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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

stupid net😛
yep he has lappy cool na😆
😆haan he has confessed😆
hawww you called me a devil again
but then again woh toh mein hui


yup u r devil
bt my devil angel...😆😆😆
very rich ghost..😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


eh hello my hindi is not that bad😡
teri company ka asar toh hai but on my readers whom are giving poor mel dhamkis


Agar dhayan se padha hai toh dekha hoga ki, i am not taunting on the 'hindi' dialogue. Me want to create a 'atmosphere' here. This is your best work ever. And what about full name? Phir se sirf ek hi alphabet. Mera asar toh hoga hi. Sara loved by everyone.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope maan does not hurt geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi


Agar dhayan se padha hai toh dekha hoga ki, i am not taunting on the 'hindi' dialogue. Me want to create a 'atmosphere' here. This is your best work ever. And what about full name? Phir se sirf ek hi alphabet. Mera asar toh hoga hi. Sara loved by everyone.

ufff mel to lazy fine try karoon ghi bas now give me a yummy comment
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Posted: 12 years ago


yaar yeh to sara raaz gehra raha hai...

kya chakkar hai...

Maan ghost nahin hai because he don't have to use mobiles then...but what is his mission...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful part...loved it...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awe loved it geet is adorable
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update is dedicated to My Kiran DI.

Part 7
G:Maan I wish you where human
M:So did I misty.Misty now that I am charged up, what if I cook for you
G:That sounds like a plan, because I am starving Maan
M:Chal you get fresh and I will set the table
Maan walked into the kitchen. He opened the drawers. Gosh how was to cook. He only knew how to make italian food and he knew geet doesn' t really like it, but she will eat it just for him. But he wanted to make something she would love to eat. Finding no other option, he called up Adi and asked him to arrange indian food. He set the table.He called for Geet.Geet eyes popped out seeing the table filled with indian food and not italian.
G:maan this looks yummy did you make it
M:Haan Misty come let' s eat
G:Wah maan you really are a briliant cook
M:Thank you Misty
After finshing Geet and Maan started cleaning up. She opened the dust bin to find the packet where the food was in. She grabbed the packed. There was Veda written on it.
G:Maan yek kya hai
she said holding the packet. Maan looked at her nervously, the he showed a fake disgusted smile.
M;Gross Geet you holding a dirty packet
Geet marched dangerously his way. Maan gulped.
G:Don' t change the subject. Answer me did you cook
M:Well eh acteully you know eh
G:I know what Maan
M:That Veda is haan Veda
G:Veda what
Maan looked at geet and made a run for it. Geet ran behind him. Yelling
G:Maaan you liar, you cheater. I won' t leave you.
They kept running rounds through the whole house at the end when both where tired maan trew himself on the bed. Geet came and layed next to him. They both started laughing.
M:Geet I love your laugh
Geet looked with love filled eyes to Maan.She gave a sweet smile.
G;Maan
M:Haan Misty
G:I was thinking
M:Sachi you also think Misty
G:Maan
Geet hit on his arm. Maan laughed and hugged her.Geet laid her head on his chest.
G:Maan seriously I was thinking how can you order food
M:Simple grab the phone and give my order
G:Maaan
M:Misty Adi took care of it. He is buddy whom takes care of everything
G:Is he also a ghost
M:No misty but he can see he ghost. I never knew you know. We where friends since childhood but he never told me.
G:Maybe he was scared you would laugh on him. Like Meera laughes on me.
Maan gave a peck on her forehead.
M:Don' t think about her Misty
G:Hmmm
At Night Maan was busy on his laptop, working on the bed and Geet was sitting next to him working on her paper. She started to get bored. She tried to peek into Maan' s laptop what he was doing. He closed it.
M:Geet what do you think your doing
G:Maaan what are you hiding
M:Nothing Misty now go back to work
G:Maaan then show it to me if your not hiding anything
M:No go make your homework
G:Fine
She turned her back to Maan and started working.
M:Misty
G:I am working don' t disturb me
Maan hugged her from behind. Geet jerked his hands away.
G:Maan don' t I told you. I am working
Maan gave her kiss on her cheek. She rubbed her cheek like she was trying to rub his touch away.
M:Hmmm so my Misty doesn't even like my touch know. Itna gussa hai kya
Geet didn' t answer. Maan grabbed his laptop and put it in front of her. She grabbed it and put it behind her. Maan sighed he again took it and opened it. He now put the open laptop in front of him. Geet' s eyes wided.
G:You where looking at my pictures
M:Hmmm
G:Why
M:Because I love you
Geet looked at his sad eyes. She gave a peck on his cheek. Maan was taking by suprise. he looked at her while she blushed and gave him a hug.
The two days passed.Geet' s parents would be coming back in the evening. It was time for Maan to leave. Geet just came back from College.
M:Misty
G:Hi Maan. Why the serious face.
M:Misty I am leaving for a week or two
G:WHAT
M:Misty remember I told you whe your parents come back
G;But My parents aren't back yet
M:But there coming at night, right
G:Yes But
Maan put his hand on her shoulder.
M:Misty I have to. I will be back over a week or two. I will try my level best best to come as soon as possible.
Geet nodded.She just hugged my tight. He gave a kiss on her hair and bid goodbye.Days passed Geet started to miss Maan badly. She couldn' t sleep, she couldn' t eat at peace. She really needed her Maan back, he was everwhere in her thoughts.Maan thoughts kep intruding her mind. She knew now for a matter of fact that she loved him.
You warned me but I didn' t listen
My heart betrayed me
It didn' t listen
It became yours
In an instant
She couldn' t believe it she was in love with her ghost boy. At one side she was so happy at the other side scared that she might loose him.
I wish I could stop
I wish could make you mine
How do I tell you that I love you
Than I can' t life without you
She was in love with a ghost, her ghost boy. He would leave her that' s what he told her, but what if she could stop him. She had to, but how.
You warned me but I didn' t listen
My heart betrayed me
It didn' t listen
It became yours
In an instant
Oh she was missing him so badly. She wish she could ask him. No he told her, he ahd wanred he that when his work here is done, he has to leave. Wait maybe their is a loop hole. Maybe there is a way.Whatever it is she knew she loved him and what destiny will decide she will always love him. She can never love anyone else. Never.
I miss you please come back
I can' t life without you
I need you more,
then you could ever need me
Because I loved you without a hessitation
I need you more then your imagenation
Please come back (Girls hope you like the song it' s a mel original😳)
Precap:G:Maan I love you. I love you so much
Maan became numb for a moment
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee me first
after so many days...
it feel so good na...😆


hawww maan u dont ' know how to make punjabi food
uff u shoud call me na mai bta deti...😆😆😆😆
poor ghost maanu pol khul gyi..😆😆
adi can c ghost wow😲😆
lv maaneet cute fihgts..
hayee maneet kisy wissy...


two days passed
hayee babaji ache din kitni jldi nikal jate hai...
😔
.geet missing maanu
me too😳

4 maanu...😉😉😉

finally she realized she lvs him😃😃
precap- oye manu y ur shocked u shoud do bhangra...😃😃😃





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Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice mysterious update but no mystery in d fact dat maaneet love each other.loving d flow the story

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