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Posted: 12 years ago

frnds priyanka(doublecross) is nt feeling well so she wont be updating for few more days..

so pls wait for her till then...
nd she'll be back wid her dhamakedar updates soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey r u updating any soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@doublecross: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lets get naughty with Chapter 10









Geet was reeling under what Maan had just said, ; "spend the night, in bed" she whispered, murmured.

Maan was lying down on her bed and busy noting the cute adorable expressions of his super sweet fiance. To bring her out of her shocked state he simply went near Geet and whispered in his sexy baritone voice " yes, why not have some fun before marriage"

"fun!!!!!!!!" Geet shrieked, "are you out of your mind! I still cannot fathom why you are here, dad is still in his study, daijaan is reading her holy book and you in my room, I just cannot handle it, Maan please leave. Please don't add to my miseries."

With that she turned around only to bump into his sleek sexy hard chest. Maan held her close to himself pressing her to his body. "Geet I thought of fun and I have something planned, See I got you champagne".

Champagne just reminded her of their last date and how both had got lost in passion. Her eyes became big, as if they'll pop out of their sockets. She shivered at the images of her last date with Maan. She mentally chided herself "god, why did you had to make my fiance so simmering hot". With that she pushed him apart with all her will power, " no am not interested in any of your lewd plans" Geet replied decisively. Maan raised his eyebrows and smirked, with that he started moving towards Geet. With each step Geet moved a step back. He had now a weapon in hand, the champagne bottle. Maan's eyes twinkled with mischief and his lips had tweaked into its usual style. He was thoroughly enjoying the spectacle in front of his eyes. "don't run from me Geet" he whispered. To this Geet just gulped her saliva and stepped back and moved her head from side to side. " ok if you don't wanna come, I'll have my fun" with that he strode towards her with a lions grace not breaking eye contact, he brushed past Geet until he reached the music system in Geet's room.

His behavior was actually confusing Geet, she was unable to understand as to what was going on in his mind. When she saw him approaching her, the ferality in his walk and the burning gaze that held her captive and transfixed to her place was all so unnerving. Even then she couldn't help but mentally chided " gosh! Maan Khurana you are such a devil, why do I always lose my composure and be vulnerable around you, this has to stop, you have to be strong Geet" she mentally scolded herself. She had closed her eyes shut when she felt Maan near her. His proximity was hard to handle, she could feel his musk perfume, his breath falling on her face, yet he was not making nay move. Her brows furrowed in confusion and just when she was about to open her hazels to pore over her handsome would be hubby she felt a brush of his arm against her soft skin. It tingled her from head to toe, "now may be" she chanted mentally bracing herself up for the sweet sexy onslaught that her devilish fiance must have planned for her, yet she felt no move, no advance from Maan, "oh, this man's such a tease" she jibeb. Her reverie was broken when she felt a sweet soft melodious song being played in the backdrop. Instinctively she opened her eyes only to find Maan seated with his legs crossed on the ottoman in her room pouring himself a drink, smirking in full glory with the expression "gotcha!" plastered on his face with the song, "wait a minute, what song! Oh no! the song Nahi nahi abhi nahi being played in the backdrop, arghhh! This man's such a tease!" she stood there watching perplexed, confused, flustered.

Maan was enjoying the view in front of him, he raised his glass and gestured towards Geet to come and sit beside him. " come on Geet you can atleast come and sit beside me here" he beckoned Geet to come and sit beside him in the adjoining ottoman across to where he was seated now.

Geet didn't know as what she should do now and th song was actually defining her helpnessness so aptly. As if on trance she moved towards the ottoman and in no time was perced precariously on the edge eyeing Maan nervously anticipating anxiously as to what his next move would be.

"Here Geet, take this, give me some company , you know nah how much I love your company" with that his voice dropped to a deadly sexy whisper and he licked his lips. Geet averted her gaze, she couldn't continue looking into his eyes.

As if on command the song changed , and this time it was another romantic number, "bahon mein chale aao" now crooned on the player.

The room now held an air of sexual tension, it was charged up and heated in the sizzle and chemistry between these two.

Geet was now a captive, held captive by those two hypnotic chocolate brown eyes

They were boring into her,she was simmering, burning within, the intesity was such.

The next moment saw a spectacle, thay the stars and moon became witness to

Two exquisitely beautiful figures were standing against each other, looking into each other's eyes

Drowning into each other, they moved towards each other. Maan pulled geet into his arms and whispered close "dance with me sweetheart"

With that he swiftly turned geet in his embrace bringing her close, skin to skin rubbing against each other, making geet aware of his hard taut muscles. She shivered squirmed at the growing proximity but her heart was giving away to the impending temptation. The song matched the situation so did the two exquisite creatures who were waltzing along the song slowly soaking in each other as much as possible. Their bodies touched teased rubbed a dangerously against each other. Maan pecked geet on numerous ocassions unable to hold himself, sometimes on her cheeks, on her collarbone while sometimes on her ears making her ware of his condition.

And each time his sinful lips touched her, she got lost in his touch, his lips felt soft warm and his kisses were urgent hungry as if biting into her skin marking her as his own. This continued for a while. They both had lost track of time and it no longer mattered to any of them that they were actually in geet's room while soft seductive songs crooned on the player.

Their trance was broken with a sudden pounding on the door.

Geet instantly seperated from Maan and looked startled as always. Maan too looked flustered, instantly he checked the clock hanging on one of the walls in Geet's room "3.30am, its been so long" he murmured.

Though he had come in to irritate Geet but he never intended to stay so long, his intention was of fun and to trouble hi sweet cute fiance but his prank went overboard and he was now stuck in her rooma at 3.30 am.

His thoughts were broken when he found geet pacing up and down in her own room cursing her luck and scolding him " Maan why do you always put me in a fix, see now what you have done, I told you to go way but no you are a daredevila and you always have to do things that are out of the box, aha! I know why that's because you are Mr. stud! The great, Maan Singh Khurana, ohh sooo hot, so cool or perfect! Now what am I supposed to do?" Geet went into her self blabbering mode when Maan pulled her up close and shut her up "chip bilkul chup! I have created the mess and now am gonna clean it up' with that he grabbed her for a quick kiss which left geet dumbfounded and her eyes seemed like they are gonna pop out. Maan pushed geet towards the door where daijaan stood flummoxed outside while she could hear music being played inside and soft murmurs. Maan stood beside the door and implored geet to open. Slowly bur reluctantly Geet opened the door where daijaan stood. Geet looked at her white faced "WHAT HAPPENED GEET HAVEN'T YOU SLEPT YET?" daijaan asked Geet, "I heard voices and soft music, was anyone here with you?" she went on. Geet who was still trying to gain composure got a hold of herself and replied "no, no, there isn't anyone over here daijaan, probably you heard wrong and about the music, you know how much I had missed old hindi film songs when in abroad, so there was a lot of catching up to do, hence I thought maybe lets listen to some old songs" Daijaan was standing out all the while pushed her way in as she felt the explainations that geet gave were not so convincing and she sensed that something was definately wrong.

Geet tried her best to stop daijaan but all her efforts went in vain. When daijaan looked behind the door, geet simply closed her eyesand turned to save herself of the embarassment that the very next moment she was face but to her surprise daijaan simply came and placed her hand on her shoulders and said " Geet its late, I know you love talking to Maan all the time but so late in the night, beta he too must be having work, so I think now its time tyo switch off your phones and go yo bed, take rest and you need to have ample of sleep or else you'll get dark circles around your eyes just before your wedding" with that she left Geet's room. Geet was still unable to understand as to how had Maan escaped when her eyes darted to the open window from where cool wind was blowing, she instinctively went there only to find Maan standing under one of the pine trees and waving her a goodbye, she waved back and gave him a flying kiss which was caught by Maan. She smiled and went back to bed awaiting the arrival of a new day.

I have tried my best while writing this update;. just let me know whether you find it interesting enough. Your comments and likes are of immense value to me. I know i have updated really late but for the past few days i had not been keeping well and one after another bout of ailment attacked leaving me all frail and ailing. Am still recuperating and this is my attempt o keep my ff alive. I hope you all will like it and i'll be back with the next part real soon and its a pucca wala promise. Till then chow!

Happy new year to all!!!!!!!!!

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update and pm...
nice update..
and happy new year to u too...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

thanks for the update and pm...
nice update..
and happy new year to u too...😊



pleasure's all mine
happy new year once again
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetie25

so romantic loved it



glad you liked it
any suggestions for the nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Maan's passionate teasing of Geet
Nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update dear...

Awesomly wrtten..

I could imagine Maan's naughtiness and Geet's messed up condition due to him..

But he fixed it...

He came to tease her but himself lost in her
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply amazing.loved it
take care of ur health dear

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