SS: Near to you: Teaser 22/6 pg 120

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

part 2
nice part...
poor Geet...
Vicky is really so naughty and vibrant...
poor Maan...
when will his love be returned?
cont soon dear...

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Faiza Ghafoor

@SecretSapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Nice update sweet
Do continue soon

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

oh gosh it was very emotional i understand what maan and geet shared

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Loved their freindship bond

Both badly affected with vicky's death

He trying to take her out this...giving his sake

Hope she will find true soulmate in him

TFP

Cont soon

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Awesome update...
Pain of losing of closed one is beautifully expressed..
just loved it...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Heart warming and heart wrenching update too sanju .

The relation three of them shared was so beautiful and loosing vicky isreally a very big loss to them an d cuming out of his grief is not so easy for both of them . Ur chosen words to potray d emotions was so touchy sanju . It left such an impact and left me with teary eyes. loved it and plzcontinue soon . just remembered the words written by Nida fazli

Jeevan kyaa hai chalataa phirataa ek khilonaa hai
do aankhon men ek se hansanaa ek se ronaa hai
jo jii chaahe vo mil jaaye kab aisaa hotaa hai
har Jeevan Jeevan jiine kaa samajhautaa hai
ab tak jo hotaa aayaa hai vo hii honaa hai
raat andherii bhor suhaanii yahii zamaanaa hai
har chaadar men dukh kaa taanaa sukha kaa baanaa hai
aatii saans ko paanaa jaatii saans ko khonaa hai

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

nice...the story is moving with a slow pae .I feel sorry for both Maan and Geet .Specially Maan who is not only deeply in love with Geet but also his cousin.

How you will show Geet once she finds out Maan's love for her ..

continue soon