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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for updating...

i was so much waiting for this update/... As always it was brilliant...

the outburst of emotions from both Maan and Geet were totally justified...

For Maan, HOPE was closely related to him and Geet... but she is totally unaware of the fact... and yes he was angry.. coz he has just realized his new found love for her and got back in all excitement to start a new life with all hopes and "HOPE" was missing...

On the other side Geet sold out her first painting to get her dream house... ofcourse it was not easy for her to sell of her first creation... but she did it for her dream and was unaware of its connectivity with Maan.. And when he expressed his anger, it added more pain to the turmoil she was going through thinking over her relation with Maan...

Both of them lost it and that was completely understandable and justified... i totally loved the way you portrayed the whole thing... it was just too goo...

Once again thanks for the update... and i cant wait for them to talk over the issue... as how much ever vibrant they were over HOPE, they surely did always understand each others views...

continue soon... would be eagerly waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
it had to happen at a point...n it did...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
bth arent understanding d odr
bth r fighting d fear of loosing d odr!!

bt thankfully d precap is optimistic

luking fwd 2 ur nxt updt eagerly
plz updt asap!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome di...
totally fantastic...
loved the way you have portrayed all the POV...
maan was all happy because he wants to see her glowing face but what he found after reaching there...
all he knew that HOPE is the one thing which led thier relationship... he found HOPE as the part of his life and after not finding it, he lost his temper and all over that house's topic... he lost all his sense and blurt out everything... though he was concerned and felt hurt for not approaching him for the money and she sold HOPE but she was also passed away from the very critical situation...
it was her first creation... her dream and she sold her first dream for her another dream... she also felt hurt, she was passing through a difficult condition and over this now...
please do something now...
both are right at thier own place...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing one di...
when i read the first line of the poem i knew it was written none other than piya...Beautiful poem...
"Hope" bears such an important part in maaneet's life..
when maan lost it he felt that geet was snatched away from him..
her insecurities that have been building these days came as painful words from her side...
i think they should start to love each other truly..not with the help of hope...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
both did not think wat they are syaing in anger n rage.. hope tat everything gets cleared
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Posted: 13 years ago
THAT WAS AMAZING
GENIUS !
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it .👏
They both are right but me too dont like Geet selling her HOPE...
do cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
beautifully described the pain, insecurity of geet's and this out burst is needed for geet and maan and maaneet and their relationship
maan's feelings also well described
their fighting may be it's needed
both r unaware of each other emotions
now they will try to understand each other
precap is interesting
continue soon

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