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super painful updts dear 😭 😭 😭 iss ff kii Geet-Maan ko kabhi ek dusre ka pyaar naseeb hoga bhi ya nahi 😒 😒 😒 but TEASER padhke thodha chain aya... shayad ab kuch waqt kii lovey-dovey moments humein miley... agar Shoba ji aap kii meherbani ho tho 😡 😡 😡
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PART 24

Geet sat on her bed, with continuous tears flowing down her cheeks. Her mind, heart and soul only called out for her life, her Maan. She always feared this and now her fear came true. Though her heart knew tat Maan will return but still there was some fear tat he wont return. The mere thought of it ripped her into pieces.

Geet: kyu babaji, kyu kiya aapne. Hamesha ish darr se dil gabra utha tha aur yahi hua. Kyu diya aapne humare Maan ko yeh dukh aur dard. Kya manga tha maine aapse sirf humare Maan ki khushi, unhe ishe dard se bachane ke liye hum apna dil thodke yeh ghar aur unhe chod ke chale gaye the na phir kyu diya aapne unhe dard. Jee lene diya hota, yahi sochkar ki unki Geet bewafa hain kyu aapne unke samne sachayi laayi. Kyu babaji. Yeh jaankar bhi ki hum zinda hain woh apne aap ko sazza dete rahe, apne aap par izlaam lete rahe aur jab hum theek huye tab bhi aapne aap ko galat sabhit kiya taki hum unhse nafrat kar sake. Par babaji aap tho jaanthe hain na ki Maan, humare andar sama hain, hum unhe kaise galat maan sakthe hain. kya unhe pata nahi ki unki Geet unke bina nahi je sakthi, maar jayegi. Hum kise apne dil ka dard bathe babaji. Please babaji humare Maan ko wapis bhej do please hum nahi jee payenge please babaji. Humari baat maan lijiye.


Kash aap samjh paate babaji ki Maan sirf humara pyar nahi hain. woh tho ish jism ki aatma hain, humari saase hain, ish dil ki dhandkan hain. Har dua mein manga hain unko aur aapne sirf dard diya hain. Har nazar mein dhoonda hain unko par aapne yeh nazar sirf aasu se bar di. Har saas mein pukara hain unko, par aapne inh saaso ko hi unhse dur kardiya. Apni maang mein swaara hain unko, par paa naa saki. Har lakeer mein dekha hain unko, sirf dur se dekha hain. har khushi aur gham mein pukara hain unko, par sirf dard diya hain aapne. Har pal aapne hume apne Maan se dur kiya. Har pal humari kismat mein judai leekhi par ab nahi babaji, aaj aapki ki pareeksha hain. aaj hum dekhenge ki kya aap apni ish lazar beti ki pukar sun lethe hain ya nahi. aaj hum dekhenge ki aaj humara vishwas aur pyar jeetha hain ya aapki likhi hui kismat. Yaad rakhna babaji agar aaj hume humara paya wapas nahi mila tho hum yeh bhool jayenge ki kabhi humne aapko pooja tha.

( why babaji, why did u do this. everyday I feared for this and finally it happened. Why did u give this pain to my maan. wat did I ask u, only Maan's happiness. I even left this house so tat he would never come to know the truth even if I have to vbreak my heart but I did it. Why did not u let him to live thinking tat his geet betrayed him, why did u bring the truth in front of him. why babaji. Even after knowing tat m alive he punished himself, took blames on himself even after I was fine he stoop so low tat we all could hate him. but babaji you know na tat Maan, resides inside me, how can I think tat he is wrong. Does not he know tat his geet will die without him. with whom should I share my pain. Please babaji give my maan back I will not be able to stay please listen to me.

I wish tat u could understand babaji tat Maan is not only my love but he is the soul of this body, he is my breadth, my heartbeat. In every prayer I have asked for him, but u only gave pain. Have called him in my each breadth, but you tooka away these breadths from him. Have kept him close to me, but could never get him. in every place have seen him, but only from far. Have called him in every happiness and sadness but u only gave pain. Every moment u kept me away from my maan. every second u wrote separation in our destiny. But not more. Today I will see who wins babaji. Will se tat do u leaten to my prayers or not. Will see tat if my love and trust wins or ur so called fate. But remember babaji if my love loses today than I will forget tat I belive in u.)

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Here downstairs everyone was tensed as though Geet asked them not to search Maan but Yash and Vicky used all their sources to get the information but miserably failed to trace Maan. Maan had not left a single clue behind, as he did not wanted anyone to find him. he somewhere knew tat once Geet realizes tat he was just acting she would tell everyone and hence they would try to find him.

Yash: Nahi Maa, ab hum aur aise baith ke intezaar nahi kar sakthe. Hume Maan ko dhoondh hi padega.

(No maa, now we cant sit here and wait. We have to search for maan)

Naina: Par hum kya kar sakthe hain. Geet ne tho mana kiya hain na.

( but wat can we do , geet has asked us not to do tat)

Vicky: Mom, agar bhabhi ne mana kiya hain tho kya hum yaha baithkar intezaar kare. Hum sab ne khaaafi kuch galat kiya hain mom ab aur nahi. hume bro ko dhoondna hi hoga.

( mom, if bhabi has said not to search tat does not mean tat we can just sit here. We have done enough of damage mom but not any more. We have to bring back bro)

Dadima: bas kijiye aap sab. Kya farak padega agar hum Maan ko dhoondh lenge tho, kya who wapas aayenge, nahi. Yash aap janthe hain Maan ko. Kya hum ushe wapas laa sakthe hain. kya hum unke maafi ke layak hain. Hume tho yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki Maan ko Geet ki zinda honi ki khabar thi, yaha tak uske treatment ke liye bhi doctors ka arrangement Maan ne kiya tha. Phir bhi Maan, agar chahtha tho Geet ko milne aa saktha tha par nahi ushne woh har ek sazza payi jo ushe theek laga. Humari har ek sazza bina uff kare maan li aur humne kya kiya ushe hi dhoshi bana diya phir se. har pal hume se kisi na kisi ne unki zindagi ka faisala kiya. Na hum kabhi Annie ko samjh paye na kabhi Maan aur Geet ke pyar ko samjha. Hum tho woh badnaseeb insaan hain jo apne bacho ke dil ki baat na sun paye. Kash hum Geet ko Maan se dur na le jaathe na yeh sab hota. Aaj samjh aaya hain hume ki Geet kyu har baar kehti thi ki Maan ko kabhi sachayi ka pata na chale.

( all of y stop it. Wat will happen if we search for maan. will he come back. No he will not. Yash u know maan very well. Can we bring him back. Are we even forgivable. We did not even k now tat Maan knew tat Geet was alive , we did not even know tat doctors were arranged by him. but still he did not come to meet geet when he could, he just took all the punishment which we gave. . without saying a word he punished himself and see we once again blamed him for all this. everytime one of us decided for them but not anymore. We never understood Annie nor Maan and Geet's love. We are tat unlucky people who did not understand our children'd heart. I wish I could never separated Geet from Maan. now I realize tat why geet always used to say tat Maan should never come to know the truth.)

Naina: Haan maa, aap theek keh rahe hain. Geet ke alwa Maan ko koi nahi samjh paya. Geet ne tho har roop mein Maan se pyar kiya. Hum tho Maan ki sachayi bhi nahi jaan pathe agar aap Geet ko wapas yaha na lathi par dekhiye na Maa, bhagwan ne phir se humare dono bacho ko alag kiya. Humari galati ki sazza Maan aur Geet ko mil rahi hain.

(yes maa, u r right. No one understood maan better than geet. geet loved him in every way. We could not even know abt maan truth if u had not brought geet back. But see na maa god separated them once again. Why does god punish them for our sins)

Yash: Par iska yeh matlab nahi hain ki hum yaha chup chap baithe. Hum humare bte ko ab aur dur nahi jaane denge. Hum humari wajah se inh dono aur dard nahi de sakthe. Vicky lets go.

( but this does not mean tat we will sit here. I cant let my son to stay away now. I cant let them to suffer coz of us anymore)

Dadima: Nahi Yash, aap dono kahi nahi jaaa rahe ho. Hum bhi aaj dekhna chah the hain ki bhagwan kab tak in dono bacho ki pareeksha letha hain. dekhna chah the hain ki itne saare dard dekar bhi kya unka mann abhi tak nahi bara ya aur judai likhi hain unke naseeb mein. Aaj hum bhi dekhna chah the hain ki aaj humare bacho ka pyar jeetha hain ya unki buri kismat.

( no yash, u both are not going anywhere. Even I want to see wat god has written in their desting. For how long he will do this. want to see tat is he not satisfied by giving thme so much pain. Ya still he will separate them, today even I want to se who wins, does their pure love or their so called destiny)

They were so engrossed in their talks that no one knew tat in a mere second their life would change. The life would take a complete turn when suddenly Vicky saw Geet running and coming from her room and he just said "Bhabi" when everyone once gazed turned towards her, they saw her madly running and coming downstairs but had no clue about it as to wat was going on.

Geet who was continuosly crying her pain out and complaining to babaji felt something strange. She felt some strange peace and her heart started to beat faster at an unusual pace which she could not recognize. In a daze of uneasiness Geet came running from her room as if she knew tat her life was nearby, as if she knew tat her love was nearby, as if she knew tat her Maan was nearby and there she saw him standing and staring at her as if he was seeing her after ages and ages. Geet could not believe tat her eyes were really seeing him. She slowly descended the steps one by one making sure tat it was not a dream. As she reached the last step she almost ran to him holding her breadth and hugged him tight as much as possible.

No words were required for Maan to know tat Geet knew the whole truth. The truth tat he knew tat she was alive, the truth tat she had understood his intentions and the truth tat he loves her. Her hug said all the unsaid words which his heart longed to hear. The hug which told the state of her mind. The hug which told the state of her heart which only beats for him even though he had committed so many sins but this pure heart did not fail tto beat for him.He just scooped her in his strong arms while Geet puts her arms around his neck and just stares at him. Maan walked carrying her up the stairs and soon was out of the sight of everyone.

No one present downstairs understood wat had happened, how it happened but they could not believe their eyes wat they saw. The mere sight of Maan scooping Geet in his arms and taking her away was enough for them to bring the lost smile on their face. A smile which they had been missing since last one year.

Dadima: lakh lakh shukrur babaji, ki aapne humare bacho ki pyar ki laaz rakhi, inke pyar ke vishwas ko bana rakha. Ab inh bacho mein aur koi duri mat lana babaji. Bahut she liya mere bacho ne ab nahi..

( thank u god tat you let their love to win. You let geet's trust to win. Please goa don't bring more pain in their life.)

Maan carried Geet away while both their eyes locked to each other speaking volumes. Eyes which only reflected love for each other. Maan pushed opened and door and closed it by his legs without breaking the eyes contact. Maan could see tears beaming up in her eyes but he dared not wiped them he wanted her to shed to unshed tears which she had been holding since long. He wanted her to break the silence between them. He slowly placed her on the bed making her to lye down and he moved away from the bed. As soon as Geet realized it she felt as if her life was slipping away from her. she instantly caught hold of his hand making Maan to stop from moving away.

Geet: Hume aapki zarrurat hain. don't leave me Maan. I will die.

( I need u. don't leave me Maan. I will die.)

The word die made Maan to turn with anger. He could bear anything but not this. he just turned and closed her mouth with his hand. The mere touch of his hand on her lips brought some relief to her and she instantly hugged him, fearing to loose him once again. Maan tried to speak but his words died in his throat. He wanted to say so many thing, wanted to console her with his words but he could not.

Geet: Jee nahi payenge hum aapke bina. Hume chod ke mat jaaye please. Jo sazza deni hain de dijiye par chod ke mat jaaye. Aapki Geet itni strong nahi hain Maan ki woh ish baar aapke bina jee sakthi hain. Thooth juke hain hum Maan. Mar jayenge hum aapke bina.

( I wont be able to live without you. Don't leave me and go please. Give me any pun ishment but don't leave me and go. ur geet is not so strong maan tat this time she will be bale to stay without u. I m broken maan. I will die without you)

Maan: Jeena seekh lo Geet, mere bina jeena seekh lo. Jis Maan se tum pyar karti thi woh Maan tho kab ka mar juka hain. Jis Maan ko tum jaanthi thi woh Maan kahi baut dur chala gaya hain Geet. Jeena seekh lo humare bina, yahi acha hain tumare liye.

( learn to stay without me geet, learn to live without me. The maan whom u loved died long back. The maan whom u know is far away from u geet. learn to live without me, its good for u geet)

Geet: tho hume bachane ke liye doctors kyu bheje the. Kyu nahi maarne diya hume. Kyu hume phir se hosh mein lane ke liye aapne aap ko itna gira diya. Kyu aisi baatein ki jo sunkar hum sab aapse nafrat kare. Kyu karte hain aap humse itna pyar Maan.

(than why did u sent doctors to save me. Why did not u let me die. Why did u stoop so low to bring me back. Why did you say those words so tat we can hate u. why do u love me so much maan)

Maan: nahi kartha main tumse pyar Geet. Pyar naam ka matlab tak nahi jaantha main tho pyar kaise kar saktha hoon woh bhi tum jaise pavitra aatma se. kaise kar saktha hoon main tumse pyar jab maine khud hi apne ishi haatho se ushi pyar ko dafna diya hain. batao Geet kaise pyar karu main tumse.

( I don't love you geet. I don't even know the meaning of love than how can I love a pure soul like u. how can I love you when I myself has destroyed everything with my own hands, when I myself have buried our love. Tell me geet how can I love u)

Geet: jaise karte aaye ho, kar rahe ho aur hamesha karte rahoge aap. Kyu aapne aap ko itni takleef de rahe ho. Kyu Maan kyu.

( the way u did, the way u love now and the way u will always love me. Why are u giving so much [ain to urself Maan. why maan why)

Maan: nahi Geet, main tumse pyar karne ke layak nahi hoon.

( no geet, I cant love u and I don't deserve ur love)

Geet: tho nafrat karo humse. Nafrat karo aur hume ushi tarah se barbaad kardo jaise aapne socha tha taki aapki nafrat ke sahare hum jee sake. Ishe baat se darr tha hum ki jab aapko ko sachayi pata chalegi ki hum bekasoor the, tho aap apne aap ko maaf nahi kar payenge. Ishe acha hota ki aapko yeh sachayi kabhi pata hi na chali hoti. Atleast aap humse nafrat tho jee bar ke kar sakthe the na.

( than hate me. Hate me the way u did so tat u can destroy me the way u wanted so tat I can stay with ur hatred. I always feared for this maan tat the day when u will know the truth wat u wil do. It was better tat u never had come to know the truth. Atleats u could hate me)

Maan holds her shoulders and says.

Maan: nafrat, nafrat ka matlab jaanthi ho Geet. Nafrat woh hain jaha maine apne haatho se tume ek aisi zindagi di jo shayad bhagwan kisi gunegaar ko na de. Nafrat woh hain jaha maine tumhe din raat khoon ke aasu diye jo shayad koi dushman bhi na de. Nafrat woh hain jaha maine aapne hi ansh ka paap kaha. Nafrat woh hain jiski wajah se maine tumne maut ke darwaaze tak la khada kiya. Samjhi tum.

( hatred, do u know the meaning of hatred geet. hatred is tat where io have given u a life with my own hands which even god wont give to any sinner. Hatred is tat where I made u to cry tears of blood day and night, tears which even an enemy wont give to hie enemy. Hatred is tat where I said tat my child is a curse. Hatred is tat where I took u to the doorstep of deat. Do u get it)

Geet's tears could not stop listening about their baby but she knew if at this time she cant bring Maan out of this, he will never.

Geet: Nafrat nahi thi woh par gussa. Aur ush gusse mein bhi aapka pyar tha. Isliye tho yeh sochkar bhi kisi aur ne hume chuaa hain aapne woh sab kiya. Par sach maanye Maan, hume kabhi aapko galat nahi maana. Kaise maanthe aapko galat jab hum jaanthe hain ki aapki nafrat mein bhi aapka pyar tha. Kaise maanthe aapko galat jab hume yaakeen tha ki jis shidhant se aap pyar karthe hain ushi shidhant se aap nafrat karthe hain. phir bhi aapne ush nafrat aur gusse mein hokar bhi hume aapne aapse dur nahi kiya, kyu ki aapka dil kahi na kahi yeh jaantha tha ki aapki Geet kabhi galat nahi ho sakthi. Woh mar sakthi hain par aapse bewafai nahi kar sakthi, jaan de sakthi hain par apne Maan ka dil kabhi thood nahi sakthi.

( it was not hatred but ur anger. And in tat anger also there was ur love. Tats why u did all tat just by a mere though tat someone else had touched me.but believe me Maan I never thought tat u were wrong.how could I think tat u r wrong when in ur hatred also there was love. How could I think tat u r wrong when u hate the same way u love someone.even by hating me u did not let me to go away from u coz ur heart knew tat ur geet can never be wrong. She can die but she can never betray u, she can never break her maan's heart)

Maan: par maine thod diya Geet. maine thod diya aapne Geet ko. Thod diya apne pyar ke ehsaas ko, thod diya apne Geet ki aatma ko. Ush ehsaas ko jo kabhi hume jodh ke raktha tha par ab nahi. jaane do mujhe Geet jaane do. Jeena seekh lo mere bina.

( but I did broke u geet. I broke the feelings of ur love geet. I broke ur soul geet. I destroyed the pure feelings tat held us together. Let me go geet let me. Learn to live without me)

Geet: aap seekha sakthe hain Maan ki hum aapni dhandkan ke bina kaise jeeya. Maan, hume aapki zarrurat nahi hain par yeh dil ki dhandkan hain ishe aapki zarrurat hain kyunki yeh aapke dil ki dhandkan sunkar dhandkti hain. Agar yeh dhandkana bandh hua tho humari saase bandh hojayegi aur agar yeh saase bandh huyi tho yeh Geet mar jayegi aur agar yeh Geet mar gayi tho hum apne Maan ko kho denge aur yeh hum kaise hone de sakthe hain Maan. kaise jaane de sakthe hain aapko aapki zindagi se dur, kaise jaane de sakthe hain hum aapko aapki dhandkano se dur. Baataya Maan kaise kare hum yeh sab. Jab humari saas aapke sahare chalti hain, hum apni hi saas ko humse alag kaise kare. Boliye Maan kaise kare.

Zinda hain hum aapke pyar ke sahare,

Aapke bina hum jeena bhool jaathe hain,

Har ek saas pe hain naam aapka,

Har ek dhandkan pe naam hain aapka,

Kaisie kahu ish dil se ki dhandkana bandh kare,

Kaise kahe ki aapka naam na le,

Agar keh sakthe tho aaj zinda na hote hum,

Kyun ki zindagi ke kar lamhe mein aapki zarrurat hain.

( can u teach me maan tat how can I live without my heartbeats. Maan, I do need u, but this heartbeat needs u coz this heart beast by listening to ur heartbeat. If this heart stops to beat than my breadth will stop and if this happens than this Geet will die and if this geet dies than she will loose her maan which I cant do. How can I let u to go away from ur life, how can I let u go away from ur heartbeats. Tell me maan how can I do this. when I breadth coz of u, so tell me maan how can I let my breadth to go away. Tell me maan how to do this.)

(M alive coz of u,

I forget to live without u,

My every breadth takes ur name,

Ur name is written on my each heartbeat,

How can I tell thi heart to stop beating,

How can I tell it not to take ur name,

And if I couyld than I would have to been alive today,

Because every moment I need u in my life.)

She brokes down with the last words breaking her last bit of control.

Geet: kyu Maan, kyu karte hain aap humse kitna pyar ki aap humse dur jaane ke liye tayar ho gaye. Kyu apni Geet ko ish mood pe akele chod jaana chahthe hain. kya humare pyar ki yahi sazza hain Maan ki hum aapko pa ke bhi na pa sake.

(why maan, why do u love me so much tat u are ready to go away form me.why do u want to leave ur geet alone at this path. Why maan why is this punishment for my love tat even by being urs I cant get u)

Maan could not control himself but he could let himself to stay with Geet. he had to be punished for hi sins and his punishment was to stay away from his mishti.

Maan: nahi geet, mujhse pyar karke pyar ko badnaam mat karo. Maan pyar ke naam pe ek kalank hain Geet aur mujhe ish pyar se dur rehna hain taki duniya wale pyar par yakeen karna na chod de. Jaane do mujhe Geet jaane do.

( no geet, don't love me so much and spoil the name of love. Maan is a black shadow for love. Its better tat I stay away form love tat people don't stop in believing in love. Let me go geet)

He left Geet crying on the floor and moved away from her.

Geet: jaaye Maan, jaaye, aakhir hum hain hi itne badnaseeb ki hum kisike layak nahi hain. Isliye tho humara bacha hume chod ke chala gaya taki babaji nahi chahthe the ki hum jaisi badnaseeb kabhi maa baneka sukun na paye.

( go maan, go, m so unlucky tat I don't deserve anyone. tats why our baby alos left me coz babaji did not wanted the baby to stay with an unlucky paerson like me to be a mother.)

Maan just froze by hearing the pain in her voice. How would he let her think tat she was not worth of the baby when he was the one. He just ran to her and hugged her trying to take away her pain.

Maan: nahi Geet, aisa mat kaho. I was the one who did not deserve the most precious part of our relation. I was the one who could not trust you and your love. Zindagi tho jee nahi sakhe aur jab jeena chah tha hoon tab sab kuch kho juka hoon.

( no geet, don't say such things. I was the one who did not deserve the most precious part of our relation. I was the one who could not trust you and your love. Could not live the life and when I want to live I have lost everything)

Geet: sach maanye Maan, humne bahut sambhal ke rakha tha Maan, par nahi rakh paayi. Nahi sambhal payi aapke ansh ko nahi sambhal paye humare bacho ko maan. ( she keeps Maan's hand on her stomach) yaha rehta tha Maan humara baby. Jaanthe hain aap mujhse baat kartha aur main bhi karti thi par ab nahi karega Maan. Chod ke chala gaya baby aapki Geet ko akeli aur ab aap jaa rahe hain.

( believe me maan, I had kept our baby safe but still I could not. I could not keep ur part safe , could not save our baby maan. ( she keeps Maan's hand on her stomach) baby used to stay here maan. the baby used to talk to me maan and even I but not anymore maan. baby left me and went, he left ur geet alone and now even u r going)

Maan: nahi Geet, main nahi jaa raha hoon.

( no geet, m not going anywhere)

Geet:Nahi Maan, aap jhoot bhol rahe hain. Hum jaanthe hain ki humare baby ki tarah aap bhi hume chod ke chale jayenge. Hum kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi hain. isliye tho mama, papa bhaiya kisine mujhpar vishwas nahi kiya. Aap ne bhi nahi kiya aur ab dekho baby ne bhi nahi kiya isliye tho hume chod ke chala gaya. Koi nahi hain mera tho jeeke kya kare hum. Socha tha ki koi nahi hoga humare saath par aapko saaya aapke ansh ke roop mein humare saath hoga par woh bhi babaji ne cheen liya humse. Hum jise bhi pyar karthe hain hume sab chod ke chale jaathe hain. kyu Maan aisa kyu karthe hain babaji humare saath. Unhe kahena ki hume kuch nahi chahiye Maan, sirf humara baby hume lauta de Maan. Please Maan kahiye na, aap chod ke chale jayenge tho hum humare baby ke saath jee lenge Maan. please Maan kahe na babaji ko ki who huamare baby hume lautha de.

( no maan I know tat u are lying. I know tat like our baby even u wil levae me and go. I don't deserve anyones love. Tats why maa, papa, bhaiya no one trust me.. even u did not trust me and now the baby also left me. Why should I live when I don't have anyone. I believed tat I could stay with our shadow in the form of our baby but see babaji also took him away from me.whoever I love babaji takes them away from me. Why does babaji do this maan. tell him maan tat I don't need anything but just give me my baby back maan. tell him tat if u leave me and go than I can stay with our baby.please maan tell babaji to give me back my baby please)

Maan took her on her lap and caressed her hair and said.

Maan: nahi Geet tumara Maan tumhe kabhi chod ke nahi jayenga. Kabhi nahi Geet. Jo galati ek baar kar juka hoon ab woh wapas nahi karunga. Maantha hoon ki maine bahut saari galathiya ki hain par ab nahi. Ab tumara Maan tumhe woh sab khushiya dega . apni har ek galati ki sazza main tumse maang lunga Geet. Zindagi ne jo khel khela hain humare saath ab aur nahi khelne dunga.

Pyar mein danga diya humne tumhe,

Par pyar ne hi tho sazza di hume,

Har ek pal hazarro maut maara hoon

Yeh sochkar, ki jisne pyar kiya ushi ko barbaad kiya.

Na muat maang saka na zindagi,

Yakeen karo humara ki hum aaj bhi tumse beinteha pyar karthe hain.

Zindagi se ek muaka maang ke dedo,

Taki hum apne gunaah ka phrayaschit kar sake.

( no geet, ur maan will never leave u and go. never geet. the mistake I nhave done once I will not do it again. I know tat I have done many mistakes but not anymore. Now ur maan will give u all the happiness. I will ask u for my punishment. The game that our life has played will nit let it happen again)

( I betrayed u in love,

But love only punished me,

Every second I dies thousands of deaths,

With the thought tat I destroyed the person who loved me.

I could npot ask for death nor for a life,

But believe me tat I still love u the way I did.

Give me chance to live a life,

So tat I can repent for my sins)

Maan: Kash main bata pata Geet, ki yeh ek saal tumare Maan ne kaise guzara hain. tumare zinda hone ki khabar ne itni khushi di thi mujhe par shayad ush khushi ko mere saath rehna pasand nahi tha aur tumare paas aata tho bhi kaise Geet.

( I wish I could tell u geet tat how I spent this year. The news of u being alive gave me so much happiness but tat happiness did not wanted to saty with me. And how could I come to u geet)

He hugged her more tight and felt her sleeping peacefully in his arms. He slowly carried her to the bed and laid her down but found tat she had her hand in his and the hold was tight probably she was fearing tat he may leave her again and go. Maan slowly laid beside her taking her on him and and closed his eyes but not before promising himself.

Maan: Ab aur nahi Geet. ab meri wajah se main tumhe aur tadpadte nahi dunga. Chahe mujhe apne aap mein ladhna kyu na pade, apne aap ko maaf nahi kar saktha Geet, nahi tumhe kabhi karne dunga par tumhe ish haal mein nahi dekh saktha. Wada kartha hoon Geet ki maarthe dum tak tumhe khushiya dunga. Zindagi bar tumara saath dunga par shayad who khushi tumhe kabhi nahi de saktha main nahi tumare karee baa saktha hoon geet.

( but not anymore geet. I cant let u suffer more coz of me. I will fight geet but cant forgive myself nor can let u forgive but I cant see u like this. I promise u geet tat till mt last breadth I will give u happiness. I will give u happiness for ur whole life but can never come close to u again.)

He slowly drifted to sleep unaware tat though he promised Geet tat he will give her happiness but did he really know where does her happiness is. Will she be able to stay away from him. will her carvings for his love die with his so called promise. Will geet be able to bring him out of his guilt or will they suffer due to this guilt.

Precap: how did maan return back?
how will their life be?
Will maan's sins let him to come close to geet.

Hi sweethearts m really reallly sorry for not updating yesterday. But I could not help, as my niece and sister planned for shopping and so I had to go and later after coming back home I was busy with my friends on facebook. And I had not even finished the full part. So I could not update it and now hope tat I have done justice to this part. I don't know how it has come out but I have tried my best.

Ok guysss.. from now onwards I will give u many maaneet updates' will not introduced any twist right now.. but ya will show some things I between. Coz many more twist are there in line. But right now wil focus on maaneet. Will let them get back to their love life.

Hope u all will like it.. will be waiting for ur likes and comments'

Love you all'..

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago

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