MG FF: Femme Fatale (3): Chap 20 pg 119 (19/6)

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

part 20 - nice part. so geet brought sid with her when she move out. liked how she bonded with him. he too got attached with her. she knew how brilliant & intelligent & sharp he was. sid was very useful for her work.

she has doubt on lola and kept an eye on her.

is they really father & daughter...both gurvinder & lola seemed unhappy with each other.

maan accepted lola invitation. geet got jealous whenever she was near to him.

omg...that was hilarious how she kept giving him warning about having drinks. maan too always enjoys her banter.

update soon

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#632

wow u come back after so long... cheers...

i need to read this ff again its better to

attach with it...

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

Superb part
eagerly waiting for nxt

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

welcome back girl !!!

nice update

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#635

heartly welcome back to maneets dream land...

as i say i just reread whole ff again...

its amazing...

i must say for me its a very unique story till ...

geet wanted to protect maan at any cost...

she know's something abot Gurv n lOla...

hope sid done his work well which helped geet in future...

again thx for pm😊

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

Wow Sanju is back ! Its been a very long time indeed but IF it seems is that unique place that no matter how much time has passed..who has stayed or left..who is new or old... its never too late to be back.

You still have plenty of readers awaiting every time for an update.

Thank you for coming back despite the real life's fast paced mania.

Femme Fatale is one of my favourite read, everything from the title to the characters..and their complex personalities to the thick mysterious plot makes it one of a kind.

You plotted a story that deserves to be concluded on its full terms. Its so unique and you write so well!

Can't wait to read the rest as it comes.

Sid seems to be that socially awkward friend who is a genius by mind and a child at heart ... no wonder Geet felt connected to him... a strange parallel to her inner self.

Wanna know more about this 'Lola Behen' ...an underlying and undermining threat she is.

How Maan will be fatalised when he realises his feelings for Geet will be exciting to read ahead.

Please post the next chapters soon... hopefully for all your stories

Mishti

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#637

hey Sanj welcome back 😊 its so good to see you
now sorry took some time to read the story to catch up 😆
geet and her antics she is one hilarious secretary.. seriously talking abt diapers and lola's vaccination 😆😆 update soon pls😊

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

Interesting prologue firstly I was confused what happened may be you started present and then it is a past hope everything is good..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#639

Welcome back honey...

So happy to read the updates of FF...

Part 20

Awesome...

Geet and her quirky comments to Maan are so funny...

Cont soon...

PS - pm me...

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#640

moi just loved the update...

Geet is just hilarious...OMG I don't belive she told Maan about that alcohol and urine thing...🤣I was literally in splits reading Maaneet conversation...moi wondering what Lola behen is going to do ..😆loved reading Geet n Sid's scene...can't wait to read next part...

Edited by namita25 - 9 years ago