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Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

IMPORTANT NOTE- PLS READ


FIRST OF ALL I JUST WANT TO SAY THANX TO MY ALL SWEETIES FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND LOVE...


SECONDLY I WANT TO APOLOZISE FOR NOT REPLY PERSONALY TO EACH AND EVRYONE...
AND PLS ALSO FORGIVE ME FOR USING SHORT HAND COZ I M A MOBILE USER MY CAPASITY IS LIMITED THATS WHY I HAVE TO USE WORDS IN SHORT HAND...
I HOPE YOU ALL UNDERSTANDS MY PROPLEM...
AND ALSO I HOPE I DO WELL...
PLSSS GAVE ME YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT...:):)

THANK YOU:- RICHA KAPOOR

hey richa...np hun..
i luv to read that short hand writing...
eaggerly waiting for next updt..
i was shocked to see a note..i thought..oh my god..hope she is not saying that she won't updt for a while..lol...
do cont soon hun...
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glad geet enjoyng in d bday party...
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Superb prt...maan guikty for his actions...
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**LUST FOR REVANGE**

PART - 39


ALL d grls enjoyd alot,nd decided to play Truthand Dare.All agred. In KM Maan cm bak frm office nd wid his entry he showrd que rain on hs Dadi.


Maan:where is she?Wen she cm bak? Y she not cm bak yet?nd mor over y she nt tuk hr cell wid hr?


Dadi fed up wid hs enuiry.She asurd hm dat she is alrite,bt he gt impatient nt cing hr in KM. tension lines cvrd hs 4head nd d only thng he knew is hs desires 2 c hr in frnt of hm.


Maan:ok i brot hr bak,just tell me where she lived?


Dadima gv hm add. Maan moved bak 2 hs car nd drove 2 Natasha's house.In Natasha's mansion all girls r playing Truth&Dare. In 1st spin Annie caught nd choose dare. Devyani tld hr 2 immitate hr prof,nd she do very well,nd made evry1 brust in laugh. In nxt spin Aayushi caught,she too choose Dare. Natasha put 3 vass on hr head nd askd her to walk in whole hall widout dropping any1 of dem nd also wore 5inch heel. She strt walking bt as it was too heavy to carry all vasses on hr head she droped all at some distance nd fall on floor too. All vasses brokd. All make fun of hr and she pouts. In next turn Diya caught nd choose Truth.Annie:diya what is d rank of ur current boy frnd?Diya ws quite silent for sm sces. All were seeng hr blank face Devyani tapped hr arm.


Devyani:bolegi ya so gai?


Diya:wait 1st i finished my counting,den let uknow.


All amused nd laughed both.


Natasha:besharam shudhar ja.


Diya:ok finally done hs rank is 30.


All shook deir heads.Divyani spin d bottle again nd dis tim Geet bcm d targt of bottle.


Diya:bhabhi we dont gave u dare in dis condition so only truth option is left. Let me askd u. Bhabhi tell d name of ur first nd last love and also d most beautiful nd spl momnt u spend wid him.


Annie got angry wat she askd 2 hr,nd Geet hazld eyes bcm dizzy,remembring Dev nd all d moments she spend wid him. She remembersall d promises he made 2 her. Her pain bcm alive again.


Geet:Dev is my only love,nd d momnts i spend wid hm all r spl nd beautiful to me.fir chahe wo sath ghumna ho,ice cream khana ho,ghanto ek dusre me khoye bine bole sab kuch keh dena ho (Maan stopd outside hearing all dis. He was abot 2 entr in d hall,bt stoppd hearing hr confession nd sw d pain coz of it in hr eyes) 4 me Love means Dev. My lyf strts frm his name nd ends on his name.


She cnt take it anymore now,her heart bcm heavy wid past memories. She trying 2live only 4 deir baby. She burst cmpltly nd ran outside widout noticing him dere. Annie slapped on Diya's arm.


Annie:r u crazy,y u askd dis que2 bhabhi?


Diya:bt wats wrong in dat?


Annie:u stupid kitni koshish krte hai hm ki bhabhi Dev bhai ko bhul jaye.isliye main or Dadi unke samne Dev bhai ki koi bat nai krte or tune 1hi sec me puri mehnt pe pani fer dia.


Maan ran behind hr.Geet was in lawn.She falls on hr knees nd criying lyk hell.

Geet:y Dev?y u leave me alone?y u dnt tuk me wid urself.u promised me dat we live nd die 2gether.Den y u brokd ur promise.4wat reasn u leave me behind.i dnt want2 live widout u.

Her pain is cming in form of conti.dropping tears frm hr innocent eyes. Maan ws standing behind hr.fr d first time he felt welterd. D same tears whch makes hm happier,2dy pierced in hs heart lyk a sharp arrow.He cnt able 2resist dis.Hs fists tighten at his helplessnes. She is disperced cmpltly nd wen he cant able to stand dis nymore he cm in frnt of hr nd made hr stand on hr feet. She ws nt in hrslf.


Maan:Geet...


Dnt know wat 2 sy.Geet hugged hm instantly nd buried hr face in hs hardend chest. She dnt stop crying.Maan embraced hr tightly.


Maan eyes wet 2bt he cntrl nd thot:pls Geet dont cry,meri wajah se pehe hi tm bahut aansu bha chuki ho ab main tume or rota hua nai dekh skta.pls Geet is tarh rokr mera gunah or mt badao.


Maan:Geet pls stop crying,its nt gud 4 u in dis conditn.

She cm bk 2 hr snces nd tryng 2 stp bt nt easy4 hr. Annie nd hr all frnds cm 2 hr nd apolozise hr.


Natasha:sorry bhabhi,pls 4gv us all.


Maan.its ok. Annie we r alredy late lets go bak hom.nd yes leave ur car nd cm wid me. Drivr pickup in d mrng.


Annie nodded nd follwed dem. Geet sat lyk a dead body hvng no courage 2 live hr lyf. She rested hr head on door,tears rolling on hr cheeks. Maan drove bak 2 KM.wen dey reched she ws alrdy slept.


Annie:bhai shud i awaked hr?

Maan:no i'll tuk hr u go.


Annie nodded nd went inside. Maan scooped hr nd moved 2 deir rum. He placed hr on a bed gently,removd hr duptta nd footwears,so she cn sleep comfrtly. He cvrd hr nd caress hr head. Her face luks soo cute nd innocent bt dull nd pale too. He went 2 change. He cm baknd stand in widow,luk d stars sparkled in sky. Wind is oozing madly. His thot stroam made hm awaked. He blankly saw evrywhere & tryng 2 cm out of his thots bt as much he tries he gt involved mor.


Maan:Dev today i really felt jealous of u.How could u do dis 2 her? Agar itna pyar koi mujhse karta to uske liye mai maut se b ladd jata..



DEAR FRNDS HERE IS YOUR ANOTHER UPDATE AS U DEMANDED:)
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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"Dev today i really felt jealous of u.How could u do dis 2 her? Agar itna pyar koi mujhse karta to uske liye mai maut se b ladd jata"
Such a emotional update. This line said it all, maan's helplessness his love that is growing in his heart for geet, his guilt and his jealousy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear...
really moved with the geet pain
hope now maan realizes his love towards to geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...beautiful updt...totally rocking...

luvd this line most: r. "Dev today i really felt jealous of u.How could u do dis 2 her? Agar itna pyar koi mujhse karta to uske liye mai maut se b ladd jata"

loadz of hugs for u richa...amazing updt..<3333
thanks for pm...do cont soon..
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love love love it sooo much😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice part
loved it
at the last maan's word to dev is cherry on the cake
continue soon

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