Pyar Ki ManZil..Part 12 in Page 82 - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for next nyc teaser
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Posted: 11 years ago
haii vanshi i love love at 1st sight concepts soo much
here it was soo fast for geet my 1st os My Honey bee is also depends on that only

maaneet meeting was too good yaar loved it soo much the dance hayee and he each charter in this story are my fav
specially Virmaan and sanaya and her love woww
maaneet meetings and there car rides alone ahaa what's the matter
you became soo romantic yarro lol
well geet already fell for him and maan also but not fully
you made me scare with Wahi's entry i thought he is kabab mai haddi BW maaneet thanks god isa nahi hua

love gang teasing for geet but only geet maan ko bhi isa hona hi tha
i must say it waiting for it also

it was really cute story the way of your narration everything was perfect

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Posted: 11 years ago
love maaneet golgape wali scenes and there stupid cute fights also
well ek song sequence honi chahiye ab really waiting for that

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi just read all the parts nw! Loved it! Awesum cs! Fab updates! Geet totally in luv wid MSK! He seems attarcted to her! update soon! Pls add me to ur pm list! Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry To Make U all Wait...

Will update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-11

Geet takes maan hands in with her shivering hands to which both felt strangely better'

Geet :

The moment I think about you

i go to another world

A world where you love me too
And where I can never be hurt

The truth is I don't know what to say

My mind goes completely blank

I have never in my life lost my way

But my heart with your love simply sank

My mind always telling me to let you go

But my heart is always sayin "I Luv u"

This heart really rules my mind

And tat is why I can't stop Dis feeling inside


For moment both lost in world of their dreamland . each n every word geet spoked oozed her love her loyalty n truth which felt a sweet song tho the listeners mainly maan.

Geet was looking directly in maan's eyes while saying these lines. Each and every word she was saying was from her heart.

Geet: Maan i love you. From when and how i started to luv you i myself dunno. Meri har saans main tum baste ho maan. Ye geet to bs Maan ki hai. Will you be mine forever maan..??

Maan: Yes..!! Geet...i'll be yours forever...i love you geet...i love you too.

Everbody clapped for them...

Rishi: U know tum dono ka act bahut original tha...lg hi nai rha tha ki tum dono dare kar rae ho..

Geet So Wished That It All Could Happen For real. Where as Maan Felt A new Feeling building up. Maan Thought its just a game n so its all happening

With dis He shrugged off

Rohan Just wished that this could happen for real once.

Indu: Yes..!! Guyss...

Rohan: Chalo now spin the bottle again...

Bottle was spinned and it stopped facing maan

Geet: So maan...truth or dare or double dare...

Maan: Dare

Geet: Ok maan so you have to sing tum hi ho song from aashiqui 2

Maan: Ok..

Maan started singing...

Hmmm

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge

Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa


While singing these lines he moved towards geet. You can say he just got a name For his feelings...and asked her hand for a dance...to which geet obliged and gave her hand happily As she waited this to happen from the day she realized her love.

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Both were dancing while looking into each other's eyes and were lost in each other forgetting the surroundings...They could Feel The love. Maan Just Watched Her as she was too Close to him.


Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

Taking advantage of the dim light..maan pulled geet towards himself..he claimed her waist tightly his lips closer to geet's and his hot breath was fanning on her lips...n geet's lips were shivering...maan brought his lips more closer...

Precap: Chuma chuma de de ;)


I hope i have justified With the update as a comeback.

I have changed it as SS. N i know My sorry would not accepted. But i proise this story from now on would be updated regurlarly

This Update Is actually written by My Pihu (PARI_MISHTY).

So all The credit Goes to her. I have written very few lines😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
confession in dare song fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
itna chota sa update
but no problem
for once i forget geet was doing dare, how much i wish ye sach hota
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Posted: 11 years ago
short but cute update vanshi
n hayelaa really maan will kiss her kya
waiting for next

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