MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
u really did very well dear.awsm update!bt now what's gonna happen?maaneet will face lots of difficulties i knw,bt they should b together.don't wanna see them in pain again...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: totinee

u really did very well dear.awsm update!bt now what's gonna happen?maaneet will face lots of difficulties i knw,bt they should b together.don't wanna see them in pain again...😔


dont worry sweety wo Maaneet hai pure soul
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Posted: 12 years ago
well eagerly waiting to see d end of takshak...but i knw still maaneet hav to go long way😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
richu i think u forget this FF

please update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

richu i think u forget this FF

please update


ha jaise tu Addiction bhul gayi hai 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mounacuty

well eagerly waiting to see d end of takshak...but i knw still maaneet hav to go long way😕


10k u sweety for giving ur reply 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update

caring maan
loved it


10k u sweety for giving ur reply 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
❤️PART - 33❤️

GEET's soft palm roamed on Maan's back seductively. Her every gesture told him that she wants him,more than anything,so too Maan. His erection teasing between her thighs and a groaned sound escaped from her throat. Geet kissed on his chest and he hissed in his mouth. Maan pulled her more if it is possible and her curves rubbed,sending him ripples of shudder through his spine. Geet leave a trail of wet kisses on his neck and Maan going insane. His every effort of controling himself,seemed waste in her proxcimity,sply when she proved his desires. Maan tilted her head back and leaned on her deligate neck. He bite and she moaned in pain.he lick her immeditaely brushed his lips towards her clevages. He suck her soft skin and bite harshly,to which she fists his hairs. Maan lifted his head up and took her swallowed lips. He nibbles her lips one by one but tenderly. He licked them and she clenced his shoulder. She wants him to deepen the kiss but Maan do opposite. He parted with her and come out of water. He dressed up and also drapped her. His fingers teased her skin and she hugged him. Maan chuckled seeing his affects and covered her fully in her saree. He lifts her up and took her out. Maan sat and stretched his legs. she was laying on him,resting her head on his chest. Both's heartbeat is fastened then normal. Both were silent and lost in thoughts. Maan broke the silence.

Maan:kya soch rai ho Geetakshi?

she was lost deeply in her thoughts. Maan rubbed his palm on her arm and shake her to bring back her sences.

Geetakshi:yuvraj wo pitaji...

Her voice is broken and tears of pain poured down from her eyes,rolling on her cheeks and ended on his chest. Maan lifted her chin up and glance in her red teary eyes.

Maan:tume yahi chinta hai na ki hum dono k hi mata pita ne humare vivah ko sweekar nai kia hai?(she nodded yes.Maan wiped her tears and cupped her face lovingly)chinta mat karo,mujhe pura vishwas hai wo hume or humare ko jarur apna lenge.

Geetakshi whimpered:or agar nahi apnaya to? Yuvraj main apke bina nai jee skti.or jab tak bado ki sweekrati nai milti humara vivah sampurn nai hoga.is rishte ka koi matlab nai hai jab tak wo log hume nahi apnate.(she snuggled him more)yuvraj mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.

Maan try to make her mind change:Geetakshi tum bewajh darr rai ho aisa kuchh nai hoga.or firr tum kyu bhul rai ho hume to bhgwan ne ek hone k liye hi banaya hai.ghbrao mat hume koi alag nai kar skta.

Geetakshi:leikin yuvraj..

She is not convience at all. Her heart scared from strange fear of sepration. She arguing with him but he put his finger on her baby pink lips and shut her mouth.

Maan:bas maine kaha na kuch nai hoga.jab tak hum sath hai,darna to us Takshak ko hai,jiska anth ab nishchit hai. Bahut atyachar kar liye usne par ab or nahi.

Maan cocooned her and she trying to make her belive on his words. Meanwhile Takshak execute his plan. He send his men in all 4 directions who start killing innocent people,coz every dyieng person's soul is absorbed by Takshak which make him more powerful. He also create mess between Aryanagar and Pratapgarh. He filled Karanveer's ears,due to which he attacks on Aaryanagar with his full armed force. When Darn go to know about Geetakshi's being kidnapped by Maan he also filled with rage. He wants to teach him lesson so he also joined Karaveer with his men. Digvijay also alerts. He orderd his armed forces to cover bounderies of Aryanagar. Karanveer moved with a full force towards Aryanagar. In only 2 days both forces are came across each other. Maaneet were still hiding in cave unaware from this truth. Aditya searching them when he got to know about this war. Coz if it happened,not only innocent people is diying but also the power of pure soul is harmed indirectly.

Aditya:mujhe kaise bhi karke Maan or Geetakshi ko dhoodna hi hoga kyunki agar ye yudh hua to manvta ka hanna hoga or pavitr aatma ki shakti ka bhi. Takshak un dono ka milan rokne me asfal raha hai isliye usne ye chal chali hai.

Prityusha:to ab hum kya karenge?

Aditya:kaise bhi karke unhe samye rehte yaha Aryanagar ki seema par lana hoga isse pehle ki bahut der ho jaye.

Prityusha:wo dono ye jante b nahi hai ki yaha kya ho raha hai.

Aditya:Prityusha tum chinta mat karo,hum un dono ko avashye hi dhoond lenege. Tum chalo mere sath.

Both were feared and concernd for Maaneet. Both ran in a jungle were both were staying carelessly,lost in each other.

PRECAP:
MAAN:nai Geetakshi tum ye sab karne ki zarurat nahi hai.

GEETAKSHI:nahi yuvraj hume ye karna hi hoga. Main sari manavjati ko bewjh saza bhugatna k liye nahi chhod skti.

MAAN's voice is broken and refleted his pain. His eyes were wet at the corner:ruk jao Geetakshi.ye in logo ki chal hai. Yahi chahte hai ye..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Girls how are you. Sorry iska itna late update lkarne k liye but kya karu sabme yahi bechari neglect ho jati hai but dont worry from now i concentrate on it fully as its going to be end soon... 😲

OKYIEZZZ NOW COME TO MY POINT AND THAT IS I DONT GOT ENOUGH RESPONCE WHICH I THOUGHT THIS fF WILL GRAB. BUT STILL MY MIND HAVE ANOTHER PERIODIC STORY FOR MY MAANEET. BUT I M CONFUSE COZ WRITTEN AN PERODIC FF TAKE MUCH TIME COMPARITIVE TO OTHER ONE SO CANT ABLE TO TAKE DECISION WHEATHER I STARTED THAT ONE OR NOT... COZ THAT ONE WAS MUCH HETIC THEN THIS ONE. BIGDE HUE MAAN KO MANANA AASAN THA PAR GUSAIL GEET KO KABU KARNE ME MAAN KO KAFI MEHNAT LAGEGI. MY THEAM OF ANOTHER PERODIC SAGA.

Hope you all like my Precap
😉
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww its gonna end so soon nahin
oh god what has he done now
are they gonna be separated
no this isnt good man
why did it have to be them only
why does this have to happen
that takshak he is asking for it man
he has gotten the two kingdoms against each other
where are maneet have been bounded in the sacred bond
damn why now well we all know why now
what is geet thinking of doing
and how are ya gonna get them together
okay i know you shall get them both together you always do
and it shall happen this time too
well this should be good gussail geet and shant maan
if you do go for it after this one finishes am all for it
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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