MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 23

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Part 5


Adi was standing there like statue. He was not gaining what maan said.."Bet??" Nooo... maan cant do this.. this is not right... mai asa nahi karne dunga usse .. " he thought and left to meet maan.



Here geet was total shocked, confused, anticipate , anxious. She was not able to understand what happened few minutes before.. "did I see maan ??? " pinky...did I see maan ??? she asked pinky very curious to know was it real or she was day dreaming … pinky was furious on her.. she showed her hand with red scar.. " ye dekh tune kya kiya.. abhi bhi you have doubt it was real or not haan... " she said irritated.. blowing on her scar..


" I dont believe it..pinky I dont believe it..mai maan se mili ..hayeee... pinky mujhe abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha I met maan..omg … " she was so excited.. jumping dancing mentally.. pinky scared to see her like this.. " chal geet ghar chalte hai " she dragged geet from there


Adi went to maan site. Maan was busy on phone. Adi stood there behind him waiting for ending his call. Maan saw him and cut then turned to him. " aree adi tu yaha.. koi kaam tha


maan I want to talk to you " adi said stern


"hmm..okk lets go in office." they sat on sofa in office.. " okk adi now tell what you wanted to talk " maan asked


adi- maan ye sab kya hai..that bet ??


maan smiled – yes bet.. you know adi I liked that girl geet.. waise bhi this place is very boring so I thought it would be fun.. wont it... and you know na..how I like betting.. so lets do it



Adi- no maan its not right.. ye thik nahi hai. How can you bet on any one's life .. she is nice and simple girl. I dont want to involve her in your's this so called fun...


Maan- it means you are scared adi " he looked him in his eyes


Adi- Its not matter of scare or win or loss maan. Its matter of someone else life. How can you play game with someone's feeling


Maan - m not playing game .. will not. But its my promise to you adi that she will come to me on her own wish. I will not force her to come to me.. and thats my bet is.. now tell me.. are you ready or you have not that trust upon your "Nice" girl ..hmm


Adi- aisa nahi hai.. I trust her . But I am scared what if she come to know about this bet.. maan you are not getting what you are doing..


Maan- adi I know what I am doing..but I think you don't trust her ..and thats why you are afraid..hai na..


Adi- no I trust her.. and I know she will never come with you in your..." he could not say more


Maan- ok..so lets start this bet..and the rule is ..i will never force her ..but she will come because I know..no girl ..no girl can resist Maan Singh Khurana... " and he left from there bewailed adi left there.


Adi (sf)- thik hai maan.. if you want to play game ..let it be because I know geet very well. She would never come to you and its my promise to you" and he left



At Night


Geet was laying on bed .. looking Maan photo in her hand. She was caressing his face lovingly.. " maan I love you .. I love you so much but I know you can never be mine.. I know what are you and where I am.. you are king and I am mare ..a village girl. I am not perfect for you.. but still I love you and always will do... but you would never know this that here in hoshiyarpur .. a girl can give her life for your one sign. For your one demand, I can kill myself also ..and wont wince for once.. she kissed his face and drifted in her dream world with her dream man maan.



Maan was laying on his bed. thinking about geet. this time he was not irritated with her thought because this time ..he was happy... happy to have a way to get her.. his mind did not want to leave her memory... he wanted to think her..he wanted to touch her... he wanted to feel her badly.. he was surprised with his own thought... in his whole life he never carved for any girl touch but this girl... this girl had something that he was keen to know...eager to explore her badly... but he was maan singh khurana.. and maan singh khurana never go behind anyone... and so she will have to come me. Yes.. she will come and beg me to know her.. to touch her..to feel her and This Is My Promise to my own .. promise to my own self...

He looked watch. it was not that late in night... he stood and changed in his formal ..picked his car key and started. it was raining outside.. he smirked and left to geet home making a plan...He reached near adi home and started finding geet home but he had no clue where she lived. He was wandring then he saw pinky.. she was coming out from geet house. Geet was standing at door and talking to pinky. Maan signed in relief and smiled thinking his next step.



Precap : Maan In Geet House😳

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dhinka chika dhinka am the first ...btw lovu like button its not working so count me in supper like😉...truely speaking i loveee this track totally different 😃...n once again awesome update ...m eagerly w8ing for how will maan conveince geet😉
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superb up ..count my like link not working
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;Like button isn't working.iI WASSUPER


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Like bottun not working why,,,...

awesome one

geet toh madly in love with maan...bechari pinky ka haath
bt maan ka next plan kya hai...waiting waiting

muahhh aur shrmana mat love..;)
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Originally posted by: Moona56

Like bottun not working why,,,...


awesome one

geet toh madly in love with maan...bechari pinky ka haath
bt maan ka next plan kya hai...waiting waiting

muahhh aur shrmana mat love..;)



heheheh nahi sharmaa rahi ab.. tumne mana jo kar di... i know mera sharmana u dont like na 😛 😳
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superb. like is not working
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lovely update
read both the parts just amazing
pls continue soon
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woww...superbbb update...👏👏


i love this track lovu...❤️ab maan ka next plan kya hai...


like button is nt working...count my like too lovu😊

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Originally posted by: raingurti

dhinka chika dhinka am the first ...btw lovu like button its not working so count me in supper like😉...truely speaking i loveee this track totally different 😃...n once again awesome update ...m eagerly w8ing for how will maan conveince geet😉



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