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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting... waiting... waiting... waiting... waiting...
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Definitely updating today guys...
Very sorry for having the status as updating nd still didn't updated.
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Originally posted by: sukklover

update...😳

keep ing dear...😃
Happy Diwali to all of u Dears...
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Originally posted by: kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

DARJI SUPPORTED GEET AND WAS ANGRY FOR ALL THE PAIN SHE HAS FACED

GEET IS ANGRY WITH MAAN
HOW WILL HE MANAOFY HER




Yes he was angry at the fact that she had to go through all this but not at her
lets see wat he does
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Thank u so much for liking the previous update and commenting. A new Character is introduce as Dr. Aarman, he will also be a part of this FF from now on.

Here is the next part...Enjoy!!!

-Unforgettable Memories Part 36-

The next morning Maan went to Sanjeevni hospital to see Dar Ji, and when he went in he was already awake and a new Dr. with Kiran was checking him.

"Kiran" Maan said getting their attention.

Kiran- Maan tum is waqt yeah

Maan- wo I came to see Dar Ji, how is he now.

"Dr, Armaan" Kiran said gesturing the new Dr. to tell Maan the report of Dar Ji...

"So there is nothing much to worry about na" Maan asked after hearing the full report.

Kiran- Maan Dar Ji aab bilkul theek hai, just avoid giving him any stress or tension.

Maan- hmm, can I meet him

Kiran- I see no reason for u to not meet him.

Maan- thanks

Kiran smiles and says "anytime, chale Dr. Armaan"

Dr.A- sure Dr. Kiran" once they were out of room Maan went and sat next to Dar Ji and held his hand in his making Dar Ji look at him. "Maan beta" Dar Ji said seeing his moist eyes.

Maan- I am sorry Dar Ji, Plz forgive me, I never meant to hurt u like this. I am sorry plz mujhe maff kar dijye

DJ- Maan beta plz don't say sorry, in fact I am thankful to u for reveling this truth to us, if u hadn't told us this tu we would have never came to learn about it, aur mere dono bache aise zindagi jeete jo main kabhi sapne bhi nahi soch sakta, I know why they both hid this from me, but they both forgot ke aise chote hadse tu har kisi ke zindagi main hoti hai but duniya walon ke daar se hum zindagi tu nahi jee sakte na, but they did, just coz she didn't wanted anyone to point finger at us she didn't told us.

"Dar Ji, I can understand her POV, but itni choti si batoon ko aise dil pe wo kaise le sakti hai, how could she make herself like a stone heart, the first time WHEN I saw her she was just like a baby, just like my Khushi, filled with naughtiness, mischievous, par aab, I can't see her like this Dar Ji, I can't" Maan said not thinking what he was saying but Dar Ji just looked at him in shock as he knew MSK never cares about anyone else other than HIS Family, but here seeing his care for Geet made him speechless and happy too. "Beta acha laga aap ko meri beti ke liye itna padishan deakh kar" Dar Ji said wiping his tears that rested on his lashes. Maan immediately looked away thinking what has he just said, and why, but then once again he said sorry to him and left from there. As he left Kiran walked in the room with moist eyes, lost in his words, thinking does he love Geet, or its just he cares for her. She comes back out of her thought hearing the door open. She quickly wipes her moist eyes and turns to see who it was and saw Geet and Brij there. Geet straight goes to Dar Ji and hugs him, while Brij talked with Kiran.

Kiran- Mr. Brij, he is fine now, but I will still suggest u to keep him here till 1 more day, u can take him tomorrow.

Brij- theek hai Kiran ji we'll keep Dar Ji here for another day" Kiran left after checking on the monitors once again, leaving the three there.

"beta aab bhi ghar wapus nahi chali gi" Dar Ji asked Geet breaking the silence. "Chalungi Dar Ji, zaror chalungi, when I know u are with me then now there is nothing to fear now, so there is not point of staying away from my family na dar Ji" Geet said.

"Aur teri Study ka kya" Brij asked trying to lighten their mood.

"Wo bhi complete kar lungi" Geet said and Brij came and hugged her

...

"Mama kya kar rahe ho aap" Khushi asked Geet seeing her put her clothes in a hand bag.

Geet- Beta hum apni bag pack kar rahi.

Khushi- Mama kahi ja rahe ho aap phir se

Geet took a deep breath and then kept the clothes aside and made Khushi sit on the bed and she sat facing her, then she cupped her face in her hand and said "beta I am going back home"

"but ur at ur home na" asked Khushi making a confused face.

Geet- No beta this is not my house, I am going to my Mama house

"Tu u will again leave ur Khushi and go" Khushi said with chocked voice.

Geet- Beta I know u think me as ur mother, but beta sach ye hai ke I am not ur mother, main aap ki Mama nahi hoon, aap ki Mama tu koi aur hai" as soon as Geet said those word Khushi jerked her hand away from her face harshly while tears rolled down her eyes, which were now red and she cried saying between her sob "Jhot bolti ho aap, Dadda...said...me...U...U...aaa...are...my...Mama... aap...Khushi...se...pyar...nahi...karti, Koi...khushi...se...pyar...nahi...karta" saying that she ran to her room and locked herself in. While Geet kept on knocking on her door telling her to open the door,, even when everyone else tried telling her to open the door still she didn't, and after a while her sobbing also died making the other more worried, when they couldn't get her to open the door Dadima finally called Maan and told her about Khushi, He and Dev straight way came from Office...

"Dadima" Maan said helplessly getting no response from Khushi. "Khushi Beta look Dadda here, plz open the door na, plz bacha Dadda need u plzzz" Maan said as he fell on on his knees. banging on the door.

"Bahi I think we have to break and open the door." Dev said, to which Maan nodded and they both pushed on the door and when the knob on the door got loosen it flew open. Maan and Geet heart ached in pain seeing Khushi lay on the bed hugging a frame and could tell it was of Geet, and was sobbing breathlessly, Maan ran to her and took her in his embrace crying. "NT get me a glass of water now" Maan said, and then eyed everyone else to leave the room. Everyone left except Geet, who stood at the door seeing Khushi and Maan both in tears, Maan didn't said her anything seeing her still there, ignoring her, Maan made Khushi lay on the bed and he himself laid beside her. Geet came in and sat at the edge of the bed as Maan creased her back trying to calm her. NT came with glass of water and then she also left from there. Maan made Khushi drink the water and once she was little calm he took her in his lap and said "what happened Bacha, why u crying"

Khushi-Mama...leaving...Dadda...Mama...Khushi...ko...chod...ke...ja...rahi...she...said...

she...is...not...my...Mama...Dadda...she...is...lying...na...Dadda...tell...her...na...to...not...go...

Khushi...don't...want...Mama...to...go...Khushi..Khushi..want...her...Mama...with her...Dada" hearing that Maan instantly looked at Geet angrily, to which Geet just looked at him feeling sorry and guilty. "Beta Dadda is here na, hmmm" Maan said.

Khushi- but...Khushi...wants...Mama...too.

Maan- beta chalo sleep for a while, hmm

Khushi- Khushi...wants...Mama...Dadda...don't...let...her...leave...Khushi...Dadda...don'...Dadda don't" Hearing Khushi plea a sob escaped from Geet who instantly covered her mouth and left the room. Maan somehow putted Khushi to sleep, and then he left to Geet room, but when he went to her room he found her crying too in Rano lap. He knocked on the door, getting their attention. Geet quickly stood up wiping her tears and said "I am sorry Maan, I" before she could continue Maan stops her showing his hand, seeing the tension between then Rano left from their giving them space to talk...

"Maan plz try to understand, it would be harder for her to understand I am not her mother later on, I am sorry but I can't stay back" Geet said.

Maan- Geet plz just for few days, plz I can't see my baby like this, plz I will make her understand, just for few days.

Geet- Maan aap samajh kar na samjhi wali batein kyun kar rahe hai, aap bhi jante ho ke agar is bar main ruk gai tu Khushi ke liye aur bhi mushkil hogi is sach ko mane main ke I am not her mother, plz don't stop me" Saying that she left from their but stopped and turn back to see Maan pale face and said "Maan I think it's time now you should tell Khushi about her real mother" Just as those words left from her mouth, anger once again roused in him, and angrily he walked toward her and held her by her shoulder digging his nails in her skin "What did u just says Geet" Maan said gritting his teeth. "Maan chodiye hamein, ur hurting me" Geet said and then after few efforts Maan lets her go and turns facing his back, trying to cool his anger.

Geet- Maan aap samajhte kyun nahi hai a child needs a mother, ek baap chaha kar bhi ek bache ke zindagi main ma ki kami kabhi nahi pura kar sakta, wo lakh kosish kar le baap ke saath saath Ma banne ka par ek bache ki zindagi main Ma ki kami ko kabhi puri nahi kar sakta" Geet places her hand over his shoulder and says "Maan Khushi ko ek Ma chiye aur aap ko...aap ko ek humsafar ki zarorat hai, aap ne kabhi notice kari hai ke bhi nahi par Dadi aap ko le kar bauth padishan rah ti hai, App ke aur Khushi ke Ma ke beech kya huwa mujhe nahi pata, par iska ye matlab tu nahi ke aap apni zindagi is tarha berang kar le aur Khushi ko Ma ki mamta se dor karde..." just as those word escaped her lips Maan turns around and holds her by her shoulder roughly again and says "do you even know what you are saying, hun, how could I trust another women and put my Khushi life in danger when HER OWN MOTHER WANTED TO KILL HER" Geet eyes widen in shocked after hearing what he just said she just stood there staring at him, Maan shook her roughly again and says " how could I trust another women and think that she will love my Khushi just like her own child, when Her own mother didn't wanted her in first place, how could I Geet how could I trust someone else, when SAMEERA was going to kill my baby Geet, she was going to abort my Khushi, she was going to snatch my Khushi, my life from me Geet," tear escaped from both of their eyes, Maan dig his nail on her arm in pain and said "you tell me Geet how many kids, who have a stepmother are happy and living a good life, none Geet none, these women only cares about their own child and not someone else, they only want their child happiness not someone's else, koi bhi aurat kisi aur ke bache ko nahi apna sakti use sirf aur sirf apne bache se pyar hota hai aur dosre ke bache ko wo ek naukar se zidya kuch aur nahi samajh ti, aur ye jante huwe how could I let my Khushi live a life like this by marrying a women who will not love her like her own child, how can I put my Khushi life on stack just because Dadi think that I need a humsafar and Khushi need a mother, no Geet I don't need anyone in my life, nor in my Khushi life samjhi tum, mujhe kisi humsafar ki zarorat nahi aur nahi meri Khushi ko kisi ki, main akela hi uske liye kafi hoon"(No offence to anyone, sorry if hurt anyone) He pushed her back harshly making her fumble and left the room in anger, while Geet just stood there still trying to grasp his word "wo meri Khushi ko marna chaha ti thi, wo aisa kaise kar sakti hai, koi apne bache ko kaise mar sakta hai, kaise" Geet said as she falls on floor and her eyes fell on Khushi picture that was kept on the side table, Geet goes and pick the pic and holds it near her heart.

Precap:MR.Bajaj- Hello Mr. Khurana
Maan- Hello and shook hand with him
Mr.Bajab- Meet my daughter SAMEERA


It my request to all the silent reader who read my FF to at least press the like button if u don't want to comment. I want and hope this time I get 115+ likes and more comments, so HOPEFULLY the silent readers will step up and press the like button, or else I will not update till I get it. Sorry if I sound rude or mean but guys ur likes and comment are the only motivation i have to continue my FF...

Plz leave ur view on this update, and do tell me if I should just go with this way or not.

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Here is Part 36

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Edited by Mariam94 - 12 years ago
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updated der😊
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nice part
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continue soon

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