe mujhe nahi bataya hota to ' ' he dint want to think further. " that bast*** rahul.. '' Rahul name filled anger in him. "he dared to beat maan singh khurana... he dont know who I am and what ' geet is to me. She is my... '' he stopped.


He Was amused on his own thought. "ye mai kya soch raha hu... who is Geet ? She is just a normal girl , a prey for my fun, for my bet .. fir mai kyu usse bachana chahta tha.. why I was worried for her safety like a mad.. ye mujhe kya ho raha hai ' '' he was walking in his thought when suddenly his eyes caught a sight.. a beautiful sight. He saw Geet... covered in green dress walking toward him, smiling, her eyes were dancing on rhythm of her hand. Her lips were moving, touching each other, making maan jealous .. he wanted his lips be in between of them .. he wanted his lips to be a part of those pink petals.. he wanted to be there.. with them.


His trance broke when he heard a crack sound followed by a shout.. " heyy babaji ..ye kya kar diya aapne.. mera phone tor diya..?? ''


"geet'' .. a whisper came out in his hazy mind.


"haan geet.. and how did you know my name? " geet stood up picking her broken cell and got shock .. maan was standing there and she scolded him.. him ?? " babaji.. ye kya kar diya maine..'' she kept her hand on mouth in fear..


' m sorry .. m sorry sorry sorry sorry..wo galti se maine aapko bura bhala kah diya.. wo I dint see you and was talking on phone and could not see you toh wo.. phone gir gaya .. and.. ''


"chup.. Bilkul chup !!!'' he kept his finger on her lips. her lips stopped in mid air, sensing no power to move further. Her body felt ethereal current.. a vibration .. a sensation in her surround...she was touching, by a man ,,, first time in her whole life. that too by whom she was wishing madly to be touched... she been numb... statue.. only her eyes had slight movement that too staring at same direction... in his eyes



his eyes were still. .. motionless.. idle but inside it was storming.. his body was waving. First time he felt something new .. something fresh .. something soft more then cotton. He never knew she will be felt like this good and soft.. it was more delicate what he imagined few moments before.. he wanted her to move her lips so he could feel more bliss but she had became numb. He was not feeling her breath even on his finger ..


" is she alive?'' his heart questioned.. " shut up .. of course she is might '' .. his mind replied. " might ?? iska kya matlb .. of course she should be alive ''' his heart said.


" Chup.. sab chup '' maan shouted on his feeble thoughts , made geet shuddered. She came back on earth and moved back. Maan too moved his hand back thinking " ye mai kya kar raha tha'' both stood there embarrassed not knowing what to say..


After few minutes '


" thank you '' geet started first ..she was still nervous


"kis liye geet ?''


"wo .. you gave me job ' ''


"tum iss job ke layak thi geet tabhi ye tumhe mili ' I did nothing ''


"per aapne mujhe ye job offer ki .. ''


"woh isiliye kyu ki '..''


"kyu ki ' ??'' she looking his eyes waiting for unexpected '


"kyuki .. I need you geet !!! ''


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Both once again lost each others eyes...



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Rahul called both random girls (who were slapped by geet) and paid them. Both went shouting for slap but rahul mind was somewhere else... he could not accept defeat this easily.. he wanted to destroy maan reputation in front of geet.. but failed .. "per ab nahi .. ab nahi maan singh khurana... ab mai soch samajh kar apana apna daav khelunga... " he vowed... "I will not spare you maan .. ''



Precap : " you are so beautiful geet '' maan said...😳

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovuuu awesome update...nyc move maan babu sahi tym pe geet ko bacha liya...btw I also guessed that 😉...ek aur batt didn't maan bet on geet per yeha toh kuch aur hi ho raha h😉...hmmm maan fall in love with geet...ye toh hona hi tha...chalo hum toh khus hai...😃
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE!!!!!
Thank god geet is safe... i wished she wud hav cum to knw abt dat rahul😡

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Posted: 12 years ago
such a wonderfull update..pls cont..
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb updat
s0 rahuI wants t0 sp0iI maan image targeting geet

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