MORE PIYA- part 40 Page 45 (THE END)

FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Jennifer

@BadGirlKiss

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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliantly written. Amazing perfect, now I am falling in love with this fan fiction. I can't belive maan spoke and that to this much. I am looking foward to the clash between geet and maan, and there words.
Please update the next part, I want to know how they express them self. This was perfect. Specially the talk with old man and oh god, geet they are so close but atleast they met which makes me happy. Hate james but like geet said no one can stop her now, specialy when she saw maan.
Very well written I could imagine everything.
I had goosbump, must say you are improving day by day

And congrs on the 3rd thread

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats for d new thread

ls there a hint that Maan may return to Khuranas or maybe Handas??

lt was awesome...waiting for Maaneet's meeting

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrast on new thread

Aweshome Update
loved it
waiting for maaneet meeting
continue soon

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love-water

@love-water

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update
Egarly waiting for Manet meeting.

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-LOVE-Arshi-

@-LOVE-Arshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Suparb update.
Atleast they have encountered one another. I have been waiting for this to long and that's why we deserve another update as it just started.
I am really waiting how this story will unfold. Please update soon.