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PART 29

Geet was very happy on the turns of events in the party. She now was sure enough tat her closeness with Dev was troubling Maan and her plan was on the right track. She could sense his anger, love and passion for her the way he danced with her thinking tat she was with Dev. Though she knew tat she was wrong in this but she did not have any other option to bring Maan back from his so called guilt. She could see him burning with this guilt and it killed her every second to see her love, her life , her husband, her Maan dying each second.

Geet (ST): Jaanthi hoon ki hum galat hain Maan, par sach manaye humare paas aur koi rashta nahi tha. Hum jaanthe hain ki aap kitna bhi naraz ho par aap, aapki Geet ko kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakthe. Nahi dekh sakte ki aapki mishty ko koi haath bhi lagaye. M really Sorry Maan. Aaj aapne sabhit kar diya ki, aap humse aaj bhi ushi shidhant se pyar karte hain jaise kiya karte the. Aaj bhi aapke aankho mein wahi gussa hota hain jab koi aur humari taraf dekhta bhi hain tho. Hum maanthe hain ki hum aapki ish kamzori ka fayda le rahe hain par aapne humare liye aur koi option hi nahi choda. Hum kaise appko har din ish dard mein jeene de sakthe hain. kaise aapko ish guilt mein rehne de jab humne kabhi bhi appko galat nahi mana. Pata nahi aap kaise react karenge jab aaoko ish natak ka sach pata chalega, par hum yeh bhi jaanthe hai ki aap shayad hume samjh paye ki humne yeh sab kyu kiya. Ish baar maan lijiyega Maan, warna aapki Geet haar jayegi, humare pyar mein haar jayegi.

( I know tat m wrong, but believe me tat I did not have any other way out. I also know tat even if u are angry u cant see your geet with anyone else. u cant see tat anyone else touches ur mishty. Today u proved Maan tat u still love me with the same passion u used to. Even today I can see the same anger whenever someone else sees me. I know tat m taking advantage about this but I didn't have any other option. How can I see u living with this pain, how can I let u live with the guilt when I don't blame u. I don't know how will u react when u will learn the truth about this drama but I still have hope tat this time u will understand me. Believe me this time Maan or else ur geet will lose in her love. she will lose in her love.)

Geet still was unsure about her plan though she had already started the game but will she be able to succeed, will Maan understand her this type. He slowly went inside the washroom forgetting to lock the door in her trance. She still could feel Maan's touch on her and traced her fingers wherever Maan had touched her. She slowly got rid of her smelly gown later freeing herself with her lat piece of clothes. She was highly aroused with the mere sensations and stood under the shower to cool down her erotic heartbeats making herself to understand tat still there was time to get Maan's love for her. She closed her eyes just imaging Maan feeling her with her soft touches filled with his love and passion.

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Maan was smiling to himself remembering the close dance and moments with Geet. It brought a peace to his heart. He reached his room, took the towel, and went inside the washroom that Geet was using. She had forgotten to lock the door in a hurry. As soon as Maan entered the washroom he was stunned with the view of Geet fully drenched nude body. He froze seeing her while Geet to stood rooted to her spot seeing her husband staring at her nude body. She did not know wat was happening all of sudden, as she had not even planned it. Maan in a trance moved closer to Geet making himself wet. Geet could see the lustful desire and passion in his eyes that burned her all wet form. Maan holds Geet by her bare waist and smacked his rough hungry lips on her soft petals making her to flinch in pain and pleasure while the water poured on the two lovebirds.

Geet was all shocked and numbed with his sudden move and she could not fathom wat was going on but soon felt him increasing the pressure on her lips making her lips too bleed a bit with his love bite asking her to give his tongue the needed entry into her sweet flavored mouth. She moaned with the pleasure of kiss while Maan took the opportunity to enter into her mouth playing with her. Geet felt heaven with his possessed kiss making her lose all her senses for him and slowly she pulled him more towards herself making him more crazy. Get found her hands slowly moving towards her shirt buttons and in one move she ripped it leaving him bare chested. Geet could feel the warmth from his body even though they were soaked with all cold water. Maan was busying kissing her while his hands found her upper body treasures which belonged only to him and started massaging them with all love and pleasure making her vulnerable with his sweet tortures. Maan was busying kneading her b****** with his large palm making her to moan in pleasure and pain. He soon pushed her on the near by wall while he hovered her wet body with his own. He kissed her with all his passion and left her after wat seems like eternity but his lips did not leave her body. While Geet was panting heavenly for air his hands were playing with her chest rising up and down. His lips traveled down her nape to collarbone giving her bites with his teeth marking her as his all-whole life. Geet could not take his tortures anymore and dug her nails into his skin while her teeth bit him to control her screams. His mouth followed the line of her cleavage and soon feasted on her beautiful curves capturing one hard bud with his mouth while the other being kneaded. He sucked her as long as he felt he was satisfied. He gave the same attention to her while Geet was in her own world of ecstasy. Maan's hands traveled down her body finding her hidden parts and entered her with his fingers making her to arch herself with the sudden thrust of his fingers. Geet could not bear it and pulls him more closer making him go wild with his thrust. She was overwhelmed with pleasure and feeling him so close to her after wat looked liked ages.

Maan was so much engrossed in loving her tat he did not know anything else but when he felt her hands on his belt which had already unbuckled it he shot opened his eyes and was shocked to see him so close near her. he soon withdrew his fingers from her core and separated their bodies while Geet still had her eyes closed. She felt the warmth missing and opened her eyes only to see Maan with his back towards her. She moved to touch him but before she could touch him he stormed out of the washroom leaving her rejected and dishearten Geet. Unknown tears made her way through her wet cheeks making her weak and she fell down on her knees crying out her pain and longing for him. She cried out loudly but her cries were unreachable to Maan due to the running shower.
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Maan was filled with anger, anguish and hatred for himself. He did not know why and how does he loose his all control near her. How could he forget the sins he did. How could he forget tat he had tortured his angel to death where she had lost everything in her life. He was ready to suffer but he could not understand why still she affects him when he had closed his heart with his guilt and sins. He wanted to destroy himself to such an extent tat no one could save him. He did not deserve her and her love. A monster like him did not deserve a pure angel like her. He broke the mirror in his room with his bare hand making the glass pieces to pierce his skin making it to bleed heavily. Geet came running out of the washroom fully dressed only to see her Maan bleeding. It pricked her heart and she ran to him holding his hand. As soon as Maan feels her hand on his he pushed her roughly making her to fall on the floor.

Maan: this is wat you wanted na Geet. Are you happy now.

Geet: Maan' and she gets up on her legs..
Maan: stop it Geet. Why don't you say tat you feel good to see me getting weak in front of you. Why don't you say tat you feel good to see when you find me tat I cant resist you. why don't you say tat you like seeing me punishing myself after coming close to you.
Geet: Maan.. how can i.. It kills me to see you distancing from me. Than how can I be happy?

Maan: than why don't you let me leave you forever geet. Why don't you let me live with my guilt. Why don't you let me suffer for my deeds? Why don't you let me to punish myself for killing you and the baby. Why geet why.

Geet: how can I Maan. How can I let you die every second due to your guilt? How can I let my Maan to suffer for his unintentional deeds? How can I let my Maan suffer when he was not wrong? How can I let my baby's father to punish himself when he never killed his baby? How can I Maan.

Maan: nothing can change Geet. Why don't you believe tat I killed our baby. Why don't you believe tat I don't deserve your love. Why don't you believe tat this Maan does not deserve an angel like you. Why don't you believe tat your Maan is a monster who has destroyed his angel. Why don't you punish this monster Geet.

Geet: Punish, don't you remember Maan tat you had given me enough punishment for no reasons. Don't you remember me screaming out each time tat I was not at fault? Don't you remember tat I was crying endlessly for your love. don't you remember me carving for your one soothing touch. Don't you think tat it was enough of our suffering. Don't you think tat our relation had enough of sufferings. Than why do you want me to go back in the same darkness, when you, yourself fought for me. You say na Maan tat you love me more than anything than how can you let your love to suffer for no reasons. How can you push me again Maan. Why don't you understand Maan tat your behavior is pushing me once again in the same darkness. Why don't you understand this simple thing Maan. Why.

Maan: Coz m a sinner. Coz I don't deserve you.
Geet: Derserve, who the hell are you to decide Maan. Wasn't it enough of your decision which led us here. How may more decisions you will take Maan. You decided tat I was the culprit so you married me for punishing me. You decided tat you don't need to ask me whether m wrong or right. You decided wat my punishment would be. You decided tat the baby breathing inside my womb was not your blood. You decided tat I had to live with you through out my life with the burden tat my own love does not believe me. You decided wat would my fate be and see now Maan wat your decisions have done. Do you see tat the Geet you knew is alive or not. Can you see the innocent Geet anymore whom you fell in love for the very first sight. Can you see your mishty smiling Maan. How will you see Maan when you are blind in your guilt.

Maan: tats the reason I don't deserve you. when you know wat my decisions can do than why do you want me. Why do you want to suffer more for no reasons.

Geet laughs a little hearing his words while tears don't stop flowing from her eyes.
Geet: Suffer, wat do you think Maan tat I will be happy staying away from you. wat do you think tat will this heart survive without its beat. Why don't you ask your heart Maan tat will it survive without me and I hope tat you get your answers.

Maan: My heart is dead Geet. its does not beat for anyone but only filled with my sins and guilt. There is no way for me to come out of this guilt. My sins are never ever forgivable. They are meant only for destruction like me. My inner beast only knows to ruin your love. Sins are a part of my life, the sins which made me loose myself, the sins which made me loose all my precious treasures. Why don't you get it Geet, tat I don't have anything to give you. I don't have the love which you need. You know wat Geet, when you are guilty, its not your sins which you hate but yourself and I hate myself Geet. A hatred that only knows to destroy myself for hurting you, for destroying you into pieces.

My guilt don't allow me to come close to you

My sins don't allow me to love you'..

My hatred don't want to hurt you

My life does not deserve you'.

My love is a sin for you'

A sin which only knows to destroy you'.

Maan leaves Geet there with his words, which pricked her heart. However, before he could leave the room she said tat made Maan to stop in his tracks.

Geet: A guilty suffering spirit and heart is more open to grace than a apathetic and smug soul, and my Maan is this soul who needs to be graced with love which he deserves. My Maan is such a spirit who deserves the soothing touch of his mishty. My Maan has such a heart tat can never be filled with sins when he has his mishty.

There is no sin except stupidity, and my Maan is not tat stupid to be a sinner when he is not. My Maan is not tat stupid to think he does not have any love for his mishty. My Maan is not tat stupid to think tat his love a curse for his mishty. My Maan is not tat stupid to think tat he does not deserve his mishty.

Marriage is three part love and seven parts forgiveness of sins, and our marriage stands true for this. Its filled with love for both but hatred due to circumstances but not so much of hatred tat it can never be forgotten. May be your sins are much bigger making you my sinner but my love is much stronger making me to believe tat my Maan is not a sinner and can never be, even if he is wrong.

Maan did not say anything more but he somewhere knew tat wat Geet said was right. He knew tat her love was much stronger than his and can forgive him even if he kills her but will his soul accept it. He knew tat even though she forgives him he can never. How can he forget tat he is responsible for the death of his unborn child. How can he forget tat he has destroyed his Geet, his Mishty, his love with his own hands. Is it possible to forget all this and move, is it so easy for her to forgive him. He was so frustrated with the events and his weakness in maintaining his distance from Geet tat he felt helpless. He went to his gym to vent out his anger on himself. He punished himself with vigorous exercises, kick practice, punching and his rough moves but nothing helped him. there was no treatment for his misery and everytime Geet's tearful face flashed in front of him. he still continued with his rough moves but this only increased his anger finally he rushed out of his gym and driving away from KM leaving himself to the pain and struggle in his life. He did not know where he was going but just kept on driving unless and until he was tired. He did not realize where he was, but felt tat he eyes getting heavier and before he could understand wat it was he lost his senses.

When he opened his eyes the very next morning he found himself in the hospital bed. He still felt pain in his body and he saw the nurse coming towards him. he asked her how did he come here and where was he. The nurse informed him tat he was found unconscious in the outskirts of the Delhi and right now he was in one of the small hospital in a village. Later the doctor came and examined him and upon finding him tat he was fine handed him his belongings. Maan did not wanted to go back home and he decided tat he would stay somewhere for few days so tat he could think wat he needs.

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It was two days since Maan was no where to be seen. Everyone back home was worried while Geet was nowhere to come out of her room. She was just sitting near the window waiting for Maan to show up. She once again felt tat she was responsible for all this and cursed herself. While the otherside Yash, Vicky and Adi searched for Maan's whereabouts but no one knew where he was. They tried his phone but it was always switched off. They tried all the means to get information but miserably failed. Here Geet, was not ready to tell them wat had happened between them but just said tat it was all her mistake tat Maan has left. The very next morning Maan reached KM, and without a word went to his room only to find Geet, sitting on the window pane lost in his thoughts. She had longed back sensed him and how could not she but did not move a bit to see him. She knew tat he was fine as her heart was beating. Maan stood for a moment to see her all pale but did not have the courage to go near her or say something. Nakul informed everyone tat Maan was back and by the time they would come to meet him he was down stairs all ready for office. They tried to ask him where was he but he did not answer them and went away.

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Since Maan was missing for two days, he was held with all pending work. He was also informed tat Geet had sent her resignation to KC and so the project was kept on hold. He kept quite and started to work. However, he was away for two whole days but he could not decide wat he wanted. His heart wanted to be with his love but his mind never left his sins. He was still stuck between his love and his sins. He wanted all this to be over so tat they both could move forward either together or separate but right now he was hell busy with his work and KC which needed him. It was late evening when Maan was informed of his meeting which was fixed on the spot in a five star hotel with his clients. It was one of an over seas project and the clients wanted it to be signed urgently as they would be leaving early next morning. So Maan asked to them to meet him at the xyz hotel. Fortunately or unfortunately, Dev and Naintara were in the same hotel for a dinner unknown to the fact tat Maan was also present. They were so busy in their world tat they did not see him seating next to their table along with his clients while Maan to was engrossed in his meeting. But soon Maan's attention went to the announcement made by the manager of the hotel.

Manager: Attention everyone. Its my pleasure to announce you tat today's dinner is sponsored by Mr and Mrs Dev Khanna who are celebrating their proposal anniversary. I on the behalf of my staff and management would like to wish them for the same and to have a lovely life ahead. A big cheers to the couple Dev and Nainatara Khanna.

Maan was shocked to hear it and soon his gaze fell on Dev and his so-called wife hugging each other. He was filled with anger and wat not. He got up to kill Dev on the spot but soon sat back thinking about his clients. The clients kept on talking about the project but his eyes were fixed on Dev. He did not know wat was it, if Dev was married than how come Geet does not know and if she knows than hw come she is with him. he wanted to clear his doubts at the very same time but his clients held him with the meeting. By the time he finished his meeting he saw Dev and Nainatara were already gone. he wa angry at himself for being with his clients but he decided tat once morning he would kill tat Dev Khanna for playing with his mishty.He reached home back and saw Geet still lost in her thoughts but now on the couch where he used to sleep. He wanted to take her in his arms and soothe her but Dev and his wife was going in his mind. He wanted to confront Geet about Dev but he could not.

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The very next morning he reached KC and searched for Dev's address and finally reached his house. He rang the bell and a servant opened the door and before he could ask anything Maan pushed him away screaming for Dev. Hearing Dev's name Nainatara came out form the kitchen.

Nainatara: How are you and why the hell are you screaming out my husband's name. don't you have any manners.
Maan ( angrily): So you are his so called wife Nainatara, if m not mistaken. Seems to be quite innocent than your flirty husband.

Nainatara: dare your speak rubbish about my husband, other wise.
Maan: otherwise wat. Do you think tat m saying rubbish. Don't you know the truth about your so called lovable husband who is cheating you on your back. Don't you know tat he keeps flirting with other woman's for his pleasure.

Nainatara: just shut up. Wat do you think about yourself. Do you think tat I will believe your sh**.

Dev who was in the washroom heard the loud conversation and his wife screaming on someone came out and was shocked to see the Maan Singh Khuranna in front of him. he felt a terror run through his body seeing him full of anger. He slowly called out to him.

Dev: Maan..

Nainatara turned to see her husband but before she could say anything she found Dev lying on the floor. Maan who had seen him punched hard on his face making him to fall on the floor. He hovered on his body and continued punching him with hard blows. (poor Dev). Dev tried to say something but he was not capable of it while Nainatara called out to her servants for help. Though Maan was alone but he was much stronger and it was hard for them to separate him from Dev but finally the servants succeeded. Nainatara stood in between them while Dev was bleeding from his nose.
Maan: B******, I wont leave you. how dare you play with my Geet. how dare you use her for your pleasures when she thought tat you are her friends. I wont leave you.

Dev: Maan, please listen to me. Its not want you are thinking. Please listen to me once.

Maan: listen, do you think tat you can defend yourself. Do you think tat I will believe your flirty lies.

Nainatara still could not understand wat was going on.
Dev: Maan, your wife knew tat m married. Geet knows about me and my wife.

Maan who was held by the servants roared like an injured tiger and move forward but was held tight.

Maan: don't you dare point out to my Geet. she can never do anything wrong.

Nainatara know understood tat he was Geet's husband Maan Singh Khuranna.

Nainatara: Maan, listen to me. Dev is not at fault. Its all Geet's plan and Dev was just helping her
Maan: Plan, do you think tat I will believe you and your words. I know tat you want to save your husband and putting all the blame on Geet.

Nainatara: No Mr. MSK, m not and I don't want to as I trust my husband Dev and my friend Geet like anything. I don't need to speak lies to prove tat my husband is innocent as he was just helping his friend whom he thinks as her sister. So why would i.

Maan: Than why was he playing with geet. did not he knew tat she was married to me.
Dev: we both knew tat Geet is your wife Maan but it was all geet's plan tat I should pretend tat I m unaware about her marriage to you.

Maan: Pretend' I don't believe.

Nainatara: You should Maan.

Nainatara and dev told him all tat happened since Dev and she landed in Delhi. They told him how Geet asked Dev to act in front of him. they also told tat even Vicky was aware about all this and so was his own family. Dev also told tat it was not him with whom Geet was dancing at the party but it was Vicky. Maan was shocked to hear all this and his anger once again took over him and he dashed out of their house.

Dev called Geet but she was not receiving his phone so he called Vicky who was at KC and told him tat Maan came to know about the whole drama and he left with anger.

Precap: Final confrontation between Maan ' Geet, Khuranna's and Handa's

Imp note: want to clear one thing tat Geet is still unaware about Annie was behind all this. Though dadima and others had mentioned about it once but she was not in her proper senses to hear it. It was the time when geet had finally out form depression but was shocked to know tat Maan had left her and wanted a divorce. So she is still unaware about Annie and others.

Wanted to clear this coz the next part will be the final outburst of Geet towards Maan, Handa's and Khuranna's

Waiting for your likes and comments.

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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awesome update..
poor maaneet, both are suffering
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wow lovely lovely update,...i loved it...geet ur not at all wrong...ur way of torturing maan was correct...he will built a wall around him, and wont cum out of it,he is no.1 ziddi,..wen geet pull him out of that wall, then only he will cum..he is buddhu, idiot, cant realizes his feeling and geet's feeling...he thinks that staying away from his geet, she will be happy..,but buddhu maan, u dont know that geet's happiness is u...wen u will realizes that...washroom romance wow lovely...maan however u try, u cant stay away from ur geet...after that u will fell guilty...maan wen u will grow...u want to live with ur geet, ur craving to touch her, but staying from her, hurting urself and ur geet...maan dont behav like a kid...geet is crying, bechare geet, how long she will be fighting with u, to bring u from ur guilty...now my maan saw dev , oh bechare dev...now wat will my maan do...im waiting, with bitting my nails...
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Oh!! Now how will Geet make him understand the situation😲 his guilt feeling has taken over his mind, hope jyada gadbad na karde...
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Loved the update...
I feel bad about Dev getting beating up...
Can't wait for the next update, i think it will be more emotional. Can't wait
until the outburst of Geet where she finally voice out her inner turmoil that
she kept to her heart.
I am wondering what happened to Annie, where did she go and what
happened to her or the other cultripts.

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