MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
Now ye Rahul maaneet ke beech
Aage kya hoga...
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Part 9


Rahul was sitting when geet came with some snacks. She put on table and started to leave when her cell rang. She checked it was unknown number. She picked when she thrilled with a voice from other side. It was maan. She stood there abstracted..


Maan ' hello.. geet ??


Geet- hmm (she replied in her dreaming)

Maan- geet I forgot a very important file in your home. Can you bring that to me please.. as its very urgent and confidential so I cannot send any staff.. can you meet me at xyz place ??


(Geet was still in her dreamworld' somehow she guessed maan was calling her to meet him..) she said absentminded ' ji.. aapse milne ?? abhi ?? .. This is what Rahul heard.


Rahul (st)- ye kiska phone ho sakta hai .. and who calling her to meet him.. I have to know'


" geet kiska phone hai ' mohindar asked from behind, confused with her lost talk' his sound brought back geet on earth


" ji.. wo bauji..maan ka .. wo unki koi file rah gayi hai yaha ..


Rahul- you mean Maan khurana ??


Mohindar ' you know him beta ??


Rahul- yes uncle as his company is handling my construction project..


Maan was listening all this.. he shocked to hear a male voice, which was new as he knew geet live with her father only.. " who is this man.. what the hell he is doing there.. " he thought.. " geet.. get are you listening ??" he said, quite shout..


Geet sensed her phone is still on ' ji.. haan.. mai sun rahi hu.. wo you give me address, I ll be there '


Maan gave her address and cut. Geet told mohindar she has to go xyz place when Rahul said he would give him file as he had to meet him as well.. regarding project. Geet been sad as she too wanted to meet maan..


" wo ..wo bauji.. I have to go market also .. toh mai waha se chali jaaungi.. '


Mohindar ' thik hai beta.. per jaldi aana


Ji "


After some time she was leaving when Rahul offered her lift on his bike (he had car also but he loved riding bikes). Geet denied as she felt uncomfortable with him. But mohindra insisted her to go with him as both were going to same place.. so geet had to agree. She sat on back seat with little gap between them.



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Maan was waiting for her eagerly. He could not concentrate on work. again n again his eyes travelled to road. When he saw adi there.


"aree adi you here ?? oo.. so you started keeping your spy eye on me hmm !!


Adi laughed his usual laugh and replied.. " maan asa kuch nahi hai .. wse bhi I know you,, you wont stop your game even I would stop you, so why on this earth I would waste my talent on you.. and for the reason I came her, is actually I applied for a job in Delhi.. and I need your help maan


Maan- but why you need job adi..when you have your own property here??


Adi- maan my house and whole property is heavily mortgaged and so.. I need a job very urgently


Maan- hmm' fir to adi I have a offer to you


Adi- kya maan.. ??


Maan- I offer you a post in my company..in Khurana Constructions.. " he said smiling


Adi smiled.. " nahi maan iski koi jarurat nahi hai .. mai dosti ka faida nahi utha sakta


Maan- adi .. first of all maan singh khurana dont mix personal and professional ever. You are my friend its true but here I am offering this job a man, whom I know as best accountant, not to my friend, u got it.. m not going to give job for any obligation.. you are best in accounts and I need a responsible person for this post so m offering you this job only.. You will have to go through all legal and professional procedures.. before joining.. so do you accept ??


Adi nodded smiling. Thanks maan .." he said. Maan nodded and again his eyes resumed their job ..



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Rahul was riding in speed. Geet was having problem to sit comfortably as on every jerk she slipped close to him.. " Rahul.. thora dheere chaliye please ' she said.


Rahul smirked- ohh ..sorry geet.. tumhe problem ho rahi hai then u can hold me .. I cant help geet as road condition is very bad here ' '


Geet sit again cursing him.. " hey babaji kaha fas gayi mai ..' she clutched tight whatever part of bike she got to hold , tried to make gap between them



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Maan was looking toward road when he saw geet.. with a man ?? and he saw how she was struggling to be away from his body and he was' That Man was intentionally making it difficult. Maan eyes started burning... he clenched his fist tight to hide n control whatever was running in his body.. he could not leave his glare from That Man . He saw, both geet and That Man were coming toward him. he saw geet was before him and That Man was staring her from back.. They were stepping toward maan. Geet face was twinkling and little crimson lay over her white skin. He saw how she was hiding her blush from him


Maan (ST)- why the hell she is blushing !!! why she is smiling?? Is she happy being with him ?? who is that bas*** ?? ' maan was raging seeing geet with Rahul. he wanted to kill him then n there


Adi was standing there absorbing maan changing expressions. He looked maan then geet. how geet's every expression affected maan.. " ye maan ko kya ho gaya ' ..


' maan' " adi patted maan shoulder, whose eyes were fixed on both geet n Rahul. " maann" adi called again but maan was somewhere else.. maan was staring to geet , she was slowly stepping toward him with shy smile.. he knew this smile was not for me as she dint know me yet.. then why .. why the hell on this earth she is smiling damn it !!!



Geet was walking when rahul came closer to her and started walking her side. In this term his hand touched her arm (intentionally).. geet shivered with his touch on her bare arm. She dint like. She walked fast and in no time she was standing, front of maan. But maan eyes were on rahul, how dare he touched geet..


Geet was looking maan where maan was to rahul. Rahul came and said " hello maan.. m Rahul. The owner of this land.. " saying he raised his hand to shake. Maan looked his hand then him.


" Maan Singh Khurana ' ' Maan said with attitude.. " call me Maan Singh Khurana.. not maan'" and he clutched rahul hand. Rahul shocked to see maan clutching his hand as tight, like his running blood would stop any moment.. maan was tightening his hold, looking in rahul eyes. rahul was struggling to be free but maan was not in mood of leaving.. after so much of struggle maan freed him.


Adi noticed everything. How maan was being furious looking geet and rahul together. How rahul touched her arm and maan clutched his hand so tight. Adi thought "maan.. I know your are acting .. to charm geet but I wont let your plan be succeed...unknowingly I got this job, but I know , why babaji sent me here and why I got this job. Now I got a way to save geet ... from you...




Precap : Not Decided 😛

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
realy i like nthe update
adi want to save geet
wow
and i bit my nails and thinking is maan realy acting with geet or somthing else
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...Maan getting j 😆,so sweet of Adi to stay there to help geet..
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Posted: 12 years ago
it maanadi want to save geet



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Posted: 12 years ago
lovuuu awesome blossom update ...I know u wrote man in bold intentionally 😉.. i just love that part . how maan getting j...hayeee...I think am missed something kya sach mein adhi ka property prob chal raha h ye fir ye adhi ka koe plan so that he can save geet 😕
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9
nice part...
Geet is so smitten...
and Rahul be careful, Maan will break ur bones...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope tat adi really saves geet frlom maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
niceee updateee👏👏...

maan ne haat tor q nehi diya uss rahul ki...uski himmat kaise hue geet ko chune ki😡😡😡...

i hope adi kuch kar paye geet ko bachane k liye...lakin maan khud ki game mein fasta ja raha hai😉😉

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