MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 7 - Page 50

mindblowing loved it eagerly waiting for next part

Wow Ritzy.. what an update dear...

sare family drama ka hisab barabar in one update...

loved it to cooore..

ohh i could feel the feeling they were going thru... that's what you do...

make me feel the update...

Geet's feeling esp. the way she was talking for his each touch, the sensation she was feeling was very very well described by you.

and then Maan - bechara, so much control- kaise hoga.. itne pyaree biwi itne dinoo baad apne pass hai tou.

So they settled down in one room- very good. Husband wifey in different room, i don't like at all. Now it's fine.

And yes dear, i love that moview to.. don't know how many times I have watched it...

Loved the part where Geet teased him, pushing his arm and calling him Rasik.

So now the story is in proper track...

Loving the smooth pace with which you are showing the progress in their relation.

So next dinner date...hmmm... now you are defo gonna cross 400

really nice update

wow sweety this is amazing 😊
i loved the way maan expressed his feeling 😊

well nice analogy abt chupke chupke this movie was amazing 😊 and i loved it specially the song 😊

awww... it ws sucha sweet update...
hehhee.. thnq Ritzy di for using my poem... i feel it suited nice... 😃

i really loved it that u used Chupke Chupke... hehhehe...
i myslf love dat muvie n i dunno hw many times i hv seen it... 😆

I loved ur portrayal of the entire situation...
i hv always told u dat i loveee d way u write...
yet again d same..

love u... 🤗

lovely part again love it

Wow !!! Poor Maaneet !!! Lols !!!! Precap sounds great di !!!! Hope to see them together soon !!!! Loved it !!!

Wonderful update.

Lovd it n incorporatng one of my favr8 movies ws like icing on d cake.

Lovd convo while watchng "hope"

n thn maan askng permission to stay in same room... How sweet!

Maan aur geet... Hmmnn... Dono taraf aag baraabar lagi hui hai.
Pr kya karein control krna padh raha hai

lets see wat happns nxt on date...

Btw mrning/evening coffee gupshup bhi hogi,tab dono kya krenge??? I mean baat...


Lovd dat line "aap to bade raseek nikle"
sachi me perfect fr maan

HURRAY!!! Nxt is 50th part