MAANEET FF Ek Main hoon aur Ek Tu#2 LINK#3 pg134 - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
I just love tis possessive maan 😳. Geet Karan dance nice song selection
Rocking part. Love it
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Great writing as always PiYa! Keep it up!

***"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point of passion that unhinges my soul." ~Julie de Lespinasse ***


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Loved how maan was J
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.


love-Piya


PART 16

Maan captured Geet's lips into a punishing kiss and left her unsatisfied before it touched her soul

Her eyes and mind were full of questions but Maan was in no mood to answer; he simply scooped her in his arms and walked out from the party as he was scared to share his Geet with someone else…GEET WAS ONLY HIS AND TODAY HE WOULD PROVE THIS TO HER

Maan placed Geet in the car and without a moments delay he directed the car to Khurana Mansion

He ordered all his assistants and maids to leave the Mansion before he returns as today he wanted complete privacy

Geet had never seen Maan this angry in all the days that she had spent with him; infact he always replied to her calmly and showered her with a loving smile whenever she tried to irritate him

But tonight was different she could read a perfect blend of anger, passion, possessiveness and obsession mixed with traces of love and authority in his eyes

This lethal combination of emotions was making her nervous

None of them uttered a single word throughout the drive

After some time,

Khurana Mansion

Maan stopped his car and removed his seat belt with a mighty force that reflected his anger

He opened the door for Geet and without giving her any warning he carried her in his arms and for unknown reasons he kept her so close to his heart that Geet could actually count his heartbeats

The Mansion was empty as per Maan's orders

Maan started climbing the stairs as he walked to the direction of the bedroom

Geet was expecting him to enter her room but to her surprise or rather shock Maan entered his bedroom and kicked the door shut as soon as they went inside

The strength of his kick had so much power that unintentionally the lock of the door got jammed

Geet was scared not because she was in his room but the reason of her fear was Maan's anger

She trusted him to such an extent that she would never question him the reason why he had brought her to his room and that too in the dark hours of night

She kept on admiring him intently and waited for his next move

Maan opened the knob of his washroom and took Geet inside with determination

He placed her beneath the shower and without any hesitation he allowed the water to drain her completely by taking her in its cool folds

He held her hand and rubbed his fingers desperately on them in an attempt to remove al traces of Karan's touch from it

Geet was still confused and was trying to understand his actions

Maan was not in his wits at this moment he only knew one thing that Geet was his possession and only he could touch her body and her soul

He rubbed her hand so harshly that he harmed her unintentionally

Geet: Ahh…

This painful cry was the first thing that Geet had said after meeting Maan

Maan's heart started bleeding with this painful sigh of hers

Maan: Geet kya hua? Tum thik toh ho na? [Geet what happened? R u okay?]

He touched her face; her shoulders and her hand as if trying to ensure that his Geet is alright

Geet placed her hand on Maan's cheek and stopped him

Geet: Maan kya baat hai? Aap ko kis baat ka darr sata raha hai? [Maan what's wrong? What are u feeling so insecured?]

These words of Geet got the possessive Maan back his eyes emitted fire as he remembered how casually Karan had placed his hand on Geet's waist while dancing

He lifted her top and exposed her belly and started rubbing it aggressively once again as the water helped him in his mission of cleaning Geet from someone else's touch

Maan: Usne tumhe yaha chua tha main uske saare nishaan mitadunga…tum sirf meri ho sirf meri main tumhe kisi aur ke saath share nahi kar saktha [He touched u hereI will erase his touch permanently… u belong to me u r mine and I can't share u with anyone]

Geet understood the situation now; her heart felt at ease thinking that Maan was jealous coz of Karan and his simple confession that she belonged to him and he can't share her with anyone else gave a new life to her soul

But she had to make Maan realize that no one can ever dream to snatch her away from him and she had to be quick before his possessiveness reached the heights of craziness

Geet held Maan's shoulder and pushed him slightly creating some sort of distance between them

Maan was shocked with this action of Geet

Geet: Aapne APNI Geet ko Karan ke saath dance karte hue toh dekh liya par ek baar bhi aapne uski aakhon mein jhakne ki koshish nahi ki jo ke baar baar APNE Maan ke aane ki raah tak rahi thi [U could see ur Geet dancing with Karan but how did u fail to notice her desperate eyes which were awaiting the arrival of HER Maan?]

Maan's heart got a soothing touch when he heard "YOUR GEET" from her mouth

Geet: Aapne party mein apni Geet ko kiss karke ye toh bata diya ke wo aapki kya lagti hai par aapne uske sile hue hotho ko nahi dekha jo ke taras rahi thi aapke hotho par ek aisi mauhar lagane ke liye jo ke aapko batade ke aap Geet ke liye kitne anmol ho [U kissed ur Geet at the party and declared ur authority on her but u failed to notice her lips that were dying to return ur gift by kissing u again and thus making u realize how precious u r for her]

They were still standing beneath the shower and were completely drenched from head to toe as Geet continued

Geet: Aapne itne haq se mujhe apni baho mein kaid kar sabse dur kar diya main eek baar bhi aapse koi sawal nahi kiya kya ab bhi aap nahi samaj paaye ke aap Geet ki zindagi ho? Kya koi apni zindagi se kabhi bhi dur jaa saktha hai? [U took me away from the whole world by scooping me in ur arms did u ever think why didn't I oppose u? Was it so difficult to understand that Geet considers u as her life? How can I go away from my own life?]

Maan stood there without any movement as he tried to touch the depth of her emotions

Geet: Aap jaante bhi hai aapki aihmeyat meri zindagi mein kya hai? Aap wo pehle aur aakhiri insaan hai jisse Geet ne khud ko chune ka haq diya hai [Maan do u realize what importance do u hold in my life? U r the first and the last man who has the authority to touch and claim Geet]

Maan was rendered speechless with Geet's confession

Geet: Mere haatho se Karan ki chap hatane ke bajaye agar aap apne haq ka mauhar uspar lagate toh shayad meri khushi ko ek nayi manzil mil jaati….par lagta hai aap mujhpar apna haq nahi samajte issiliye itne insecured feel kar rahe hai…shayad aapki zindagi mein meri koi aihmeyat nahi mujhe chale jaana chahiye aapki zindagi se [Instead of removing the traces of Karan's touch from my hand if u would have beautified me by claiming me as urs my happiness would have touched another level but it seems u don't consider me as a part of u that's the reason of ur insecurity it would be better if I want away from ur life as I am not an integral part of ur soul]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s6fv0B8X-G4

Music

Geet started walking away from Maan but Maan was quick he held her hand with a strange dominance

Geet tried to release his grip as she was hurt by his behavior but Maan was in no mood to let his heartbeats move away from his heart

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu

Zara sa apna le bana

Zara sa khwabo mein saja tu

Zara sa yaado mein basa

Maan pulled Geet towards himself; she twirled in a rhythmic tune and landed in his arms

Their lips were very close and the water from the shower was igniting the correct dose of heat and fire that a passionate couple like them required at the moment

Geet tried to escape from his folds by hitting his chest with her soft fits trying to express her anger and pain

Main chahu tujhko meri jaan bepana

Fida hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepana

Every time Geet tried to show her fake displeasure Maan brought her closer and cocconed her completely in his warm embrace

He tugged a lock of her hair behind her ear and kissed her forehead with a beautiful emotion that melted Geet's heart within a matter of seconds

Few pearl drops made way through her eyes as she expressed the pain of her heart one last time

Maan drank her tears by licking them through his tongue and caressed her wet back with an undying dose of love that was enough to tell Geet that she was what his heart desired

Woo o…ooo

Maan caressed her face lovingly and Geet submitted her existence to his name by giving him a divine hug that could not be explained in words but whose purity and intensity could only be felt

They crushed each other in this hug as they allowed their hands to feel one another by moving it up and down and in several directions throughout each other's body

Her nip***s hardened as Maan decorated her nape with a series of wet open mouth kisses

She allowed her hands to travel beneath his shirt as she left a pleasurable mark on his back by scratching and digging her nails on it

She moaned as he teased the hollow lying in between her colar bones and used it as a path to travel to her soft rosy petals that were meant to be loved and claimed only by him

Without any reluctance she herself captured his desperate lips within the territory of her lips as both of them redefined the beauty of a simple kiss by adding a mesmerizing touch of divinity that marked the submission of two souls in it

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu

Zara sa apna le bana

Zara sa khwabo mein saja tu

Zara sa yaado mein basa

They tasted and claimed all the secret crevices of one another's mouth through this kiss and continued to increase the passion and intensity of this moment as if declaring to the world that they could die in each other's arms but would never think of parting ways atleast not in this lifetime

Lack of air forced them to end their liplock

He kissed her eyes and once again cocconed her safely in his protective arms

Music

Maan held her hand and decorated her arm with gentle innocent kisses which touched her soul and made her realize that she was his possession

He went on his knees and lifted her kurti and beautified her serene form by gifting her countless tokens of love in the form of soul searing kisses exactly at the place where few moments back out of anger he had rubbed his fingers throughout the canvas of her belly aggressively thus giving her an undesirable dose of pain

She entangled her fingers in his hair and brought him closer as he teased her belly button

Her heart wanted to shed all the inhibitions between them today; she was least bothered about the relationship that they shared nor was she concerned if there was a necessity to give a name to this strange bond that was connecting them; she only knew that she was ready to submit her heart; her soul and her complete self to this man whom she knew was hers…

She let out a moan and pulled him up thus expressing her desires

Main tere main tere kadmo mein rakh du ye jahah

Mera ishq deewanagi

Maan understood that maybe his Geet was still in the pretext that he was angry as she allowed herself to be touched by Karan and thus as a flow of emotion she was giving him the authority that a girl would only bestow on her husband

He lifted her face and requested her to look into his eyes by holding her chin

Hai nahi hai nahi aashiq koi mujhsa tera

Tu mere liye bandagii

She saw an ocean of unexpressed feelings in his eyes which conveyed the respect that he held in his heart for her perfectly

He held both her hands and kissed them tenderly and went ahead to lift her royally in his arms all over again and carried her out of the washroom as he realized that his stupidity could cost her heavily as she might fell sick

He placed her on her feet and got a towel and went ahead to wipe the traces of water from her wet form

Main chahu tujhko meri jaan bepana

Fida hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepana

Geet admired him with utmost love and respect

Every touch of his was making her feel pure there was no element of lust involved in his touch

He placed his hand on her shoulder and guided her to the giant bed; he made her to sit on it and himself bowed down and started wiping the water drops from her legs

Woo o…ooo

She drank her saliva as Maan started moving in an upward direction…she was waiting for his touch on her feminine secrets which would make her feel proud of being a woman whom he desired

Her wet form and his burning urge to make her his were slowly forcing him to cross the boundaries of this unwanted distance

He wanted to caresss her; love her and make her realize that she is the owner of his wildest imagination as well has his innocent dreams

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu

Zara sa apna le bana

Zara sa khwabo mein saja tu

Zara sa yaado mein basa

He might have proceeded ahead but somewhere deep in his heart he worshipped her and he knew he would never do anything that might harm her dignity

He got up and placed the towel completely on her front body and walked away from her


Music

Maan tried opening the door of his bedroom but the lock was jam packed and hence he couldn't find a way out

After thinking for a while Maan opened his wardrobe and removed one of his shirts and requested Geet to wear it

He hesitated for a second as he thought that Geet might be reluctant to change her dress in front of him

He once again tried to open the door by kicking and hitting it with all his might but all his attempts were in vain

Keh bhi de keh bhi de

Dil mein tere jo hai chupa

Khwaish hai jo teri

Geet stopped him by holding his hand and requested him that he need not go anywhere

She switched off the lights and opened the curtains of the window slightly so that the serene light of moon could disperse in the room

Maan turned his face to the other side and his gaze got transfixed on the shadow of his innocent seductress

Rakh nahi rakh nahi parda koi mujhse ae jaan

Kar le tu mera yakeen

Geet closed her eyes one last time and allowed her dress to slip through her satin soft skin

Maan gulped his saliva as Geet's shadow made him her slave within no time

The bulge of her curves; her lean and long wais; her attractive curvaceous body and her slim legs were making his throat dry with a thirst that only she could satisfy

Main chahu tujhko meri jaan bepana

Fida hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepana

He didn't allow his eyes to blink as he relished every secret of her mesmerizing beauty through her shadow with the help of his eyes

Geet moved in a side position and started buttoning her shirt and this simple action of hers was looking like a magical spell due to the wave like motion of her bre***s

Maan tightened his fits as he wanted to keep a check on his emotions

She was his he knew that and he had to prove how special she was by caressing her with love and not lust

Woo o…ooo

Geet switched on the lights and gave Maan a back hug

Maan turned and faced his angel with a soul searing smile

He noticed that the first two buttons of Geet's shirt were open..he pressed his lips on her forehead and forced her to get captivated in his touch

Geet started breathing heavily as Maan's fingers trailed to her chest and accidently touched the bulge of her soft curves

She moaned his name as Maan buttoned her shirt carefully

She hugged him tight as she didn't want him to go away from her even for a second

Maan scooped her in his arms and led her to the masterbed and like a delicate and beautiful flower he placed her on the bed

This was the first time any girl was sharing a bed with Maan and his heart jumped and danced with joy when he realized the truth that the girl was none other than his Geet

He got up for a second and Geet stopped him once again but Maan made his intentions clear that it was important that he too removed his shirt as it was wet

Geet kept her eyes wide open as Maan removed the irritating material from his body and wiped the traces of water from his perfectly toned abs

A shy smile made way to his face as he saw his angel admiring him continuously

She extended her hand and requested him to once again take her in his warm shield of love and protection

He held her hand and placed a sweet wet kiss on it forcing Geet to blush profusely

He slid besides Geet and she placed her head on his bare chest hugging him with all her love to which Maan reciprocated beautifully by bringing her closer

They did not speak nor did they move from their position but tonight they wrote another chapter of their love story with the feathers of the moonlight…

Their heart and soul declared that no one can ever come between their relationship be it an individual or the feeling of lust…

THEIR RELATIONSHIP WAS ETERNAL AND TODAY DESTINY HAD SUCCESSFULLY INTRODUCED THE ELEMENT OF TRUST IN IT…

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
so cool...well done buddy...nice writting...keep it up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the portrayal of pure love...
Geet finally made Maan realise that pure love is not about obsessing but possesing...how others think about me doesn't matter but you feelings do...
awesome expression...
i guess the bet infomation will be out...Geet has lost and Maan has won but I hope he doesn't end up loosing it all...

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