marriage no murder is guD (MG)pt 17/pg135 nov23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mel420
that was my comment for you prologue that you have lost it😆
No jokes apart I can' t wait for yhe first part it sounds great
hope geet gets the job sorry Maan😆

yes you can hope

but you know na who is writer😉

so its not difficult to guess

who gets the job

geet

me is😕

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

omg!maan ne ye kya kar di...
phatti hui jeans and geet!!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
omg!maan ne ye kya kar di...
phatti hui jeans and geet!!😆

yahi toh

yeh aaj kal ke bacche

omg😆

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Thanks for the PM

The prologue is interesting

Waiting for the story to unfold

😃

Waise this is different😉

Maan ne Geet ko pakad ne badle giraya

Kahin geet ke daant na toote hon😆

Continue soon

😛

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: heytal
Thanks for the PM
The prologue is interesting
Waiting for the story to unfold
😃

Waise this is different😉
Maan ne Geet ko pakad ne badle giraya
Kahin geet ke daant na toote hon😆

Continue soon
😛

yes this can be happen

let me think

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Teju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

😆 Tittle is so funny!!! Nice one. Loved it.

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
😆 Tittle is so funny!!! Nice one. Loved it.

just title

what about prologue

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sweetysaran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

nice start...

do continue..

thanks for the pm...

Edited by sweetysaran - 13 years ago

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Dei_Gratia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awesome pro...buddy!!!
So first of all tera title hi dhasu hai,i loved it...hehehe
N pro to pucho mat...startin ko laga 'geet train k piche bhag rahi hai...n maan is in train' u kno ddlj wala scene,bt tune to meri hatayi kardi...
Sach mein yaar kya bataye bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha *sigh*...ab hum bhi kya kare,humare jaise bhale log thodi na milte hai sabko hai na???...lol
Sacchi mein i loved pro alott!!!
R u writin any other stry????
Thanx fr d pm...
Btw mujhe kaha se dhundha????
Egrly waitin fr nxt part

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: gargi12
awesome pro...buddy!!!
So first of all tera title hi dhasu hai,i loved it...hehehe
N pro to pucho mat...startin ko laga 'geet train k piche bhag rahi hai...n maan is in train' u kno ddlj wala scene,bt tune to meri hatayi kardi...
Sach mein yaar kya bataye bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha *sigh*...ab hum bhi kya kare,humare jaise bhale log thodi na milte hai sabko hai na???...lol
Sacchi mein i loved pro alott!!!
R u writin any other stry????
Thanx fr d pm...
Btw mujhe kaha se dhundha????
Egrly waitin fr nxt part

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