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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



ya keerthi i am from vizag, andhra and u hail from???

i am from hyderabad...
we stayed at srikakulam for 6 years...it was near vizag na...
but right now we shifted from there...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthi90

i am from hyderabad...
we stayed at srikakulam for 6 years...it was near vizag na...
but right now we shifted from there...



ok where do u stay now?? wat do u ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update .continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 5:

Geet turned towards maan and gave a serious look at him tumne sabke samne yeh kyun kaha ki main tumhari biwi hoon???

Maan: the relation I hate the most is husband and wife so its not a big deal for me to say that u are my wife I cant call u frnd until u agree to it bt i dont want to be ur frnd either!!! Saying this maan left shocking geet!!!


Geet didn't know wat to do how to return the money which maan paid on behalf of her fee. It was like another normal day where she was organizing an engagement ceremony and she somehow managed paying her house rent. Her work was almost done and the dancer for the function has not arrived at the last moment. The bride's mother asked her to perform and for that she will be paid around a lakh. It was a tempting amount, so she very happily agreed to it, bt somewhere pinky was not ok as most of the guys present there were drunk and this can prove to be a risky task for geet


Pinky: tu soch ke dekh geet yaha itne saare ladke hai. They'll try to flirt with u geet


Geet: tu tension mat le kuch bhi ho I need to throw this money on the face of that MSK pinky uske liye main kisi bhi hadh tak jaongi


mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera
na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
abhi Hai Dupatta Mera Kora Kora


geet started to dance to the tunes on the stage when all the male species started to ogle at her literally. The simple salwar suit she wore was hugging her figure so much like a second skin to her body


na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
abhi Hai Dupatta Mera Kora Kora
na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
abhi Hai Dupatta Mera Kora Kora
kiske Aashiq Dekho Log Hazar Hai
ispe Jeene Marne Ko Tayaar Hai
aur Koyi Le Jaaye Baad Mein Tu Pachtaye
abhi To Sare Bebus Laachaar Hai
agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera


A gang of boys lay their filthy eyes on geet who was enjoying with the dance moves. Pinky accompanied geet as she understood the dirty eyes of boys on her frnd. A pair of eyes burned looking at geet who was busy, happy and contended that she will give back the money to maan


na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
abhi Hai Duppatta Mera Kora Kora
na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
abhi Hai Duppatta Mera Kora Kora
gore Tan Pe Pandra Sola Saal Se
maine Isko Rakha Hai Sambhaal Ke
tu Chahe Mujhko Paana To Ghar Mere Aajaana
le Jaana Mujh Pe Lal Chunariya Daal Ke
agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera


maan who was present to the function along with dadi has asked the driver to take her home as he wanted to talk to geet


mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole


As the song ended geet covered herself with her duppatta, took the money she needed to get. Geet and pinky walked out towards the exit where geet got trapped with the boys who were following her. Geet slapped the boy who tried to snatch her duppatta away. This angered him so much that he started to force her, pinky was helpless she cudnt do anything, bt maan who was watching all this drama intervened and saved geet. Pinky by now knew who this man is.


Maan:I want to talk to ur frnd alone!!! Plz to which pinky left understanding that he is the man who helped geet in paying her fee



Maan gazed geet from tip to toe while geet covered herself more with the duppatta, he smirked at her condition



Maan: do u have any idea as to wat u are doing to urself geet? geet understood the actual meaning of his question and answered him in a low tone I know wat I am doing and its all bcoz of u bt that answer made him go mad with anger kya kaha tumne?? Phir se kaho!!!



Geet did not reply bt shove the money to his hands yeh lo tumhare paise hai geet kisike ehsaan nahi rakhti



Maan understood that to return his money she danced on the stage!!! He felt bad for her situation geet yeh sab karne ki koi jaroorat hi nahi thi for u this money means so much bt for me its nothing


Geet: I know maan lekin this is for keeping my self respect intact. Wateva u did for me its something that I can neva forget


Maan: and if u r really thankful to me plz keep this money with u I don't need this money of urs which remainds me how u earned it haan wateva I did with u in the forest was wrong bt now I want to be ur frnd and I promise ill help u out in every prblm of urs!!! geet was damn shocked with the way he simply spoke out which touched her soul


Geet: I know maan main paise aise hi kamaati hoon and y do u want to help me out?? wen even my uncle uses me for his own selfish reasons, u are no one to me bt still '.. he did not let her complete I can be ur frnd geet if u want me to be!!! So with that relation I can help u out



Geet loved the way he asked her for frndship she immediately agreed to him. Maan did not take the money from geet even after a lot of pleading and pleasing and finally she gave up. He decided to drop her back home. Both of them sat in his car



Maan: waise ek baat bolon geet agar tum aise hi kapde pehnogi toh aise hi prblms create honge!!!



Geet laughed madly holding her stomach while maan looked at her amazed wen she retorted no!!! u are wrong maan aise kapde toh aaj kal joi bhi pehen leta hai fark sirf itna hai ki main khubsoorat hoon!!! And I very well know that pata hai kyun?? Issi khubsoorti ki wajah se mera pet bharta tha!!! Now that I am capable enuf to earn money working in shops I somehow manage getting away from lustful eyes. Maine duniya bohut dekha hai. Pata hai meri aadha kamayi meri badan peh jaata hai?? she looked at him with those words laughed out again loud and continued don't take me wrong modeling karte hai toh u need to maintain ur body right?? She came out of the car as she reached her destination, she walked towards her house bidding him bye. Bt he heard his voice again calling out for her. Geet turned around wen maan replied u don't need to work geet ill help u out with ur financial prblms to which geet came back and held his cheeks and questioned him acha!!! Who kyun?? Kyunki MUJHE HAQ HAI!!! she nodded and again started to walk back, this frustrated maan. He just grabbed her arm meri baat ke liye haan kaho phir jao!!!


Geet: Haan?? Aur tum meri help kyun karoge?? Dekho maan jab ek ladki ko ladkha ainvayi paise deta hai na toh jaante ho duniya uss ladki ko kya kehti hai?? RAKHAIL(keep) aur waise bhi we are frnds na toh plz let me just stay happy with the way I am I have a self respect maan don't try to break that trying to help me thanks for ur concern saying this geet hugged maan and kissed on his cheek this is for helping me to get away from those bas***ds!!! And left



Maan: masha allah!!! Kya ladki hai?? bt I promise geet ull neva eva work this way to earn money!!! He ran his fingers into his hair winking his eyes sat back into his car and drove away



ill give regular updates of mujhe haq hai from now so for next update ur target 120+ likes get to work!!!

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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nw maan n geet r frnds...but maan kis haq k baat kar rahe the...frndship ki ya kuch aur haq ki...dekhte hai maan kya karta hai...

beautiful update...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!!! geet is really a bold girl i am loving her attitude so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m loving this story very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!geet's dialogues were just awesum..
almost maan ki dil jeet li..
she s very clear abt her doings.. and i loved that part of her so much...
i wonder hw maan s going to stop her..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet is indeed have very strong will power...very nice update..pls cont soon..

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