Pt17/18'Cursed to love'thrd12 Pg36/94 - Page 78

Wow..,ur lines were so beautiful...awesome update..di..

Bye partner me off to bed...

bye partner Aniee b nahi aaye
😔

bye gals
me off to bed now
GN SWD
and build a new home for us ok

hiii

Awesome update dr,
my poor maan, what he did that bad to deserve this,
do continue soon.

Originally posted by: PariNain

First time I am scared to comment. no Infact I am speechless. All my thought shattered. I dont knw what to comment. My brain stopped thinking and I am thinking If I am reacting like this wat Maan will b feeling right now????? If I am feeling so helpless on his grief How will he manage to survive????? If I am unable to bear the pain how he is going to handle it????
I am not able to comment u knw wat I have been thinking to edit my comment since morning but failed to Edit it, And now I am editing it and I dont knw wat I am writing. I am not in right state of mind. I am feeling the same pain he goes through. But I knw its an other lie no one can feel the pain he went through. Its very easy to say it to someone that I can understand ur pain but Its very difficult to feel that pain. even I can't do that. Its a saying
Jiss tan laagay so Tan jaanay
Why Vidya's curse was so powerful????? Why his mere mistake end his life????? Why Did Her curse worked???? Why Did he has to go through a lot of pain just to knw wat love is??? and most importantly why he has to fell in love with a such a heartless person like Geet???? why????? why???? I knw he did wrong with Vidya???? I knw Vidya is smwhre right???? but that does not mean that he has to go through immense pain????? That does not mean he has to lead a lifeless life. that does not mean he has to leave her to knw abt the pain Vidya went through???? Does it mean?????
I knw I am going far but I cant control myself. I cant handle his pain. I knw smwhere he is wrong but still I cant see him in pain. But he has to. I cant say that Geet is a heartless person. I knw its not her mistake. Its becoze of that curse she is behaving like this. But how can she b so cruel???? Cant she see the pain in his eyes???? cant she Feel how helpless is he???? Cant she understand his misery????
and Maan wat he will do now??? she asked her to forget her. Wat will b his decision?????
he is just like Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi. I think Nadeem saab went through the same pain of his. So he wrote these lines
Jab tera hukam milla tarak mohabbat kar de
Dil magar iss baat pay woh dahka k qayaamat kar de
Mein tu samjha tha k lout aatay hein jaanay walay
tu ne jaa kar tu judai meri qissmat kar de

He left her on her own command but now I am thinking how will she survive??? will she b able to forget him???? Will she b able to put him away frm her life??? Her heart???? Becoze I knw smwhere deep she is feeling smthng for him but dont aware of it. I hope she understand it soon.
I was searching my old diaries and found this poem. I think it suits Maan's situation
so here it is for u and for Maan

aye mere dill aaj jee bhar k ro le
Aaj jee bhar k apnay payar ka matam kar le
aaj uss k chehray ko apni aankhon mein bhar le
keh phir mere dil
teri qismat mein judai hy
Aaj ke baad
teri meri qissmat mein tanhai hy
Aaj k baad
iss chehray ko hum daikh na sakein gaye
aaj k baad
iss chehray ko hum chah na sakein gaye
keh aaj k baad
meray dil hamein hukm e judai hy
aaj k baad hamein phirna ban k sudai hy
keh meray Dil yeh hukam hy uska
ke usko bhool jaaein hum
woh jissay zindagi se barh k chaha tha
ussay bhool jaaein hum
na sochein uss k baaray mein
uski yaadon ko dil se mita dein hum
ke yeh hukam hy uska
par meray dil
mein tujhay jaanta hoon
tu kabhi usko bhula na sakay ga
tu uski yaad mita na sakay ga
woh Dhakan ban k tujh mein dhakay ga
tu usko milnay to tarsay ga
magar aye meray dil tu dehaan rakhna
ke ab woh teray liye aisa Devta hy
tu jiski Pooja tu kar sakta hy
par
ussay hasil nahi kar sakta
aye meray dil tu dehaan rakhna

and Aniee wat shld I say abt ur writing. I knw u r curious to knw abt my views and I told u I will comment tomorrow. U knw why becoze I was speechless. i never get a hint wat are u planning to update when u called me but now I knw u are unpredictable. Not sure wat u have stored for us. but I love this devil side of urs. Thanks for giving us such a wonderful update. and devil u, U again left us on cliff hanger. He met an accident. oh no. we want update today itself. Did u get it we want update.
Devil Aniee We want update
I knw this comment is not like my previous ones but after reading the update how can one remain cheerful???? so tolerate with it, Sorry if u found it boring. I am really sorry.
one more
Chand meray
tu beshak mujh se baat na kar
chahat ka izhar na kar
mujh se itna payar na kr
mujhko apna dildar na kar
dil ko meray gham mein
beqraar na kar
Ishq beshak ikhtayar na kar
Chand meray tu beshak mera Aitbaar na kar
Mein tu tujh se payar karoon
chahat ka izhar karoon
Ishq ko ikhtayar karoon
chand meray
mein tu teray saath jeeon
mein tu teray sath maroon
chand meray
tera saya ban k rahoon
chand meray
mein tu tujh say payar karoon
chand meray
chand meray