dosti mein deewangi- prt18/pg135/3 MAY - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
wow yaar
suprbb start
lvly updt
lvd it,,,,

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

beautiful update...

loved it...

so entry ho gaye humarein hero aur heroine k...dekhte hai mulakat kaise hote hai...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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for writing on maaneet ... pm mee too dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nyc update... Geet n Maan's entry is superb...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
ab plz maaneet ko ek dusre se jaldi mila do
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dosti mein deewangi 2.


RECAP-

Prem- hy dued n hugs maan…

Maan- hyyy………………. Hws today??

Prem- hmmm…. 20 sec less…. Thn ystrday yr.. new record…

Maan- hmm.. dekha.. I told u… maan singh khurana never late… got it…

Prem- voo toh hai yr… nw lets go.. varna u knw

Maan- yupp sure.. chalooo…

They both were going to class nd were in corridor.. at time maan has a tap on his shoulder..

Kriya- maan… maan bite his tongue n turn back…. Kriya stands with crossed arms with her 1 eye brow up…

Maan- hy babe.. hws u???? n hugs her

Kriya- dued… again.. I mean vts going????

Maan- relax babe… kya hua… don't hyper yaar.. vrna wrinkles+ pimples a jayenge… kriya strt getting involve in maan's word.. 4m back maan gave a hi5 to prem… prem pinch to kriya to tell her nt to come in chikni chupdi baate of maan…

Kriya- auuuchhh… n see prem who was telling her n saying no no… with his eyes.. thts it kriya came back to real n hit maan on his arm..

Maan…. I .. I hate u.. tm na kabhi nahi sudharne vaale…. Aj tmhe kha tha jaldi an and also pick me up.. bt as alwz u r late. Nw ab hm practice kaise karenge??

Maan- ufff babes… jst chill… sab ho jayenge… u don't worry…

Sweety n geet reached clg… n were running upstairs fastly..😃

Sweety- chalo di.. jaldi karo..

Geet- aree a rahi hu… as she was running fast her dupatta cought in her feets n she was abt to fall………. Bt she manages her balance n stands properly bt her books fell 4m her hands on the ground….

(stinna- kya socha tha???? Hmare maan g ayege nd geet ko apni bahon mei le lenge.. nd mahiii… u r wrong lolzzz..)😭😆😆

One boy came nd picks her books 4 geet..

Boy- here u go.. take it n give geet her books..

Geet- ohh thnkss…

Boy- btw.. vts name of beautiful girl??? Boy strt flirting… N gave his hand 4 hand shake… geet was abt to shook his hand when………

When sweety came nd shook her hand with full strength… actually hurting him…

Jhansi ki rani.. sunlia.. kaise lga naam????? Sweety says…

Sweety- oyeee… sade huyr aam ki chilgoze.. apni ye bateein band kr aur futt yha se…nw go 4m here.. if ever I see u around my di… dn soch lena.. vaise sochne k layak nahi chodugi…

Geet was pulling her with her arm nt to fight n lets go 4m there…. Chal sweety.. we r late… n drags sweety with her…

The bell rings.. tan tan tannn

All the stdts came into class.. lecture strts…

Dy were in b.com 2nd year.. lecture was abt… diff b/w macro nd micro economics….. subject matter of macro economics…..

All were pretended to listen the lecture.. no1 was interested in it… hw boring it is…

Soon the lecture came to end…. All the stdts take a deep breath…

Maan- oh god… thnkss yr ye gya.. vrna mera pta nai kya hota…

Kriya- hmmm… kuch to krna padega… nw no more lectures.

Maan- don't worry yr.. when maan is here no fear… n gave a smirk…

Both went to princi's room….princi ask them to come in….

Maan- sirr…. Dance fest is cmng…

Princi- yes… sooo vt u want??

Maan- vo sir, we r nt properly trained… so we need to do practice..

Princi- so do na…

Maan- bt sir vt abt classes???? Makes puppy face..

Prince- ohh tht…. U don't worry… u do ur practice.. n make our clg win…

Maan- okk sir… thnkuuu… n goes out.. all time kriya was silent spectator…

As they came out.. dy both give a hi5.. n laughs…

Kriya- ohh gosh!!!! Ab no lectures.. yepeeiii

Maan- hmmm…

In canteen… geet , sweety, rosy, karan, rohan were sitting on 1 table… n leaving 2 tables, maan, kriya, kritika, prem were sitting…. Karan's eyes were glued on kritika.. he was admring her… kritika knws this tht he is observing her… she jst took her 1 eye brow up… n karan stops admiring nd staring.. n they strt their talking…

Bt karan is karan.. he again kept seeing her with corner of his eyes…

Rohan notices tht… n here strts rohan's leg pulling…

Rohan- mje badi bhook lagi hai.. so sb kya khayege???? I'll order smthng.. u geet??

Geet- nopss… thnkuu

Sweety- hmm.. I'll have sm sandwich

Rosy- mere liye coffee bs..

Rohan- aur tu karan??? Karan gave no answer… as he was nt listening to them actually admiring his lady love….

Rohan- karan vt u will have???

Karan- haan… kuch bhi.. hw was lost.

Rohan- okk… vt abt chicken????

Karan- yaa okk…

All got shocked… karan nd chicken…

Geet- oyeee tu kb se non-veg khane lga???

Karan without listening gave ans….. kab se..

All shocked…. With questioning faces… vt???

Rohan- hy vt abt… flowers chatni???

Sweety- oyee ye konsi dish hai???

Rosy- ye karan ko kya hua????

Karan- yaa thts grt..

Geet wave her hand infront of karan's eyes… no change…

Rohan was giggling… nai yr… hmmm…. Hum kritika ko khate hai na???

Tht word kritika rang in karan's mind.. n he came back to his sences….

Geet- vt?????????? Kritika…

Karan- vt u saying rohan?????

Rohan- oyee romeo tera dhyaan kha tha??? Where was u????

Karan- right here… infront of u..

Sweety- oyee when u strt eating non veg???

Rosy- nd tht flower chatni????

Karan- who said m eating this???

Geet- right nw u said it…

Karan- nai tohh

Rohan- yess

Karan- nooo

All together- yesss

Karan- nooo

All- yess

Karan- nooo

All- nooo

Karan- yesss

Rohan- dekha ab khud hi bol dia na

Karan- no this is cheating…..

Rohan- aree yr cheating ka tb pta chalega jb tu apni heer ko takna band karega

(aree u will knw abt cheating when u stop admiring ur heer)

Sweety- ooo in a teasing tone… kya baat hai gg…. Heer n all….

Karan- aree kuch nai.. ye rohan hai… n hit his arm…

Rohan- ab mne kya kia??

Karan- vo to bs mn.. mn…

Geet- ohh.. karan u stammering????

Karan- nahiii….

Rosy- stop this yr… tu usse ja k bol de na..

Karan- kyaaa

Rohan- tht u love her

Karan- aisa kuch nahi hai yr… vo to bs…

Sweety- thik hai… ab tu usse ghurna bnd kr… aur khabrdaar agar usse dubara dekha toh… aur bta kya khayega???

Rohan- ab bechara kya kareg..

Karan- shutt up..

(st)- hshhh…. Jaan bachii

Prem- hy princi se baat ho gae???

Maan- yupp… make a cry baby face… vo prince said

Prem- kya vo nahi mana??? Kya kha??

Kriya was abt to say tht he agrees… bt maan pinch her hand.. n signal thru his eyes nt to say anything..

Maan- haan voo..

Kritika- mje pta tha… vo khadus nahi maanne vala… ab hme roz vo boring lectures sunne padege…

Maan jst nodded his head….

Kritika makes baby cry face.

Prem- chalo yr.. koi baat nahi… ab thodi si study karlo..

Kritika- ufff.. tm chup karo… tmhe to koi fark nahi padega… tm to fir achhe marks le loge, sadu ka lecture bhi sunloge.. n dance bhi krloge… mn kya karugi???? Hayee tt lecture…

Dreaminggg

Lecturer is giving lecture.. n she is sitting alone in the class… he is moving around her… 4m 1 it become 2 nd 3 nd dn 4 sir… they all surrounds kritika… telling continuously many questions… she is sitting holding her head… n saying no no … gonna faint type position…

She stands n screams nahiii… nooo..

Dream end..

She stands n scream nooo in the canteen…

Maan- kya hua????

Kriya- don't tell me again u r day dreaming???

Kritika jst nodded to yes… n maan gave her glass of water to drink..

Kriya- aree agar dream lene hai to apni dreamboy k le.. hmesha khadus lecturer k kyu leti hai…

Kritia- kuch nahiii…. With word dreamboy… she saw karan with corner of eyes.. who was seeing her n was worry bcz of her sudden scream.. n he was asking her with his eyes.. vt happen?????

Kritika signals him with her eyes nothinggg… n up n downs her eye lashes.. its all okkk.. n gave a smile…

Rohan saw this… he strt singing

Ankhen teri kitni haseen… k inka ashiq mn ban gya hooonnn…

Karan hears this n suddenly turn to see rohan n gave a angry glare to him…

Sweety- nt fair abi tune bola k tu usse nahi dekhaega.. n nw ankhon ankhon mn… hmmm

Kritika notices this n smiles n lil giggle..

Prem- ab kya hua??

Kritika- kuch nahiii… vo chod… kuch socho…

Maan- sochne ki kya zarurat hai vo chod… kuch socho…

Maan- sochne ki kya zarurat hai yr.. bs 4m 2moro get ready at 9… we will do dance practice..

Kritika- bt hw???? Prince??

Maan- vo kya bolega… usne hi to kha.. beta jao nd practice karo.. make clg win.. while saying this he stands n act like princi… nd kriya giggles…

Kriya- yppp… we r save.. bt have to practice as dance fest is also near na..

Prem- ohh thts cool… aur the to baa mn btauga… sidhe sidhe nahi bta sakta tha..

Maan- to the chidata kaise???

Prem- vo toh thik hai…. Bt the subah uthayega kaun???????

Maan- tuu.. aur kaun..

Prem- hunnn…. Mn kyuu

Maan- u r mu buddy yr…

Kritika- achha ab mn chalti hu…. Kl milte hai.. byee

Maan- byeee..

Kriya also goes… they say bye…

Prem- ab hm bhi chale????

Maan- nahi yr.. tu jaa.. mje kuch kaam hai.. mn baad mn aata hu

Prem- chal thik hai.. byee…

Maan says byee… n dy hugs eachother..

Rohan- oyee mn chala.. ayesha is waitinggg…

Geet- ab nw whose this??

Karan- uski aaj ki date aur kaun…

Rohan- hmm.. mere sath rehe rehte tu intelligent ho gya… kya baat hai

Rohan- okk byeee…..

Rosy stops him n tell him to take her with him dn drops her.. dy both goes 4m there….

Karan also goes home as he have sm work…

Sweety goes with karan… bt geet stays there

Sweety- chalo na..

Geet- nahi vo mje kuch kaam hai

Sweety- kisse milna hai.. teasing tone

Geet- shuttuppp… tu jaa.. mn thodi der mn a jaugi…

Sweety – thik hai… n kiss on her cheeks n goes…

Precap- maaneet dance????? Or geet dance?????

So frndss hws this part🥳????????????

Nw I did my work nw its ur turn to tell me hws it… do cmnt n let me knw hw u find the update… wait 4 nxt update…😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for late reply and me is d first..anyway awesome update and luvd sweety's awaaz to dat flirting boy when he starts to flirt with geet..luvd it dear aur karan ko sab log tease kiya...luvd it totally dear...🤗
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
love it
love sweety style😆
nd rohan teasing karan
waiting for maaneet dance
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
suprbbb updt
lv sweety style..😆
lvd it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
lovely update .
loved both the gangs & their masti ,especially Maan's
precap 😍

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