[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 32

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Mount Everest of Sadism ⭐️

Originally posted by: glassdoor

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Ok I am going to be brutally honest which is as you know my forte by now. I don't care for the feelings of others and just say whatever the bloody hell comes to my mind. Right now I am hungry. I just came back from office. I am generally pissed off with life and with everyone around me. And everyone knows better than to mess with me now. And I thought right now let me read this story. After all Shikhu has never been at the receiving end of my temper and it was about time.

But now I am even more pissed off! All my bloody anger is gone. I love my anger and it is gone. What the hell did you do to me Shikhu? Everything was so beautifully described. The torrents of emotions. How can you do this? Could you not write some crap so I could bash around a little bit? I mean come on I have given you plenty of opportunities to do that. You are just not fair. You are bad. Very bad.

*Fuming for a few minutes*

*Less fume for a few minutes*

*Oh you are still checking? I am fine by the way 😳*

Finally that I am over my anger at you for having removed my anger with your soft and sensational writing, let me arrive at the real comment.

👏 . Beautiful and tender. I love it.

First off the mood setting. The entire situation describes the feeling of the person involved rather than the person thinking it or putting it into words. 😃. It is absolutely fantastic. That is what I love about your writing style.

And conveying the emotion part, it is so beautifulic(if there is such a word!!). When you write the character broke down on her knees, I can feel it happening before you even convey it. Such is the portrayal of the entire vista of imagination of the character. This is a very short story and hence you don't have the luxury of delving into the person's past and give us the background of the way the person is feeling at that moment. But you manage to do it in a wonderful way and leave us gasping for more.

I love the way the...ok fine I am out of words now. So I better shut up. 😳

P.S. To leave the comment blank for a day and fill it up with rubbish except for the real comment is completely non-coincidental and intentional. THING MARKED IN THIS COLOR IS THE REAL COMMENT. Ignore everything else because it is complete trash I have written to irritate Shikhu. Huhaha. How was the master plan? 😈

Thanks for sprinkling the salt Nammu!😈
First You send me greek and latin about economics making me feel as if I am a dumb kitten (I love kittens BTW) And now you need to mention the color!
I Hateee you!
Oh BTW I am too lazy to type another comment so from now on this comment is for my God father. Nammu, close your eyes
@God father:
Rofl. I loved your comment in black. Your pinkish lines always make my heart go pitter patter. Rofl. Oh BTW talk about how crap life is, I bet I would write an award winning composition on that thing!
Oh if you ever want to take out your anger on me, please go ahead. You know I have a special way of abating one's anger. Wondering how? I just behave stupidly directing all that anger on myself. Ah how clever of me🤣

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Thanks for sprinkling the salt Nammu!😈
First You send me greek and latin about economics making me feel as if I am a dumb kitten (I love kittens BTW) And now you need to mention the color!
I Hateee you!
Oh BTW I am too lazy to type another comment so from now on this comment is for my God father. Nammu, close your eyes
@God father:
Rofl. I loved your comment in black. Your pinkish lines always make my heart go pitter patter. Rofl. Oh BTW talk about how crap life is, I bet I would write an award winning composition on that thing!
Oh if you ever want to take out your anger on me, please go ahead. You know I have a special way of abating one's anger. Wondering how? I just behave stupidly directing all that anger on myself. Ah how clever of me🤣

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

No! No! It wasn't some Greek and Latin of Economics...I even tried and made it funny! 😡

I hate you!

BTW.. Are you playing God-father Godfather?! 😆

It reminds me of him! 😳

Sheesh ji , Aap bhi itni charming ho kya? 😳

This man?
Oooh I likey I likey!

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

This man?
Oooh I likey I likey!

Wow The great Shika Holmes had found another common trait between The God Father and my God father. Both of them had a thing for Cat. While one was holding CAT, another wrote CAT. Okay that was the stupidest joke you've ever heard. Haina?