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Posted: 13 years ago
any chance for an update today????😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts
loved them
finally maan realized geet's imp and his love for geet
but his lack of trust ruin everything in past
I don't understand geet's father here
how could he
it's beyond my imagination
ruin his own daughter's life
and maan lack of trust broken geet complete
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sasu

this is a copy of a mils and boon story. atleast u should give credit to the author who wrote the story, its a shame copying the story and not giving credit


yes it is
n i did mention it is fm a book i read in d prologue.. its mills n boons
"sinful truths"
Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved ur ff..
read all parts in 1 goo...
Awesome work..
plzzz add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 30

Maan

By d tym I ran out.. she was out of sight!! I knew she needed time 4 herself. She had to face a hell lot of truths 2de!!

"daddy!!"

The pleasure tht coursed thru my body was beyond description!! Yes I had accepted maahi as geet's daughter bt knowing tht she was my own was like a dream cm true!! Bt wid tht came d guilt..

Of not being der during geet's pregnancy, nt being able to feel her kick in d womb, nt being der during her birth, nt being d first one to hold her, to c her tk her first step, to hear her first word.. I had missed it all..

I took her in my arms n hugged her tight.. nd it wsan't until she wiped my tears did I realize tht I had been crying..

"wht happened? Wer's maa?"

Hw was I to answer her..

"umm. She's gone out.."

"without telling me? Is she angry wid me..?"

"no honey.. hw can she b angry wid u?"

"just like u got angry n left us?"

Shocked by her words, I wondered if she had heard d all tht had happened here!!

"no maahi.. she'll b bk soon, after all she cant stay away fm u!!"

Knowing geet, she'd nvr leave maahi alone n wud b bk soon.. so I hoped..!!

We smhw got thru d day.. geet hadn't taken nythng wid her.. I was worried bt cud hardly do nythng abt it. i put maahi to sleep after checking on bauji.. as much as I detested his past actions, he was geet's father.. n thus in her absence my responsibility n i cud nt leave a sick, dying man alone!!

Sitting beside maahi, watching her sleep.. I cud only brood over the past'. I realized hw wrong I had been, hw much I had been at fault!! Evrythng tht seemed ryt bk den seemed ridiculous nw.. I knew geet was drunk bt never bothered to find out hw n why.. bt den she was in d company of her childhood frnd n her father.. I d nvr imagined in my wildest dreams tht dey'd plot smthng like dis!! Bt I was at fault for nt trusting her!!

N maahi.. she is my lucky charm whom I failed to recognize.. d news of her arrival in dis world co-incided wid KC getting adi's help..!! bt I instead of rejoicing on dis dual occasion.. I forced geet 2 choose btwn our baby n me.. thankfully geet had chosen our baby coz nthng cud absolve me fm d crime of being d cause of my own child's death!! The mere thot of it scared me nw bt bk den I had bcm heartless!! Oh god.. wht had I done?!!

Today I knew no amt of tai chi or ny physical injury cud save me from d pain n guilt of my actions!! N d one who cud.. had left to seek her own solace..!!

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dnt know if Geet will forgive maan or not... she is betrayed by he love ones which is
very unforgivable...let see the next part outcome..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww nice..
mein tho senti ho gayi
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Posted: 13 years ago
How much regret would be too much for maan?
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mind blowing 👏 wen wil be next prt
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touching part...
atleast maan realized his faults...
But wat geet went thru was beyond ds pain ...

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