MAANEET FF Ek Main hoon aur Ek Tu#2 LINK#3 pg134 - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
waiting for the next part
update soon!!!!!!
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Very cute part
Both understood each other's love & their trust
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it. From this update the 1 twist begins 😉 but believe me u will love the twist. In all there are 3 major twists and the third twist will bring a big smile on your faces😃. Besides this this FF will be ending soon but I promise u every update of this FF will be a treat to read for you'll😳


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PART 17

He slid besides Geet and she placed her head on his bare chest hugging him with all her love to which Maan reciprocated beautifully by bringing her closer

They did not speak nor did they move from their position but tonight they wrote another chapter of their love story with the feathers of the moonlight'

Their heart and soul declared that no one can ever come between their relationship be it an individual or the feeling of lust'

THEIR RELATIONSHIP WAS ETERNAL AND TODAY DESTINY HAD SUCCESSFULLY INTRODUCED THE ELEMENT OF TRUST IN IT'

Next Day

Geet felt a bit odd as she could not sense the loving warmth of Maan's presence around her

She opened her eyes in horror as a small unnecessary fear of losing Maan crossed her mind

Geet: Maan'

But to her surprise all her fears vanished in thin air as her eyes were welcomed with a beautiful sight

The whole room was full of mesmerizing and beautiful flowers

The smile that made way to her face was more divine than the first rays of the sun

Maan:

"Chand sitaro se rishta tod de gar usse teri ibadat ka mauka mil jaaye

Phool shabnam ki chadar odne se inkar kar de gar teri ek nazar ki rehmet unki khushboou ko mehekaye

Titliyaan apne rango ki bauchar tujhpar kar de gar teri nazakat ki parchayi unpar padh jaaye

Suraj teri maasumiyat ke saamne gutne tekh de gar har roz teri sunehri muskurahat uske kirno ko heero ki tarah sajaye"

[The moon will end its relationship with the stars if it gets a chance of worshipping u

[The flowers will deny wearing the viel of dew drops if u allow ur one divine eyes to add a special touch to their fragrance

Butterflies will shower u with their eyecatching color if u allow the shadow of ur innocence to be touched by them

The sun will bow down in front of ur innocence if everyday u promise to decorate its rays with your golden smile]

Maan spread his arms widely and invited Geet to enter his loving folds

Geet rushed towards him and hugged him with utmost love

Geet: Subah subah kaha chale gaye the Maan? [Where were u till now?]

Maan caressed her back lovingly

Maan: Tumhare utne se pehle kisi tarah darwaaza kholne ki koshish kar raha tha aur jaise hi iss mission mein kamiyaabi mil gayi maine ghar ke saare servants ko outhouse bhej diya taaki kisi ko ye pata na chale ke kal raat meri Geet apne Maan ke kamre mein thi'main nahi chahta ke mere Geet ki pavitrata par koi bhi sawal ute [I tried to open the door before u woke up and once I was successful in this I forced all the servants to go to the outhouse as I didn't want them to know that my Geet was in her Maan's room yesterday night as I don't want any finger to be raised on my Geet's pure and divine character]

Geet looked at him with an undying respect that couldn't be explained in words

Geet: Itni special hoon main aapke liye? [Am I so special for u?]

Maan: Kya iss sawal ka jawab dena zaruri hai? [Is it necessary to answer this question?]

Geet: Nahi aapke sawal ne saare jawab de diye [No your question gave me my perfect answer]

Maan kissed her temple and scooped her lovingly in his arms

Geet rested her head on his chest as Maan carried her to her room

He placed her gracefully on her feet at the entrance and held the door with his hands

Maan: Geet darwaza band karlo aur fresh ho jaau main tumhara neeche intezaar kar raha hoon [Geet close the door and freshen up I am waiting for u downstairs]

He winked at her and Geet blushed profusely giving him the most precious gift of his morning

Maan: Haye mann kar raha hai inn hoto ko choom lu [I want to kiss these rosy lips of yours]

Maan moved in front but Geet was quick she closed the door and poured water on Maan's naughty intentions

Maan: Koi baat nahi Geet ek baar neeche aur phir dhikata hoon [No problem Geet just come downstairs once then I will give u a good lesson for keeping me away from my gift]

Geet let out a small chuckle and went to the washroom to freshen up

After some time

Geet desended down happily to meet Maan but her smile got converted into worry as she saw a tensed Maan in front of her

Geet placed her hand on his shoulder

Geet: Kya baat hai Maan? Aap pareshan dikh rahe hai [What's the matter Maan u seem to be worried?]

Maan: Geet mujhe aaj hi London jaana hoga abhi Adi ka call aaya tha its an emergency [Geet I have to go to London today itself; Adi had called me its an emergency I have to go]

Geet: Toh problem kya hai Maan? [What's the problem Maan?]

Maan held Geet possessively and continued

Maan: Geet tumse dur jaane ka mann nahi kar raha najaane aisa kyun lag raha hai ke tumse ek pal ke liye bhi dur raha toh tumse dubara mil nahi paaunga [I don't feel like leaving u alone Geet I have a strange feeling that if I go away from u I won't be able to see u again]

Geet placed her hand on his mouth and stopped him immediately

Geet: Ye kya anapshanap bol rahe hai aap? [What nonsense is this Maan?]

Geet: Dubara aisa kabhi mat kahiyega aapko meri kasam hai [Don't u dare to say any such stuff again I give u my swear]

Maan saw traces of tear drops on her cheeks; he kissed them away and caressed her cheeks lovingly

Maan: Achha baba nahi kahunga par tumhare bagair ek hafta kaisa rahunga tumhi batau? [Okay I won't do this again but tell me how am I supposed to stay away from u for 1 week?]

Geet hugged him tight

Geet: Jab bhi yaad aaye aakhein bannd kar lijiyega aap apni Geet ko muskurata hua apne dil ke kareeb paayenge [Whenever u miss me just close ur eyes u will see ur Geet in your heart]

Maan: Geet tum mujhe miss karogi? [Will u miss me Geet?]

Geet: Aapka naam Geet ki saason mein hai Maan main jab bhi saas lungi aapki khushboo mujhe mehkayegi toh main aapko kaise miss kar sakthi hoon? [Ur name is imprinted in every breath of mine Maan; whenever I will breathe ur fragrance will beautify my soul how can I miss u when u r so close to me?]

Maan was rendered speechless

He hugged her and crushed her lovingly in his loving folds

Geet didn't want Maan to cancel his trip due to her hence she was trying to cheer him up

Geet: Maan chaliye hum milke aapka bag pack karte hai aur phir ye decide karte hai ke iss ek hafte mein hum kais eek dusre k touch mein rahenge [Common Maan lets pack ur bags and let us make plans how we will stay in touch in this coming week]

She pulled Maan with full authority and both of them entered Maan's room

PRECAP: Maan leaves for London but'😲 😭 🤢

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Part 18: Page 110

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
i m fearing 4 d day when they will know about d bet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Short update kyu diya...???

But it was superb... I loved maan...

Specially those lines... They were awesum...

Umm.. so we are near that twist.. jo park me bola tha...

U knw I still remember our talks in that park.. hehe...

U were going gaga and I was listning... 😆

I miss u... Sooo much...

Waiting for Next part egarly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for update
loved it cont soon
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me waiting for twist !! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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