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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

awesome update!!!
Dev and Geet will make Maan jealous!!!!
This will be fun to read!!!!😛😛😛

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Very nice update!!

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

loved the update...
poor dev 😆😆😆 how much he fears Hitler maan😆
waiting to know the next...

😆

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Awesome Update!!
i am loving this now!
he he Geet included Dev in the jealousy game! Poor Maan lol!! Bechara was controlling so much!!
Kudos to you Geet!!
Continue soon!!

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myramabin

@myramabin

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

shoba next update soon this one is superp nd i know next will be killer

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

omg... what an hotty seducing update...
now me thinking my devil's update is nothing in front of this... hai na?
wow,,,, dev,nt and geet are best friends...
hehehe, poor dev is trying to digest the face that she is mrs.maan singh khurana... hitler's wife...
geet also knew that if he get to know that he will cut him into many small-2 pieces and give them to the dog...
poor soul... na ghar ka na ghaat ka...
haila... geet applying moisturizer in front of maan in a very seducing way in just a towel...
god poor maan having hard time as well geet... but at last landed on bed doing love making
but reality hit him again and he withdrawn...
when he came out from his so called guilt...
again dev is trying to ask for a date and maan's ear is like a dong's ears...
shobha...
please update soon...
and my like was not working so add my like in your like counting...

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harika

@dreamyharika

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

it took me three days to complete reading this ff and i was crying crying geet ko itna dard kyun?😭 the love geet holds for maan can be found only in fictions in true life it can neva happen you hooked me very badly with this story i was preparing for my exam and also was reading this 😒 u are an awesome writer and geets parents i hate them the most more than aniee

i love the way geet has decided to win back her husband even though its not that easy bt i hope she will soon and that seduction part me grinning like fool shoba😆

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#408

SO GEET PLAYED THE SEDUCTRESS ALL OUT TO SEDUCE MAAN AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDED

BUT HIS GUILT IS EVEN BIGGER

LET US SEE IF HER PLAN OF MAKING MAAN JEALOUS USING DEV WILL BE SUCCESSFUL OF NOT

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#409

amazing update...way to go MRS. MSK...

lvd it...

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#410

TEASER

Geet walked down the steps while Vicky kept staring the innocent beauty descending down the stairs. He was so lost in his sweet bhabhi's beauty tat he envied his brothers fate to get such an angel in his life as his love. The love which would even die for his brother. He turned behind to see his brother and father busy in some talks and started his drama.

Vicky: Oh my God! M I dreaming or m in heaven. Bhabi is it you?

The simple word bhabhi took Maan's attention and he turned to see his Geet, descending down wearing a beautiful gown as if an angel from heaven. Maan just stared at her without blinking his eyes as if drinking her serene beauty. It was like the whole universe stopped for him and it was only him and her and than Vicky broke his beautiful dream.

Geet's Gown

Vicky: gosh bhabi are you planning to murder someone with your looks.

Geet just smiles nodding her head.

Vicky: nopes bhabi, you know you look damn hot sexy. Ooops sorry I mean just like an angel on earth. By the way are you going, can I join you and he winks at her eyeing Maan.

Geet: Nopes Vicky, I m going out with Dev for dinner party. So you are not invited in it. Better luck next time.

Tats when Maan realized tat he had completely forgot wat he had heard at KC about Dev and Geet going for a dinner date. He could really not believe his ears and eyes tat his jaan, his mishti, his wife, his geet would be going for a dinner party with someone else.

Maan scanned through the whole party hall and realized tat it was a masquerade party. He once again roamed his eyes all over and there he saw his lady love Geet dancing with a man rather say Dev. His blood boiled seeing Dev's hand on her bare back which was only meant for him. He could not hold himself from pulling Dev and just punch him to death but this was not the time. He went near the table where there were mask kept and picked one similar to Dev and he turned to go when he saw Geet standing all alone. he reached near her and grabbed her once again for a dance holding her waist roughly….

( Poor soul, Kitna tadpati hain Geet apne Maan ko woh bhi aise aise kapde pehan kar. Geet yaad rakhna Maan pura badla lega)

Tats it.. a small teaser for all you there. Please don't ask when will I update. As I get time I will do may it be tomorrow or later.

So now ur turn for giving me like sand long comments.

love you all...