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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice part...wounder who'll rescue geet...continue soon
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Awesome dear.Loved it to the core.
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part 12
nice part...
poor Geet...
here Sameera is mistaken...
poor her...
cont soon dear...
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Brillent update

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superb update
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PART-13

'CH CH CH...wrong step miss handa or is must say mrs tratior"

"you think i am that stupid, wrong wrong wrong..."

"that sameera!! why she has to poke her nose in everything, i think i have to remind her what she is"

"Mrs rano handa is calling someone interesting...!!!"

"i want to know whom is calling and where they are meeting..."

he signaled his assistant.

"oh, mrs rano handa is making some plan against the devil...ahahaha.."

"i wonder what will be her consequence "

and he got up from his seat and started revolving it,

"geet you were my lust, but now you will be object of my game.."

"hahahaha..."

and reached near wall and started touching the photo, a tear escaped from his eyes..!!!

yes from devil's eyes,

"i will win this game, i own is world...hahaha.."

"i promise"

and left this dark room where he was seeing all the video of hospital

he was smriking

"you thought i am that stupid Mrs handa, that i will leave geet like this only, now she is mine, my eyes follow her like her shadow.."

he picked his mobile and dialled some numbers

"i want all family history of handa, every every minute detail of them, do you get it.."

and switched of his mobile...

he was moving towards the main hall, when someone bumped to him, it was sameera

he roughly pushed her to the ground, she got hurt

"you are very fond of poking you nose in everything na, now you will clean the whole mansion, i am whole, including servant quarters on your own..and your time starts now.."

sameera felt very insulted, these word broke her heart like anything, she was women of self respect and with these word she was deeply hurt, tears made their way

"wipe that thing from your face and start your work"

sameera quietly went away to follow the order of living devil...

meanwhile maan went to his study as he has to do some work...

...

Rano reached the pace and started finding the person. she saw the person and ran to him and hugged him.

person- kya huin rano dee

rano- brij bhaiya my geet, my geet is in danger

brij- geet ko kya huin

rano expalined everything, brij's anger reached its peak

brij- mein nahi chodhun ga ussko

rano- bhiaya samjhiya, this time is not for anger, but to save geet

brij clamed down little bit

brij- bol mujhe kya karna hain

rano explained everything to him

...

maan was doing his work, when he heard a a knock

"yes come in"

"sir, i was calling you but your phone was switched off"

"you came to tell me this"


"no sir, actually, MRs rano handa is planning to send geet handa away, with her brother.

"and they are on the way to the hospital"

maan anger reached the peak, he quickly put on his waist coat and said

"alert the body guard present their in hospital, they should not reached near geet also"

"yes sir"

maan quickly took the car's key and went to hospital

...

rano and brij reached the hospital, they were going towards geet's room, when some man some them

brij- what the hell, why are you stopping our way

bodyguard- sorry sir, your boss gave us orders

brij- who boss

when they heard

"me"

they quickly turned back

rano- yehi hain brij

brij- daariya mat dee

brij moved towards maan and held his collar

brij- what is your problem, you devil...

maan- wrong step mr brij handa, i thought you are intelligent, but i was wrong,this mistake which you have comitted have to beared my your children

brij quickly left his collar

brij- bache, where is my children??

maan- till now they are ok, but...

brij- you must be joking

maan- you forgot, devil never joke

he dialled some number and put it in loudspeaker

all heard the cry of children

brij- mera bache

he quickly touched his feet

brij- please mera bache ko chodh do

maan- i will, but uska liya, you have to leave now, i mean now, and never come back to help your sister and her family

brij was i confusion, one side his family, another side his sister, he saw towards rano

rano signaled him to go, he asked her forgiveness and went away..

maan went near rano

maan- you actually thought, i will leave geet like this ...wrong wrong

rano – you devil, monster

maan smriked- i loved my names

maan ordered- take geet to KH

rano – no no, you will not do this

maan- an who will stop me

rano- i am enough

maan- hahaha, what a joke

geet was sleeping and was not knowing what was happening

she was taken to KH

rano was left back, she was crying and crying

she ran after their car, but no use

when she felt hands on her shoulder, she was shocked to see the person

...

next- who is the person??

geet in devil's den

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yupiee😊
I m first to comment...😊
SUPERB UPDATE!!!!!
felt bad for sameera and rano...
why does maan can't accept dat he loves geet..its not lust... hope he accepts and repent to his deeds soon...
wanna knw who is dat person????
plzz update the nxt part soon... will be waiting eagerly...
Edited by 26_chaitra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the way you give update
i mean quick
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part 13
OMG hes s devil alright...
but who is the person in that pic?
poor Geet and Rano...
cont soon dear...

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