MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 11

( some dream sequence given in red)


Maan was sitting in his guest house. He did not go to adi's home as he dint want to. He wanted to be alone. Alone from his new raising feeling which he could not understand.. he could not know why he was enjoying loneliness .. why he wanted to be away from whole world when always he used to enjoy in crowd, in attention of girls, among them , he felt his life perfect then why today, he was feeling something miss, something incomplete , something wanting...


He took his glass filled with liquid and gulped... tried to calm his thirst , which was making him insane inside...he closed his eyes... his mind traveled to a place,,, where he was .. enjoying and feeling his first feel of desire...a few hours back... with geet,...


"hey babaji.. ye yaha kab aaye.. kahi inhone sun to nahi liya "'.. her nervousness made him smile...



her funny expression after knowing he heard something her secret .. made him chuckled heartily... first time after his parents death...her caressing his hair... took him away in heaven...her fresh blossom scent made his thudding heart a new flavor of happiness... with closed eyes he was touring in aroma of her presence... her fast heartbeat was singing musical song... arousing his dead existence...



his heart thought, what he experienced.. it was new and unacceptable for him. he held his head which was paining, aching ... he felt someone removed his hand from head and touched gently to heal ... he stunned... She caressed his forehead and kissed...



his eyes opened ' started searching ' Her' everywhere...but she was no where...


Teri Ek Chhuwan Se ' Jaaga Yeh Kaisa Ehsaas

Pehle To Mehsus Hui Na.. Mujhko Aisi Pyaas



he threw glass on floor pushing his hair in defeat...he went to terrace to fill cold wind calming his burning heart.. but it was big fail...he took out his cell ' looked with concentration for few moment and dialed a number then cut...


After few second his phone rang... " hello maan... wow how lucky I am.. u called me.. omg ' ' sameera voice came... " maan you know jaanu what happened today.. wo prashant and rani what did... " she was going on & on where maan was somewhere else...



Bhole Teri Soni Soni Ankha Mastaaniya

Pyaar Ke Liye Yeh Dengi Laakhon Qurbaaniya



He remembered her eyes.. it was esoteric and mysterious.. there was hidden something, which was for him only ... " but what ..' he didn't guess... he was wanting her only, not her emotion or feeling.. " mujhe geet chahiye... I want you .. geet !! " and he cut ..his blabber shocked sameera...


" who is this Geet... who is this bit** jiske liye maan ne mujhse baat nahi ki ' now I have to go there .. maan you are only mine... tum mujhe chor ke kisi ke nahi ho sakte... I wont let it be '. not again ..."


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Geet at her room...


She thought about her dream ' (which was not dream).. maan was sleeping in her lap.. she was caressing his hair.. a drop fell on his cheek... he opened his eyes and looked up , seeing she was smiling in tears... he was going to wipe when she held his hand... nodded no



Tere Liye, Tere Liye Marta Hai Maahiya
phir Kyoon Judaai Se Dil Darrta Hai Maahiya
tujhpe Jaan Nisaar Baliye, Dil Gayi Haar Baliye
rabba Mainu Pyaar Ho Gaya, hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Kho Gaya



he smiled... kissed her head and covered her eyes with his hand... shutting them... she opened eyes... A drop fell on maan photo.. she did not wiped.. she let pour more... her every silent cry was for her maan... night went soundless.. listening her moist lullaby ...



Next Day


Mohindar was walking on road when maan jeep crossed him. He stopped seeing mohindar and went to him...maan greeted .. he insisted him to drop where he was going. Mohindar tried to deny but had to agree. Both sat in jeep... maan started conversation and finally he asked about geet s job.. mohindar first denied .. but maan gave him offer for geet job in his company . Mohindar hesitated but maan convinced him... Mohindar said he will ask geet...

maan agreed and gave him appointment time for interview, that was on same day,


Mohindar went and asked geet. Geet shocked as why maan wanting to give her job when she was not applied or told ever regard this. She said mohindar she will decide and tell...



Maan was in his office, meeting with rahul and some employee, when his cell vibrated. Maan always kept phone on silent when he been in meeting. Cell was keeping on table and it gained rahul attention. He saw number and fumed to see it was of geet.. he looked maan who was busy in work. He smirked. After some ring cell cut.


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" hey babaji maan phone bhi nahi utha rahe.. ab mai kase unko mana karu job ke liye.. I dont want to work with him.. I know I would not control my feeling, being with him full day. Babaji mai kya kru.. " she looked time . It was afternoon and maan called her in evening. She was nrevous and could not decide what to do .. she was walking in room feddling duppata when pinky came...


" oyee geet kya kar rahi hai.. ase kyu walk kar rahi hai ??


" pinky achha hua you came.. wo .. wo na.. maan offered me a job.. but you know na I cant accept this... ' she said tenced.


Pinky- oyee geet ..to isme problem kya hai.. tu jaa na.. ye toh gud news hai


geet- nahi na pinky.. you know how much I feel for him.. aur unke saath .. puraa din.. ek saath.. na baba na.. mai nahi jaaungi.. I will deny him.. wait abhi phone karti hu" and she again called him but again he dint pick.


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Rahul saw maan s phone rang again and for his good luck , maan dint see it... rahul signed and covered phone with a file, so next time if phone ring maan would not notice . He excused from meeting saying he got a call and went out.. he called geet..



Rahul- hello geet ??


geet- ji aap kon (she had not his no)


" m rahul .. geet , are you calling maan ??


"aapko kase pata ??


"wo we are in a important meeting.. your calls are disturbing him.. so he said me to talk you.. whats matter geet ?? any urgent ??


geet became nervous as she knew how angry-man maan is (through media)- wo..wo nahi .. mujhe unse milna tha to...


rahul- geet meeting will go for more then 3-4 hours.. you can do one thing.. why dont you come here and meet him hmm..." he smirked


geet looked to pinkey nervelessly.. " kya hua" pinkey asked whispering. Geet covered phone and told her.. " toh jaa na.. soch kya rahi hai.." pinky suggested ..


geet- thik hai rahul .. aap mujhe address de dijiye.. I ll come


Rahul gave her a address which was of course .. not of maan's...



Precap : ". you know who is maan.. number one flirt and cheapest man who play with girls every night"

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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wowww lovu interesting update...awesome...so maan trying to deny his feeling towards geet😉...nehi kar paouge maan babu ...😉...waise bich mein ye sameera kaha se aayi chudail kahike...ek aur hai devil rahul...ye sameera aur rahul ko toh😡...waise meri pass ek idea hai love in donno ko sadhi karwa de fir maaneet free sari devil eyes se😡...oyee mein toh kehna bhul gayi toh rahul ye plan kiya geet ko maan ke bare mein bura bala kahegi chugalkhor 😡

btw oye teri haila once again me first 😆 yippeee
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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iss rahul k bachche ka toh aise k taise...usne gee k masoom dil ko zeher se bhar raha hai...want to kill him with my bare hands...argh...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
ab toh pakka maan sudhrega
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Wow lovely update.my maan is starting to fall for his but buddhu now realizing..now rahul is playing with hell,if my maan cums to know he is death..i love te update so much dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
geet k0 kya maan ki sachayi pata chaIegi
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Oh no This Rahul!! Maaneet should be awre of this monster.. But what's gonna happen now.. Will Geet believe Rahul...???
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wowww...interesting update...👏👏

hayeee...maan to diwana ho gaya...lakin maan nehi raha...ab pehle baar pyar hua hai to samajhne mein tym to lagegi na😉

pehli pehli baar baliye...dil gaya har baliye...hayeee my fev song❤️


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