MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 37

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*DEMON'S ANGEL*
PART - 28

ALL turnd desperate 2 know what happned inside exactly. Maharaj Karanveer almost loosing his patience. Aditya getting numb and inside Geet was in no mood of pausing her romantic moments. Somehow Maan managed 2 made her understood.

'Geetakshi abi mujhe jane do anyatha sabko sandeh ho jayega',he req 2 her.

'nai main apko jane nai dungi.apko pata b hai yaha kya ho raha hai? Yuvraj pitaji mera vivah balpurvak us rajkumar Someshwar se karana chahte hai.nai hum apko nai jane denge',she hugged him more tightly.

Maan cupped her face and made her luk at him.'Geetakshi dekho meri taraf(she luk at hm wid her teary eyes.Maan felt pain seeeing her dizzy eyes coz of tears.)Geetakshi tum meri takat ho meri himmat ho,agr tum aise tut jaogi to main kaise ladunga itni badi ladai?'

Geetakshi stunned hearing his words.'ladai?kis ladai ki baat kar rahe hai aap?',she ws in confusion.

'Geetakshi mahaguru ne kal hume humare janam ka sara satye bataya tha.humara janam ' uddeshye ki purti hetu hua hai.hume milke 1 hoke Takshak ka vinash krna hai.',he explained her.

'Takshak kintu Yuvraj ye kon hai or hume iska vinash kyu krna hai?',she bcm more curious 2 know d truth.

'Geetakshi wo sunargarh ka raja hai,1 rakshas hai.uske paas kai kali shaktia hai. Usne is prithavi pe atank machaya hua hai,usi k vinash hetu Mahaguru ne mahayagye kia tha or usse 1 pavitr atma ka janam hua kintu isse pehle ki wo atma koi aakar le pati,Takshak k senapati Kapali ne Takshak ki us kali shaktio ki prateek us kali talwar se us aatma k do hisse kar diye.or unhi do hisso me se 1tum ho or dusra main.Geetakshi humara milan to atal hai.isliye tume darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.',he told her evrythng,but Geetakshi ws not satisfied wid his explainantion. She ws hell scared of loosing him.

'mujhe kuch nai pata main apko kahi nai jane dungi',she ws stick 2 her decision.

'Geetakshi ain kahi tumse durr nahi ja raha hu.or main vachan deta hu aaj raat ko main tumse milne avashye aaunga',atlast he made promise of coming bak.

'aap sach keh rae ho na?(he nodded yes)ap apka vachan bhulenge to nai...',b4 she cmpletes Maan slammed his lips on hr petal 1 2 made her mouth shut. She parted her lips,allwd him 2 deepen d kiss. Both's tounge played wid each othr. He relish ech nd evry corner of hr mouth nd suck hr sweet honey juice. Both partd 2 catch deir breaths. He luked at her wid hs hesterical eyes nd made her blushed. Her cheek turned crimson red. Maan hold her chin nd raised up little.

'kitna bolti ho tum?par koi baat nai ab mujhe pata hai tume chup kaise krwana hai.(he rubbed his thumb tenderly on her lower lip.Hs touched made her shiver badly)Geet ab to main chahta tum aise hi bolti raho or main aise hi tume chup krwata rahu.', he said huskily and evry fibre of her body shurrded wid pleausre. She shied more nd hide her face in hs rock hard chest.

'ab hum or pratiksha nai kr skte dwarpal darwaja tod do.',Karanveer lost hs all patience and ordered his attendent 2 broke d door of Geetakshi's room. They followed his intructions and was about 2 put force on door,bt it was open with a jerk. All were amused seeing elder saint.

'maharaj ye aap kya kr rae hai?',he que bossily.

'gurudev aap aa gaye...hehehehe',Aditya feeling so relaxed as he come out b4 deir truth unfolds in front of all.

'kyu rishivar ap to jante hi the,kintu maharaj kya kar rahe the?'Maan stare Karnveer and made him felt guilty.

'shama keejiye guruji wo main...aap to samjh sakte hai meri bachhi itne varsho k baad mili hai uski surakha ko lekar thoda vyakul ho gaya tha.kintu main apse is vyvhar' k liye shama mangta hu.aap krodhit na hoiye.'Maan chuckled secreatly. Karanveer joind his hands and apolozise. He was about 2 bend on his feet 2 repent on his deed,bt Maan stop him in btwen. 'ye aap kya kar rae hai. Hume apse koi shikayat nahi hai.or ab apko chinta karne ki b avshyakta nai hai. Rajkumari bilkul theek hai.aap chahe to mill skte hai.'

a wide smile creept on evry face.

'aap stye keh rae hai.meri putri ko hosh aa gaya?kya main dekh skta hu use?',his heart ws jumping in happiness as his daughter regain her concious bak and alrite now.

'maharaj wo apki putri hai,apko usse milne k liye kisi ki aagya ki avshyakta nai hai.ab hume aagya deejiye.'he asked 4 permission bt Karanveer denied.

'nai guruji apne jo kiya hai uske badle jo b karu wo kam hai,kam se kam kuchh samye to seva ka mauka deejiye',he req.

'kintu?',Maan pretending as he dont want 2 stay here.

'guruji mana mat keejiye apki badi kripa hogi. Sevak guruji k aram ki vyvasth karo abhi',he compell him and do all arrangement of both's stay in Palace.


HI GIRLS :P HOWS TODAY'S PART...
HEHEHEHEH PLS TELL ALSO SHARE YOUR PREDICTS ABOUT NEXT EPI PLSSS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beta maan aap ki toh solid bajegi ab
okay maybe not dude
that was good maan making maharaj make you stay back so you stay closer to your wife
well we should know that no way would maan leave his wife that easily huh
arrey unhe bhi toh apni patni ki chinta hogi naa
unse milne ki uksukta hogi aur woh aa gaye
toh yuvraj ne inke jeevan ka lakshay bata diya rajkumari ko
abd he is right no one and i mean no one can separate the two of you and its destined that you two will be one and soon
although it is gonna be harder for them to resist the other now they are so close to each other
yeh bhahwaan yeh dono kahi pakade naa jayen milne ke chakkar mein
so she dont wanna leave him huh well can ya blame her after all she hasnt sen or heard from her hubby for so long
and then her father said he is getting her married to someone else not helpling matters that is it
haiyye solid romance chal raha tha aur bahar bechare adi ghabra rahe the ki kahin yeh pakade naa jayen
but that was somewhat close call what with rajkumari not letting go of her
well this should be fun they are in the same palace as each other
and lets see who will stop them from being with the other

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update maan shutting geet's mouth he he he ... aditya saved thank god maan came out on time ...now maneet know the reason behind their birth ...its good for them...
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Thank u Chhavi :D
dear i missed ur comment on RL

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