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Desigirl144

@Desigirl144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

😳Im So sorry that I couldnt write a comment for so long. But I gotta say you kept m e breathing hard lol... I wanted Maaneet to unniiteee😆😳 And I ALWAYS look forward to your updates... I honestly hardly read any FFs anymore since I've gotten so busy with work and college. My God! These two characters will be the death of me... I cant write and literally, use the right words all the time... Keep writing moree! I will always go back onto India forums to just read your FFs! 😊 take care and God Bless!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

OOOH MUSH !

I really liked Maan's idea of date and that too on the bike...that was a good thought and I appreciate him for trying to know the important parts of geet's life...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

wow. awesome update.so romance is just starting. waiting

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

i loved the update ... wow bike ride geet aage maan peechey ...

its tough to wait for next part come soon ...

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

come back soon with another update dear asap

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Maan such mien Bacchi ki halat kharab kar raha hai

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Hayyy... Simple but powerful. Loved their sweet moments.

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

loved the update

wow the romance has started

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

part 50
lovely part...
the romance is kindling...
cont soon dear...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Well... First Hi... I m Ritzzz Ur new Reader... 😊

U know I have heard many times from ash or abby or many of ur reader abt this FF...

But did nt got time to read new FF... and now finally I have read it after so many days...

Really Thanks to ash and abby for reminding of this FF and really I m in love with it...

Okies enough of my bak bak... Lets start with the comment for FF... 😆

Aahh The very first update took my heart with Geet as biker and family talk...

It was sooo sweeet to read the that update... I loved the bond between geet and Rahul...

And in next update I loved the song selection and vicky... Hayee he is soo cute and geet too...

After that maan and geet meet... The proposal.. He telling her and then the HOPE...

How much I Wished ke I could see HOPE in reality...

And Then it started with their Vivah... but geet was lil broken yet she decided to go back to maan...

Though we say we would not expect anything but yet in heart deep inside we expect to get the same love back...

Her bonding with all khurana family was superb... Really loved their moments...

Then her b'day... How maan made it special though not that day but he did...

The picnic was awesum... Loved it...

I loved to read how maan use to talk with poonam's pic...

but after geet entered his life.. dhire dhire it was been reduced...

Then the Dev meera matter was sorted very beautifully...

U knw many of the family have this prblm in reality...

And then Geet going site.. Helping maan...

Then bike ki ride... Wow that was superb...

Fir maan ka dhire dhire usme kho jana...

He going away for somedays and was missing geet their...

Specially their evening coffee... and he finally understood his feelings...

Here geet also missing him aahhh u showed it very awesumly yaar...

And fir maan ka poonam ke pic se akhri baar baat karna... loved it...

Aww... Actually I felt bad when geet sold the HOPE for her dream house...

but as self respect she did it... and Then ur twist... Maan-geet fight...

Mohinder and rahul ka use dantna.. dadima ka datna was expected all that..

wht I not expected was ki maan itni jaldi geet ko lane I mean baat karne gaya...

Then their talk.. maan asking for chance and coming back...

And then their evryday morning and night wala milna.. Hayeee.. Bilkul sapne jaise...

Fir mohinder ka heart attack and then maan supporting them...

He cooking for his father in law... Aisa damad mile to father will be more then happy u knw.. 😆

And Specially loved the Update where Rahul's concern was shown...

I really loved that update... Its really hard to forgive someone who has hurted the person who is our life...

and then GEET going back... Finally... Awww... Sone ke liye itne nakhre.. Hehe...

Gosh dont knw Poor them kab tak feelings ko control karenge...

HOPE back.. The way maan explaind wht hope is for him... Loved it...

And now the last update was Date.. Hehe... I was having smile all the way while reading it...

Date that too going Bike... sahi me unique hai yaar...

Ye to start thi... DATE to still yet to come... Jaane kya hoga in dono ka...😉

IN ALL I WOULD SAY VIVAH IS VERY REALISTIC FF..

I mean if u see in day to day life aapne jo likha hai happens in people life...

aah and for DATE I m remembering a song from Gulam now.. Where aamir and rani go on bike...

Aankhon Se Toone, Yeh Kya Keh Diya
Dil Ye Deewana, Dhadakne Laga
Tanhai Mein Hum, Mile Is Tarah
Baarish Mein Shola, Bhadak Ne Laga
Tu Tadap Ne Laga, Maein Machal Ne Lagi
Boond Tan Pe Giri, Jaan Machal Ne Lagi
Chha Raha Hai Ajab Sa Nasha...

I was imagining this song on maaneet... 😳

Last but not least.. Few lines by me for vivah...

Dil ki bekarariya ab badhne lagi

Teri aahat bhi ab hume muskurane lagi...

Kehna hai dil ki baaton ko tujhse

Dhadkane tez ho rahi hai tabse...

Tumhare pyaar ne is Vivah ko naya naam diya

Mujhe firse jeene ka pyaar ka bahana diya...

Izhar jo dil me kiya ab use alfaaz hum denge

Vaada karta hu is pyaar ko ab jaane na denge...

Vivah ye jo shuru hua tha dosti se

Pyaar ke rang bhar ke aage badhayenge ise...