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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh!! I would rather have the truth be untold than read about the deadly accident!! Normally it was i hate MK for doing this...but i think i shall have to say that in reference to geet now...and i cannot bear to do so... :-( what a mess..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
plz update soon
waiting fr next
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HER LIES HAVE HURT MAAN SO MUCH
BUT HOPE HE GETS WELL SOON
SHE FOUND HER MK
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Posted: 13 years ago

ash

me back with long comments
part 87 ,
It was emotional one ash . from one side the way she outbursted her feelings msk and and she came for solace to same person . what an irony . And dan , i dont how can a person do such a terrible thing . u know she is sumone , how can u stoop so low with . 😡 But dont know why i felt geet will say Mistel khulana name . Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyon laga ? koi bhi rishta itna pheeka nahi hota ki naya rishta purana rishta phika padh jaye . from childhood , she was being saved by MSk , so jehan mein yeh reh jata ki koi bhi musibat ho MSk use save karega , i know later maan had taken that place but still i felt out of heart she will name MSK . No regrets and no offence also ash . Just my weird thought .
part 88
Being shareef so did not read the first part 😉 and second part was fabulously written . loved the way maan handled her . agreed that geet had done mistake by not listening to maan and alas she has to pay for it . Trust plays very important role in any relation .loved ur writing, U have brought exact emotions through ur words . 👏
part 89
Much awaited update and kudos to u , the way u brought out the truth . 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
A much intense and dramatic update ash . Fultoos nail biting update . yeh to hona hi tha , maan reaction was natural as his trust is broken but still his love dominated ash , That part was beautifull written . Brought a tear , when he sees geet in vulnerable position and maan ask why she didnt go back . could imagine and me became very restless .
And finally , she found Msk . Ash ,throught out , i was skeptical about geet reaction when she will face truth and now i am very scared how she is going to take . I am scared , emotional, restless, anxious about her reaction . She is niave and innocent , badi shiddat se usne apni nayi duniya banayi thi aur aaj phir nayi duniya ,uska gharonda ek us ped se juda hai jiski neev ko badi door chod aayi thi . Phir wohi leher uske gharonda ko hila diya jis leher se apne aap ko pare rakhna chahti thi . I felt lyk Isse acha use pata hi nahi chaltha ,woh apni naye gharonde mein khush to rehati . Dont know ash but feeling very anxious and restless .why it shld happen to her ?
waiting for next.plz update soon . 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally...the truth is out...!!!!!!!!!
can't wait for next ashu...
awesome part...
continue soon...😊
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Eagerly waiting for next part..
continue soon
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Di... Youd make me guilty now... For being awway from this ff for sooo long and for betraying u for the siggy and banner... Hope u have the heart to forgive me
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Hiii...its me waving hand hope U remember me😉...I really hope that out of sight is not out of mind...nazron se door thi dil se nahi...although I hate U😃...but my love for FT😍 compare to the hatred😡 towards u is nothing...so after a very long time...I am honoured to write something for my baby😳 not U😡 my FT🤗...I really hope U like it😳 not U😡 my FT🤗...n I love U 😳 not U😡 my FT🤗

I didn't even coloured it this time tujhe hi prob thi last time so tere jesa black n white choda hai mene😛

It was the same night when she was pushed into a drunken state to just sabotage her image but her savior was right beside her to save from every hurdle. She was lost in her ownself forgetting the world, forgetting her pretended image too, simply her own self, and her quaintness was missed by him. At moments he would get chafed by her weird antics but even smile, he would get disturbed too if he don't get to see those glinting eyes. In her real self unknowingly she didn't left a single chance to annoy him to the core. Her drunken state just exposed more of her inner side to him. He got to knew more about her hidden natural qualities. Her voice was mellifluous, her rhythm seems to be cantabile, it was so canorous that he couldn't detach himself from it. Without delay he noticed the pleasing sound was no more around him. She was lost somewhere, preceding towards her memory wasn't easy for her too, but this was something she could never fail at, she could never forget, and can always relate too. The place where her heart lived, blossomed, n broken too was that she couldn't rather wouldn't forget it. A place gave her everything and left her with nothing too!!!!!!!!!!!

Her disturbance was natural but he couldn't tolerate that side of her, the lost self, it was way hurting for him that her. He tried making her comfortable as much as he can but he forgot he was dealing with no one but her drunken state when she is so impossible in her stable state so how will she be in unstable state. Soon her memories drifted away since the time she met her prince, he started drifting away from her past, and getting lost in her present life which seems more better being around him. Least she knew that who was helping her in forgetting everything was the one she was trying to erase from her memories. Fate sometime play really hard on you, n unexpectedly you get yourselves entangled in it. She was back to her jolly self, means troubling self, as much as she could she did, instigating him to no extent, no matter what he entertained her a lot, only until they were distracted by matriarch.Her stern looks just took their breathe away but her beautiful filled with innocence oceans can melt any hard rock into molten form. The matriarch took care of her an her every nonsense wish too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He started realizing more of recognizing her worth in his life. He never knew that call could shook his life or his soul to this extent that every breathe seems meaningless just with the thought that if she don't exist in his life. He couldn't agnise the feel completely but he could relate himself with it more over with her. The thought was not that pleasant nor it was that he wasn't aware of the fact but he baffled why did it mattered now so much and the question kept lingering in his mind. The sun rose with making few life brighter but sulking others life in darkness. The moment she could come in senses all she could feel was discomfort and restlessness. As of her ghost of past pulling her towards them sinking her into the darkness again. An anguish filled her, she was not aware of her surroundings but only thing she knew was this place remind all her distressful moments in her life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Her prince couldn't her longer in this state, if a smile for a single moment meant what she wants she would really go for acquiring all those stars it was just a request to get her back in peace. Here care is a much smaller word to represent his feel for her at the moment he was compassionate about her. The pain was might be running through her but the pain was felt by him. When she was stable, all she remember was his fear, care n those tear on his temple made her feel good. She was confused over his demeanor, and later on over her own reactions to his appearance. why did everything mattered so much related to him why did he mattered so much. He was still there to see if she was fine least he knew someone was not liking this over protectiveness. This was not something imposing artificially but something naturally around her. It was her day and she needed to enjoy it but being around him it was forbidden to even open her mouth. Its not the way that she didn't liked it in fact she was loving it but still she needed that space. She tried all her tactics but that just hurt him which was unbearable to her too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It took a min to melt him but still he couldn't fail to frighten her, both were confused he never acted like this with anyone around and she never bent like this in front of anyone. They were simply giving themselves completely to each other but still unaware of the fact. Loving each antic of each other but still felt weird on its acquaintance. Each moment started with him and ended on him, not a moment she can live without thinking about him. Just then she came in acknowledgement of her past. Those moments though beautiful but still hurtful but this time she just couldn't let them peep in her life that too when her prince was beside her. She wanted to close that book of past forever n ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tere honton ke kis kone mein,

Hasi ki tarah mehfooz hoon

Teri ankhone k chupe dard mein,

Aansoo ki tarah mein mehfooz hoon...

There her tears troubled him to the core that he couldn't bear them. He was persistent over the fact that no matter what but he will reopen that book of mystery. He will find every possible way to vanish those tears, those pain from her life forever and what she deserved the most that curve will always remain at its rightful place. While thinking he simply passed out, n got up only to be worried about her badly, as he couldn't find a single sign of hers. Just by a help of buddy he coult regain her attendance at a particular place without delay, he rished towards the place to find her. As this wasn't enough people instigated more him n then they confronted each other. She was super scared ahppy n angry too. A whole mixture of feelings overcame her, making her giglle n fright making her wriggle. He couldn't do much but just to force her and when even that failed he had to use his own tactics to make her upto his point. He was already a gone case through his heart, his anger could no longer remain for her no matter what as fast it may rise it may down in half of its rising time. She was frustrated to no limits but then even this made her heart blink over a thought that this was simply nothing but a special way to be being around her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mukhtasar mulaqat hai

Ankahi koi baat hai

Finally he was able to know something about her.

{The whole description was beautiful can't say anything on it👏🤗}

The time elapsed he got more near to her n far from rest of the world. They were lost in each other but still didn't accepted the fact. His friends got really curious to what he that he don't have time for them his best buddies. Finally came across the truth, it was non other than pink football who stole their friend. They both were shocked to the core, to no ends until thry put up a fake fight. Until she came across a fact that it was all due coz of her. That pinched her heart and maundered towards her elapsed time. When she was victim to all these she couldn't bear what happened to her should happen to others that too when she is the cause. She made her prince realize his mistake although he knew he was wrong but not to the extent she critcized him. Feeling all heartbroken she was leaving but her prince couldn't let that happen. The curve could never leave its palace especially around him.Without a fuss he would easily give in to her any right or wrong velleity!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They all became best pals and started spending time as much as they can, but she never lost her charm as being his evil witch but did overcame all her fears nd that strange demeanor. They came so close without realizing that they started meaing everything to each other. He would be there at her service anytime and everytime. As always he came to rescue her and took her to fulfill her tasks. They were happily moving around having a great time when once again they were tangled into a cute battle of their own oblivious to their surrounding. Finally they met matriarch and here the troubles begin for him. He thought he would be spared easily for his deeds but least he knew who he was dealing with, It was a perfect time to take revenge on and she did tagged herself along with them. That was not bothered them but her silence and his closeness did mattered a lot. They had a great effect of each other, no matter how much they ignore but it all seem so natural. He used his own way to corner and clear his mind but all this lead to a sensuous situation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To fulfill matriarch wish she tried but all she could think was his refusal, despite having her around all he think was her aloofness. The situation they were in wasn't normal especially when they were not in a stable state and having huge effect on each other. This made things further difficult for them. They were into a situation in which they were simply lossing their self control, it was strange urge to loose that self control, they simply wanted to flow in that one moment, without any reluctance. He was completely lost with her access he couldn't think anymore, he lost his sanity. His each motion provoked her to render herself according to his will. Her brain denied and her nerve accepted it delightfully. They were sinking further in to the moment of sultry, as they were torrid. A call from her just got him back into his senses,but still his determinant attitude didn't vanished. He wanted to clear the air between them, he couldn't tolerate it. He persuaded her to their feelings but she wasn't prepared for that, their conversation just became the ladder to further misunderstanding. where his words were breaking his will power, so here her words just broke his morality!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He was hurt to no extent, he was left flabbergasted with her last words, he felt himself pathetic, to impose himself on her. To force her into a unwanted relation. She abnegated not he had some flaws, but her life had some, which she couldn't ignore, he was way special to whom she would ever want to hurt, least she knew this could ever happen this way. They were confused not for what happened to them but the effect could be on the other one, made them worried. The next day wasn;t pleasant at all, all they could think was in a opposite direction, cursing themselves badly. Every gesture, every look just deepen the feeling of guilt in them. But fate has its own plan, to get them together they already planned the conspiracy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Their lfe didn't seem to be same anymore, it was missing anything n everything. It almost lost its charm which they could find only in each others existence. The missing part was just taking atoll on them. She was still unsure to what went so wrong between them. He sank himself into the darkness as his penance got deeper with the passage of time which he think as he sank her into tears. Only when her granny came as an angel to solute all his trouble n relieve him from his trauma. Without a delay she confronted him with his true feelings, as realization struck him so hard considering her real worth and the true meaning of what she mean to him

when you are ready to lose your entire self to and for a person without any conditions'without any complains'and you are ready to take on the whole world just for that one person..then be sure you are in love'.," Dadima's voice echoed, "love simply means evolving into an entirely new person'just because someone needs you badly!"

{This could be the best lines to explain love👏so won't spoil them}

At the other side, she had completely broken, her survival became clumsy, her existence vacuous, her world deceptive. She didn't had anything or anyone anymore in her life, all felt baseless without him. She was once again back to the point standing all alone. The trauma was unbearable, separation from him was unendurable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He already mend his ways to bring his life back to the track, he will do all the needful things to get them together even if it meant immense trials n painful tortures, he would go beyond any limit to just assure himself n her. Here she was dying million deaths in micro seconds just with the thought she made him upset. His standoffishness was not hsi fault but hers, it was all due to him. Somewhere she was loosing herself completely, when angel came int existence to vanish all her pessimistic thoughts. She was poor naive baby completely unaware of every minute aspect of heart. Least she knew what it all meant even what he meant, after going through so much she couldn't sum up their relationship. Every one around them knew but she was still unaware. When the angel unravel the true story she was stunned but the moral shunned all her senses. Every word said was true n beyond her capacity to understand easily. She really needed to be her real self LETTING GO which meant nothing when her feelings were true for him. The most essential component was trust in which she was lacking the most, it was a high time to optimistic about people n relations too. She needed a great strength to regain her trust over people, it wasn't easy for her but may be his side it made a lil easier she was all ready to confront him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She was all excited about entrust herself n him, the new hopes once again filled her life n letting merge her true self. His test not only got harsh n rude but ut started taking toll on her. All her pacifications were dying with the passing time but still she couldn't let go so easily.

Insaan dukh nahi dete insaanon se wabasta UMEEDEIN dukh deti hain

EXPECTATIONS! true hurts you more than anything as it is said its not the people who hurt you but those expectation you imply on them hurts you, its unbearable to watch your expectation to be broken daily that to brutally. That was her true self, to expect larger than life, and have a thought which not might be fulfilled but it will it have to be fulfilled, the only thought which always betrayed her. She was still a kid from her heart undoubtedly, to b happy at small things whereas not to notice huge things n to expect more things. But a day all her hopes came shattering down into million pieces seeing that hatred in his eyes for her instead of love, in his posture which she least wanted to happen, which she least wanted to see, which she least wanted in her life, to be ditched by a person who became her life, a reason to breathe...Least she wanted was just to clear the air n not to vanish that slight tinge of hope, all she required these days was that strength to confront him least she knew it will be ruthlessness instead of care, a snap instead of hug, tears instead of smile, least she EXPECTED was to end it prematurely even before it blossom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She left to know find all her answers as always in loneliness, what where how n why went wrong. Possibly she had some flaws that she was defeated this time. She has gone so far that when her nearest couldn't find her traces started searching for her. Here he made million notes to ameliorate in every possible way for all these painful torments. When he was informed with the news, he lost his sanity soon, mostly people made him realize he was the sole reason for all her consequences. They seeked her madly in every possible way direction path but couldn't find a single sign of her. He shot silent prayers just for her well being he required nothing but her sight of safe n sound!!!!!!!!!!!

Tu jo nahi hai tou kuch bhi nahi hai

Yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai haseen hai...

He walked on path aimlessly as her when his prayers got granted and he finally found her. He held his breathe in utter disbelieve as how a wish of a brutal sinner could be granted but he just couldn't thank enough, he not only got her but a reason to live rather happily. Her condition just made his heart burst out with the immense pain, through the realization what she went all these days just coz of him. All she wanted was just to apologize nothing less nothing more but his some nuisance that just ruined it all, ruining her chirpy side too. He was at the verge to loose himself but to make her feel better he maintained a stable state. She was just lost in one thought what if he leaves again, all she needed was just assurity as soon as she seeked his warmth she couldn't control anymore it was all too much to resist without opening up. It was a time to let go and she did she exclaimed her self completely. Acknowledging led nothing but sinking him further into darkness. It was time to rush back her posture just made him feel how much she missed him. Finally managed to get her back when he thought she was in a deep slumber realization struck in that sub conscious state all she could think about was him n insecurities regarding him to leave her alone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He really need to work hard to earn her trust back on him to never leave her side again. She was disturbed with every inch when she missed his warmth. A slight movement would distract her, he made her believe but still words couldn't do the wonder. As her fairy God mother made her feel better left her to be with her prince calm n happy. Even after so much distortion she was back to her old self rather her true suppressed self. He couldn't do much but just gag over her weird antics. He loved having her old self which he somewhere thought just fainted and won't have it again. Even in those moments she would say something so touching that his heart would burst with the pain n damage he had done to her. Finally convincing n soon she drifted to a peaceful sleep with the feel he is around n will always be. With the morning light, which came to her vision was his sight so mesmerizing she would love to watch every rising day moment. Feeling herself lost in him, judged his uncomfortability , made assure if he was fine , who made her feel best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He opened his eyes to only have her vision with that beautiful sight of hers. He couldn't control the urge to have her in arms. She didn't denied either, she couldn't bear that torture again n it all came so naturally when there beautiful moment was distracted by her hunger. She threw weird tanturms n he took them wide arms open he would bear anything but not those lines again on her temple. He would make her feel better even if that mean to make him a chef, cook or a butler. They were having their cute moment again when their friends came all over to destroy it completely. Soon they were reminded other than themselves tehy got a life around too. Both rushed at the place and had a lot of work to do. Being busy still couldn't divert her mind from him. How she wish could have his glimpse which was granted in few moments itself. He couldn't resist either being far from her soon tag her along n they went aloof form all these least they knew what led ahead. A drive with passion with the willingness to loose the self control, emotions taking overthem but still they just maintained that distance between their bodies but in mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Soon she reached was caught by her chum for her help. Least she could disappoint her though it was out of her logic world. She meant those words but its meaning was still out of her brain. Here it was time for her to execute the plan least she knew what it held for her. It was all worked well finally she succeeded in making two love birds confess their true feelings and live merrily. She still believed it was just their love that brought them together but least she knew about the main element, still unaware about the true fact. As soon as his prince realized, but she being the queen of naiveness, she was no where to understand this phenomenon. He tried every possible way to convince her but least he knew she only believes in demo but her words just shook him.

What is truly yours will always be yours no matter how hard people try to take it away from you!

{I truly agree with these beautiful words but I guess when U fell in love So the logics fly away through your open doors and insecurity rather peep in through windows, though u say U trust the person most but still U feel every moment that fear to loose him}

She truly didn't relate to those words until she started feeling it. He too didn't left a chance to back off and pushed it further until that fuel was pour on the burning fire with in, that was it she lost all its sanity and had to free his prince from all those witches. Her act just proved the zealous vigilance in her. The green eyed monster as if woke in her to turn into pieces all those that came near to him it was unbearable. The every passing moment just burned every inch of hers by just the sight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He too didn't resisted in pushing her off the edge completely. Here he was loving it n she was loosing it completely. Once again she just stormed off. He tried pacify with her but once again his ego came in before her. She couldn't understand anything but still made a mind won't just let it go so easily atleast not going for it instantly. She waited for him but still her expectations were broken. Her day went all blurr with the thoughts, he didn't came blah blah blah. Only until she confronted in his traditional style but still she was not ready to accept it. But he knew his ways to mend with her. Surely she did patch up but still kept that thing with her, though it was fine now but still she put a ban on her words going towards him. He even accepted that delight might there was no need of words anymore. All was just said with that caress through his lips on her cheeks, only until when she replied him too!!!!!!!!!!!!

They were busy but still he would get a chance to gesture her, it was her day special she wanted him around, but his absence would just break her though, soon she got to knew he was never aloof always there with her beside her. That just boosted everything in her confidence, trust, happiness, energy n a faith to have around always...The next day and still she couldn't see him around, it was painful that she could ever imagine, something she wasn't liking it. Having him around just gave her another energy to be enthusiastic but away from him just made everything clumsy. Just then it blinked n the twinkle returned. Having a glimpse of him was all enough to drive her crazy. He couldn't understand her excitedness but still he would love to give in her every craziness. He took her back as always, she wasn't less in throwing her usual tantrums. He accepted wholeheartedly and let her drift into a peaceful world. She woke only to be depirved of his warmth but welcuming by a new pleasure. She was stunned by her attempt, she was more than excited with all this new feeling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She waited for him impatiently, looked around for his presence patiently, she was filled with anxiety as to what was he upto loving its every bit. Her excitement rose to another level when chums joined and make a tmosphered filled with romance. These sensations were just tickling with the feel of what will he be doing next what has he planned. Anything related to her prince would automatically bring felicity in her every move. But soon after few moments as his looks blew her, his actions just turned her mood upside down. Shattering those million of hopes which led her here with a twinkle in her eyes, sparkle in her attitude, but now all felt baseless, that sight was more than enough to burn her alive , that too when he knew it could be so displeasing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was not what he intented to do it was much more than that, she was moving away, were her chums surrounded she couldn't disappoint them when they were all so excited about their new feelings. Till now he couldn't but when he noticed he couldn't have enough of her. Just by her mere sight his world seems turning around, as he thought she looked much more erotic. Her skin seemed burnt with his mere vision just took in his eyes full of lecherousness. She tried moving far off when he trapped her in the castle of his arms. From the escape was impossible, she tried every means but it was just not into her to break through this trap. He had in it him to melt her, he made stroll till dance floor. Her senses still not accepting but he had his own plans. Soon the melody start and she knew that there would be no time when she will simply melt in his arms. His every move meant something, she knew what but she tried her best to understand that hidden feeling. His eyes seem mirror to her but still something blurred behind it. His every move on her was titillating.

{the dance is explained in a way special way its beyond my reach doll queen👏}

Those words were playing their own trick with his sensuous touches. Her world swung with those feelings in her wakening and drive every nerve of hers crazy. Just then he said those enchanting words which just, she flabbergasted over the fact that what he said was true or she hallucinating with all this weird sensations. But his eyes more than his words were captive at the moment she felt like loosing everything in just that one moment even herself. She was till stunned that sweet caress over her lips through his lips snatched her sanity. She was curious, anxious to what was her part in all these least she knew, she wasn't scared, she knew she was in the most safest place in his embrace, in his cocoon. He tried noticing her reaction, he was scared to see something different in her eyes, but that shyness n blush in her eyes seem like eternity and understood her espousal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What another broke apart
You came into my life and mended my heart

The man that haunts me yet
I will soon forget

You have touched me in every way
Believe me in every word i say

I met you by chance
Now we start this new romance

This all doesn't seem to her less than a dream, a beautiful one to which she wish never to be ended. She could still feel that tingling sensation around only to be confronted by the fact that it all turned into a perfect reality n his prince was yet again just by her. It all felt sp special, so mesmerizing she never though it could be this beautiful the thought itself just burned her. Being him around her always made her feel like a princess. His every sensuous move naughty talks were just amazing completely enjoying her new life. A new phase which just made her forget everything even that pretented self she was now her own self the true self. It was a great time going by everyone knwing about them but still amazed about the fact that she didn't accepted verbally but he least cared all he knew he even liked this silent acceptance. He simply couldn't refuse for a single thing if she is upset make it upto her is a obligatory duty no matter how much effort it take but undoubtedly she was a priceless possession!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Her every wish was a command for him. As soon she knew how upset he had made her matriarch she immediately charged him guilty and he would do anything to just get that smile back. The prince never changes that was how he is always get involve with a new phenomenon and forgetting others balancing was not something in his genes. So they were back again to this place and so her discomfort. They were living here now but still something didn't felt good, there was surely somethign in it which instigate her to act strangely. He didn't failed to notice but least he could understand. He tried his best to make her feel all comfortable but all in vain. Through passing time she did tried comforting but soon once again she was drifted back to her past. The more she wanted to ignore it, the more it peeped in. But here it was her saviour always there to protect her. He did by drifting her into the world ecstasy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was all so new to her but it felt heavenly awesome. She simply knew nothing but he guided her in every step of foreplay. Her every cute antic just drove him crazy between all their passion all she could care about was her desert. He smiled but still couldn't have enough of her rather her tempting antics. Here she was exposing her elapsed time but he could only see into one direction rather around her his thought could wander only atound her. He himself didn't realize how wild he could get just seeing her glimpse. His each act just left her dumbfounded, still the resistance died way longer back. Next day waited for them with yet another conspiracy. The sun rose only to brighten their life. All went well with everything, that cloth adored her and complimented each other. Her beauty enhanced further but still all was just useless until his sight fell on her. This time it was other way round she was drooling over him.His perfect didn't left a chance in musing her. But it was his turn he couldn't let go any chance to startle her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His sensuous slender figures would play wonders on her skin, but she too didn't let go a chance to tease him. She had a narrow escape just to tangle herself once again into her bygone time. She could see those things which were connected to her heart but still couldn;t fathom her relation with them. When she confronted a much more familiar piece about to collide when her saviour rescued her from that disaster to occur. She felt like ghost of pasts would stretch her towards them. Soon the joined the gathering but she felt alien all she could watch was her alien surrounded by some fetish witches. Soon her privacy was snatched by them but soon her prince even saved her from them only to see a tinge of green eyed-monster revamping!!!!!!!!!!!!

She felt dejected those words lingered in her head somewhere imprinted on her heart. He tried let goo only to realize it was much more deepen. He couldn't make out only he could think was she was hurt he need to know the reason he deserve to know it. Least she knew what hurts more those questions or the fact she didn't had answer for them. She felt broken, questioning her own being here, even if it meant anything. She left soon though he didn't but least he could do anything at the moment. Those tears which even dared to come across those beautiful oceans n he couldn't bear it. She was baffled to what happened to her why is it paining so much why is it hurting so much. Her thought hover only about his being in her empty life. The only hope of ray would shatter her insecurities barged in.

Akar chale na jana

Ese nahi satana

Dekar hasi labon ko

Ankhon ko mat rulana

Dena na BEQARARI

Dil ka Qarar ban ke

Yaadon me kho na jana

Tum intezaar banke

INTEZAAR banke...

Only until he came to have a look on the mess she herself was and created around. He was frustrated to the core looking her condition and not able to make her feel at peace. He tried every possible way but failing to make her open up. Only until she confessed her insecurities. He calmed himself and made her fears fly away as much as possible. With his soothing words, calming tone, assuring faith and unbreakable trust she surely felt at heartsease!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Making her feel at ease he flew promising her a beautiful night ahead. It was indeed beautiful not in her beautiful dreams she ever dreamt of it. He possibly made every wish of hers granted. She just exclaimed that she loved it and he didn't left any stone unturned to make it memorable for her. She forgot everything around her sorrows n pain, her losses n gains, all she remembered was this sweet arrogant insane. To make it all the way special he sucked the life out of her, her vision blurred disappeared what she wished to see more, but her desires emerged from the core but truly her life got beautiful than dreams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I end here its just till part 74 my all strength drained away as I didn't knew where to stop so the new year just seems perfect😳

P.S As always I actually wanted to complete till the present part but I'm not in a state to read or write anymore I'm deeply hurt n completely drowned into the oceans of tears...Aabi died how could he ooo I want him bak AABI I LOVE U JAANI🤗....So will reach till the present part soon and add myself in the waiting list member infact eagerly waiting list member😳

I love u tooo baby before u say so😆😳

Ummmaaahhh I too want my 100 kissy wissy as a chumma chaaati session😉


Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon

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