maneet-ss strangely in love.pt9 pg115/136.oct 8

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

@valli22: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

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sridevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

read all the 9 parts. started with lot of happiness in geet family but later geet last every thing. there is lot of pain for maan too.

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Fariha12364

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Awesome story.read all part.plz add me your pm list

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Waiting eagerly...

Plzzz update de do dear...

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

hii valli di..!!!

🤗

OKk...straight coming to the point...me chose this ff of urs...me gonna read it and will give comment 4 each of them.

Okk...1...2...3...

GO...!!😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Part-1

OMG...i loved it so much...ur potrate about a middle class daily life is so beautiful...i never had read ur solo writing...but me now totally blown away...!!!

the wallet part was so nice...my papa to gives me 100/- note if i give him changes...10/- or 5/-😆it's kinda my earning...😆but it hurts somewhere to see he had no money to fill fuel.😔..but its reality na..??

Last part made me goosebumps...i hope geet's papa is ok...i am having a bad feeling about that bike riding...🤔

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Part-2

Aaauuu...!!

This maan is crazy...!!!😲

Scary entry di...that girl was evil i admit..but maan is supper crazy...
bap re baap...it's like walking into a hungry loin's cage.🤢

Me scared of this Maan..😔

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Part-3

aww...u bad girl...u made me cry totally...!!!

Geet gone through a dreadful past...!!!She was a pampered baby...and in fraction of a second she had to become the man of the family...the reality u've shown is really beautifully true.

An Awesome writer u r babes...!!!I've read ur ''IL''...but that was a join venture...but this SOLO style on u rocks...!!!!

Hatts offf...i wish i could write like u...🤔

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

Part-4

Maan met her 3times and he was constantly trying to figure her out...but bad timing and baaad luck i guess...!

Maan likes her i think...thats y he was trying to think good about him.

Nice part.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Part-5

What was that...!!!😲

I felt so amazed reading this part...this society is a filthy place...i think this ff is not only about maan and geet but also about the cheap mentality of these faltu people...i am feeling so...i don't know what i'm feeling but defo it's sad...😔

Thanx for writing the reality...not any fantasy.

Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago