MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 45

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This part dedicated to my Champ dazzlingdivz

Happy birthday champ



Part 10


Geet was standing there, lost in her dream, dint notice this cold war between them. she wanted to look maan but her hesitation was stopping her. She dint notice maan was looking her, waiting her to look him. Both were stood there mute when maan voice fell in her ears

"geet file laayi ho " she looked him and nodded. She gave him file looking in his eyes. It was still red but something strange emotion was waving in his eyes. It was something she always feel inside hers. She was lost in his eyes when rahul said

Chale geet "


No" maan instant replied ' geet abhi nahi ja sakti '

All looked him amazingly, including geet who was seeing him wide eyes.

'wo mera matlab hai .. geet ase nahi ja sakti.. mera driver usse chor dega ' he looked her for permission which she agreed with sweet smile. Which was not unnoticed by rahul who was fuming.

Rahul- iski koi jarurat nahi hai Mr. maan singh khurana.. I brought her here and its my responsibly to take her back safely.

" rahul first of all, m only responsibility of my bauji, no one else... and you don't have to take any trouble for me. I can go my self' " Geet dint like his authority on her. She answered him back

All took aback with her reply. Somewhere maan liked her attitude. And more then her nature he liked her reply to rahul. he smiled and looked rahul, crossing his arm in attitude. Rahul felt embarrassed with her answer.

"to.. mr rahul .. I think we should talk about project .. ' adi handled situation. He looked maan, who was very happy for some unknown reason. Adi and rahul went to discuss on project when maan came closer to her..

"geet..

"ji .. 'she said looking ground

"thanks ' maan said smiling ..

' kis baat ke liye ' she asked him, looking his face

"kis baat ke liye .. ye to mai khud nahi janta geet.. I even don't know why m saying thanks , to you as I never said this easily to anyone.. but today I want to say you ' maan thought'

" wo.. you came here specially to give me this file .. isliye " maan said. Geet smiled back. Maan looked her smile then source of her smile. Her pink lips were inviting him. A strange eagerness waved in his body. He very wanted to touch them when geet eyes caught his gaze. She felt uncomfortable " mai chalti hu " she said fiddling her dupatta in agitation

Maan looked side, guessing her nervousness. She started leaving when maan stopped her ..

" geet ..please.. I know you wont take any help from anyone but still I want to do .. please take my jeep. Mera driver tumhe chor dega' " geet could not deny his request and nodded. Maan felt happy as she agreed. Geet left ..

At Night

Geet was laying on bed, thinking about maan, their meeting. She could not believing her luck. Her dream man, every beat of her heart, every breath of her life, her maan was in her life, real. She was meeting him, in real. She was talking him, seeimng him. She always wished her babaji to meet him once but here, maan was calling her to meet him. It was more then enough. She took out his photo and kissed lovingly, shying.

"maan'you don't know what you did to me.. m mad for you. I know I can never can get you still I want to die in your arm, nahi to mai babaji ko meri jaan bhi nahi lene dungi' " she made cute face' " you know maan.. Whenever I see you..talk you what I feel' what I think hmm..maan I want to see you abhi'please babaji.. "


"what you feel geet ?? " a familiar voice stunned her mind and body' she sat up and looked toward door.. maan was standing there.. crossing his arm, smiling. his smile was like he heard her blabbering'

"hey babaji.. ye yaha kab aaye.. kahi inhone sun to nahi liya " she thought her widen eyes'

" haa geet.. sun to liya.. kit um babaji se kya kah rahi thi " he said and stepped to her.

O" her mouth made shape and looked him like stupid ' maan chuckled looking her weird but cute expression. He slowly come and sat, front of her. She could not move as still she was not guessing it was her dream or reality. He looked her face, her eyes had shine, with confusion. her opened long, brown, curly hair were covering her half head like a teenage girl.. she was looking wonderfully cute.

He smiled and touched her hair. It was so soft and silky. He was feeling like feather'. He touched her forehead and removed her scattered curls. His touch made her believe it was real. She moved back surprised. She kept her hand on mouth " babaji.. ye yaha kaise aa gaye "

"geet.. tumne khud mujhe yaha bulaya.. and now moving back hmm..

Maine aapko bulaya ??

Hmm' " saying he kept his head in her lap and laid .. geet shocked with his act' maan closed his eyes smelling her scent. He held her hand and kept on his hair, to caress . she first was hesitating and nervous then started caressing his hair slowly, giving his internal pleaser. She closed her eyes. They were silent, both were feeling serenity, both were thinking, what they are doing and why.. but both were happy'.


Geet opened her eyes feeling emptiness. She looked down, no one was there. She looked around, no one was in room. She looked door. It was closed. She looked photo which was in her lap' she smile, patted her head , fell on pillow and covered her face in duvet shying, hugging & kissing his photo.

Outside of room, maan smiled and left'.



Precap : " Teri ek Chuan Se Jaga... Ye kaisa Ahsaas
Pahle To Mahsus Hui Na... Mujhko Asi PYaas"


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyeee hailaaa😲 mein toh first hogaiyeee...yipeee...dhinka chika dhinka chika...wowww awesome update lovuuu...geet ko fasane chala maan per khud hi faste ja rahe hai😉...ab kya hoga maan babu😉...waise me too liked geet's attitude towards rahul.omggg maan was outside of room😲...aur wo toh sab sun liya hayeee...oye mein q dreamy ho rahi hu dreamy toh geet hogi hayeee...per mein toh maaneet ke liye dreamy hue hu ...hayeee
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awsome part

loved it a lot

precap is dreamy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely update..maan u dont hav to trap ur geet,she already digged her ground..lovely cute scenes,my maan lying on geet's lap..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

all d three updates was fab

plzzz ye rahul ko geet se door kro...

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Posted: 12 years ago
love it maan in geet lap reminding geet



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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee...so beautiful update lovuuu 👏👏

m so happy geet ne rahul ko accha jawab diya...rahul geet se dur rehna nehi to MSK tera band baja dega...😡

hayeee...kitne kubsurat dream thi......q khatam ho gaya dream...😭

I can never can get you still I want to die in your arm, nahi to mai babaji ko meri jaan bhi nahi lene dungi' "...awww i love this dialogue❤️☺️...muaaahhh lovu 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
nice part...
so he was actually there?
OMG...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
loved geet's restore to rahul
love the last part of this update cute moment of maan & geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...hope he wont break her heart...

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