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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
wow maan is definitely planning it for geet big time
waiting for the next eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
Owsome but guys plz send pm also
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWSUM UPDT DI, MAAN SAYING GEET AS HIS WIFE, LUVED IT UPDT SOON. PM ME ALSO DEAR
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Posted: 13 years ago

this was awesom ...

maan is seriously very clever ..

so he knows geet is going to hostel ..

now wht ..is he willing to let her go ..

poor ladies ...all r being fooled by the great MSK ..

aarti n devs fight was too cool plot ...

n yes even i hope for the same as adi ..

if maan can't get over his revengeful feeling then let this revenge game over as soon as possible so that geet's innocence can make him a bit less devilish n insane ...

waiting for next part ...

thnxx 4 all ur efforts Ruby di n Valli Di ..

hope u both r doing well ...

Valli di all my best wishes r with u ...n just hopping that u will come out of this phase smiling ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di welcome back. I'm glad that u going update. So u r recovering slowly. Miracles won't happen in real life. Time will heal every thing. I pray the god to give u the strength to overcome ur sadness at present. Because loosing mom is not the easy thing to digest. I can't even think about that worst of my dreams. Its very very painful.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya there is one more part ..onway with maneet..
full of maneet...😉
n as rubys mom is not well she left suddenly
once she is back
she will give u updates..
i can also do it
but she said she added few more spices..
so,i want her 2 ud..
she will ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dears..4 ur cmnts..
hope this two parts n the upcoming next part is also upto ur expectations.
as i really tried hard to type..
n the cmnts of urs say
i am back...giving me hope to post sil soon
Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for their punar milan
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great parts liked it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very very sorry for leaving so suddenly but i m back now with another part... its combo of valli di and mine...

one more thing next part in new thread so its up to u all how fast u all complete this thread...


PART 11



Adi went to take the next step of arthi n devs fall..

Geet was sitting next to dadimaa n speaking with maan.. geet has turned to speaker mode..n dadi also heared their talk..

Geet:king..mei aapse khatti..

Maan:kyun princess..

Geet:u did not call me..

Maan:oh..sry dear..i was struck in work..pls forgive ur king..he spoke so cutely..

Dadi chuckled inwardly..only geet has the capability to make maan a child like years before..

Geet:no

Maan:kaan pakadke chorrryyy..pls'

Geet:tho teek hai..but with one condition..

Maan:what?

Geet:u will keep ur words..u will call me daily morning n night twice..if u forget I will not talk to u..

Maan:promise..

Geet:pakka

Maan:pakka wala promise..sweety..ok now say how is dadi..

Geet:dadi na..she is gud..wait I'll keep phone in her ears..

Geet:dadi speak na..

She said innocently..

Dadi so much wanted to speak..call him maan..but her tongue was tied.. Maan:dadi..how r u..i miss u..i miss mom n dad..im in our apartment..u knowna..the memories are still..

He sighed..

Maan:dadi..pls atleast u come backto me..i..want u back..

Dadi could hear a whimper on other side..

she tried to speak..opened her mouth..n utter some word..only air came out..she felt helpless..

maan composed himself..

maan:dadi,today ive again created mu between that dev n aarthi..my plan was success..they both fought with each other..soon they will get their payment for killing my parents with interest..

dadi heared his dangerous tone..she got worried..

he must not get into trouble..

rano came inside..

geet ye kya karrahi ho..ive already told u to stay away from dadis room..see the machines..what if u do anything wrong..

dadi st:sirf wahi tho hai mujse baath karthi hai..she did not leave me alone..u r saying her not to come..i cant stay without hearing her voice..

geet stamped her foot n left without noticing that she left maan on phone..

maan heared her foot stamping..her cribbings to babji n taking out books in his library..she switched on the tv also..how can she read books n watch tv at same time..pagli..

princess... he say slowly he knows geet get scared with sudden voice...

princess relax its me ur king dont get panic...

king aap but where...

princess look at ur cell phone its still on...

ohhh... she take phone and start talking

king u know maa send me out from dadi's room...

i know princess but try to understand na... dadi need's rest na.. aur waise bhi i m here na... mujhse baat karlo...

both talking god knows how many hours...

princess its too late now u should sleep...

ok king... good night...

princess this is not way to wish king good night...

then how...

like this good night... muhhh i want kiss along with wish..

ohhh like that ok good night and bada wala muhhh

she slept soon...he listened to her calm breath n slept soon becoz of jet lag'

the next day..he went to his Kc branch..

all staffs were really having a bad time seeing his anger..the works which were incomplete..

maan made them all run here n there to finish it..adi came with the news cd has reached minister..n his goons were behind dev..so he has hidden ..

where?

Xyz place..our men are still following his moves..

Gud work adi..thank u maan..sry sir..

U can call maan..

Adi smiled n left..maan is somewhere changing..n he has started to trust adi also..

Days passed to a month..maan kept his promise talking to geet at morning n night and even give her and take kisses from her...he talked to dadi saying about how he is leaving no stones unturned torturing dev..every day he must face new problem..the raid in pubs..the proofs for drugs..misuse of girls..the police started to search him n aarthi..she still somehow stood stick with dev,knowing if leaves him,she will also be rotten in jail..

Day by day dadi was getting restless seeing him drowning in revenge..he was soft only with geet..geet tells her every moment from wakeup to sleep n whatever she did in km..

The day came..

Geet cried a lot leaving to hostel..she was very much used to this environment..her blinking language with dadi..maans library..ranos love n nakuls care..her sweet toy friends with whom she played..

Geet called maan n cried..

Maan was unknown to the fact geet is going back to hostel'when rano was saying him,he was so lost in thoughts of geet that he did not concentrate on her words..

Geet.. jaan why r u crying..he panicked hearing her cry..

King say to mama na..i don't want to go..

but first tell me where u r going and y the hell rano maa sending u anywhere.. he shout

Rano took her phone..

Beta..u can only convince her..say her to stop crying n go..

But where'now frustrated he say

Did u forget..i told u na..geet school opening tomorrow..she must go back to hostel ..

Maan cursed himself for not concentrating on her words..now its out of control..i cant stop geet..what will I say to rano maa then..

I cant stop geets studies,she must go..

Princess..gud girlna..stop crying ..u obey kings orders na..if u want to become intelligent u have to study na..u must go..

No'

Ill bring u more books'more chocolates..if u topped I'll get u gift which u ask..maa will come n c u whenever u ask..u take ur phone with u..u can talk to me daily..

but i wanna live in this place na u call me princess ne to princess to place mein hi rehti hain na...

yes princess leave in place but before that princess need to be educated and responsible na like u say... so plz princess dont cry and go back to Shimla and i promise rano maa come often to meet u...

After a lots of manofying geet accepted ..she cried a lot before leaving with pinky to hostel..who was waiting at entrance of km'



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Edited by ruvalmaaneet - 13 years ago

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