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Oh .. you updated !!! WOW .. did not know .. I am jumping with joy .. Thank god, I STALK .. hehehehe .. ;)

finally,caught up with last 7 parts.
all the parts were similar to old one except for the last two parts. I liked Meera and Maan convo.Its good to see Maan is more expressive here than the old one.

I am pretty sure this was not there in the original story...I need to jog my memory but I thought first time he saw her dancing was in the studio...hmmm I am sure I could not have forgotten such an important milestone in the story...

well as usual, it was awesome...no correct that...it was beautiful. I could feel her dancing and expressing herself...finally binding herself with few things and letting go off few.

Maan said t was mutiny against herself to let go...I will say it was just expression of herself...doesn't matter pain goes away or happiness fills in...point is it makes one lighter and tunes with their own senses...

Point where she stands in mudra...seeing her own curved hand...feeling his pulse and syncing with it's rhythm last night...that is where she touches herself and her inner self finds what she is looking for...

An expression of oneself

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

No...you didn't miss a thing. I just made sure I advanced the part where he sees her dance for the first time. But, O re piya is here to stay.

I wanted to put in a word of caution that a few of the milestones have been shuffled back and forth, but none have been removed. Hopefully its all for the good and to your liking.

Well i definitely loved O re Piya and will wait how u modify it...this time maybe element of Maan's passion and feeling seeing her dance will be more than surprise

But one thing I agree - it made more sense now...there she just reinvented it as her passion but here she expresses her pain and moments with Maan...which was needed more now when she is at her vulnerable state. I think i really liked the change of this placement

but candidly speaking, when i started reading it, I was expecting her to stop wih her eyes closed thinking about her moments from last night with Maan and then opening her eyes to find Maan in front of her...

I would have loved to see how you expressed their silent talks trough the eyes and then her running away.

Talk with Meera could have been breakfast talk maybe...

Oh .. just awesome .. So Maan saw her dance !! I was soo wishing for it .. Actually, you know what, I am JEALOUS of all the others who have read this FF before .. Them and you reminiscing about it, only makes it harder for me to resist .. Would it be too much if I ask you for the link of your previous FF .. Me, being a sucker for romances .. am unable to wait .. 😳

Originally posted by: MaankigopiMadhu

Would it be too much if I ask you for the link of your previous FF ..