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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ruchs

Awesome update sweety!!!👏 thanks dear


Loving how Maan is taking care of his Jaan!!😳 sweet na

Me got so happy when he shouted on Pammi!!😳 I knew it socha let' s make my readers day😆

Awww He even made food for them!!😳 I know the arrogant MSK😆

And even forbade Geet from entering the kitchen!!!😳 yep her punishment

Uff Maan realized that someone did this to Geet!!!😳

But still didn't believe when she told the truth!!!

He thought that someone forced her to take Pammi's name!!!😳

Me wondering what Romeo is up to???😕 you will find out soon Miss. twist queen

Uff hope Maan doesn't suspect Romeo!! He already does

Love you dear!!!😳 love you too sweets maybe you should also get a punishment for not entering the kitchen😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
A gift for mt sweety in the next post!! Sowie this one took a li'l more time!! Hope you like it dear!!😳
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Part 23
M:Geet don' t be scared jaan tell me who told you to take mom' s name from whom are you so scared tell me jaan, tell me
Geet remaind silent.
M:Jaan please tell me
Tears made their way out of Geet' s eyes.
M:sssh don' t cry, don' t be scared tell me Geet tell me
Maan wiped her tears away.
G:I told you (between hiccups)
M:Hmmm close you eyes why don' t you try to sleep.
Romeo had heard the entire convo.So it' s pammi he thought.Romeo went to his room and made some phonecalls.Maan put her head in his lap and started caressing it, untill Geet fell asleep. Maan put her head on the pillow and stood up.He needed to now why is jaan was so scared.Something striked him Romeo. Did he do something Maan went to his study and made some phonecalls.
The next morning Geet woke up.Maan caresed her hair.
M:You okay
G:Hmm
He gave a peck on her cheek.
M:Jaan I am going to office but don' t worry nothing will happen to you. You trust you Maan na.
Geet nodded.
M:Then don' t be scared
G:Hmmm
M:I promise you I will fix everything. I will be back really soon.
G:Hmm
M:Geet please talk to me
G:Maan I will be okay
M:Of course you will cause your Maan will be always on your side
Maan left. Romeo entered the kicthen smirking.
R:Good afternoon Pammi
Pammi turned around.
P:If we haven' t Geet' s so called brother here.
R:Pammi pammi Pammi. Does the name Vikram ring a bell huh
P:woh what the hell are you taling about (stammering)
Romeo smirked.
R:Ow Pammi let me remind you. Your so called brother moe bolha bhai with whom you just to romance chup ke chup ke. But he was poor so you ditched him and went behind Raj uncle.
P:Shut up kya bekwaas kar re ho
Romeo trew the proof on her face.
R:Mein bekwaas nahi sach keh ra hoon and if you don' t so as I say everyone will find out your dirty truth.
P:What do you want (stammering)
R:Hmmm let me see for starters
Romeo grabbed overdate juice and yougurt together with doug and trew it on the flour. After that he grabbed a bucket milk and eggs and trew them on Pammi.
P:What the hell
R:Shut the hell up Pammi now in this state you will have to clean up the kitchen or else you know what I will do. Or Haan don' t dare hurting Geet or coming near her again.
Romeo left leaving a fuming and dirty Pammi behind.He enterd Geet' s room.
R:princess sara din apne room mein sit karne ka plan hai kya
G:nahi woh bas
R:Why don' t you go to KC and meet your hubby.
G:But I have to do chores
R:Chores????
G:Woh I mean Pammi mom will get bored alone
R:Nahi she won' t woh kya haina I went to spend some time with your Pammi mommy
G:KYa
R:Haan kyu
G:Nahi woh
R:I don' t want to hear anything go get ready
Romeo almost pushed Geet out of the house.Geet entered KC. She saw everyone running from here to there. Maan was in a dahm bad mood poor staff.Geet walked towards Maan' s cabin when Sasha stopped her, she didn' t know Geet was Mrs.Khurana.
S:Excuse me do you have a apointment Ms.handa
G:Ms.Handa??? No why do I need a appointmnet
S:Look MK is already in a bad mood you may be a star but you still need a apointment
G:I am Mrs.Khurana
S:What
Adi camer from behind
A:She is speaking the truth
S:Ow I didn' t regonize you sorry for stopping you
G:It' s okay
Geet walked towards Maan' s cabin thinking why is he in a bad mood ihne kya huwa. She opened the door without knocking first.
M:What do you mean he has a clean chit. Whatever keep a eye on him. I don' trust him.
Maan heard a click he wanted to yell on the person whom dared to enter his cabin without his permission.He turned around only to see his sweet wife.
M:I will call you latter.
Maan opened hi arms wide. Geet ran towards him and hugged him tight.
M:Jaan I am so happy to see you here
He gave a kiss on her hair.
M:I was missing you so much
G:Maan why are you in a bad mood
M:Darling I am not in a bad mood
G:Maan don' t lie your staff told me
M:What WHOM
G:Maan tell me aur aab kis se baat kar rhe the
M:Nothing jaan just taking care of some important stuff
G:Hmm don' t stress to much
M:Even if I do jaan tum ho na to take my tension away
Geet blushed and a sweet smile crept on her lips.
Precap:Will be Pammi' s truth out
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Me FIRST!!!

Awww me on the top of the moon!!

Two two updates dedicated to me!!! Love you Mel!!!

This Pammi is really a characterless woman!!

Loved Romeo's sazaa style!! He He!!

Me was having a hard time controlling my laughter imagining her!!!

Oh gosh!!! Maan in a bad mood!!

Loved how Sasha met Mrs. Khurana!!

Seems like Romeo got the clean chit!!!

Haaye Maaneet are so adorable!!

Lovely update sweets!!

Me so happy to get both the updates today!!

Love you shona!!!
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Maan how dare you suspect Romeo 😡
Romeo i lovee you 😳
Pammi got what she deserved
i hope her truth will be out soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pammi's truth should b out infront of maan...she deserves punishment...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
love romeo made condition of pammi



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eww pammi shame on u...apne bhai k sath romance...chi!!!!!
Hayye romeo teri jay ho!!!!
Geet itna sab hone k baad,u r still thinkin abt pammy????
Maan still suspectin romeo????
Precap is best...really cnt wait to read it!!!!
Bt pammi ko aur thoda satati toh,nahi chalta kya????
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm

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