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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: -Manashi-

</div><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">more than anything what struck me most in this update is Mohinder Handa. Was the man even bothered about what he has done, let alone being guilty?</font><div>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Men like these are what makes it all downright awful. Such an ass.</font>



i know how u feel about him, but he does feel guilty and he has too many regrets not that it matters and any ways what is done cannot be undone.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I like Mrinalini Handa for the woman she is. After facing such a huge blow from the man she trusted forever, she still hugged her tight when she went missing. I think that's what makes a woman different from the other gender.
Mohinder on the other hand irks me. It was his mistake wasn't it? Did he even apologize once? Instead of rubbing a responsibility on his wife's head, not caring even once what she might be feeling?
And to top it, at the present scenario, why does he have this cold behavior towards Geet?
It is like a role reversal. While Mrinalini loves Geet like her own kin, Mohinder plays all cold with her. Great! He disgust me.
Awesome work. Do continue soon
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ooh! i like her too and i guess Maan loves her too 😉

Mohinder has his reasons though unacceptable and i'm certainly not going to redeem his charachter but yes i did like to put across his pov when the time comes and you can be the judge.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: neethuMG

Awesome.

</div><div>Loved it.



Thank you so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: chavvi16

what do you mean you are back unfortunately i think that its fortunate you are back i think it is good to know why geet became G and this can help us understand her better



Thank you it really means a lot, i'm normally not a self deprecating person but than the stats for this ss r awful and i was practically down after writing such glum update so i guess i vented it out, don't mind.

The next part will give a lot of insights on Geet's past and what made her G.

Do read and let me know what u think of it.



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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ammu5

sad sad update. feel sorry for geet n mrinalini.

me too 😭 . But i really hope to set the mood right after the flashback is over. Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Wow...this was an awesome chapter. This is integral to the story so dont worry about it not being important.I really like your way with words.


I feel utmost empathy and sadness for Mrinalini. She was such a happy soul and was under the illusion that she had a happy and loving family. She had given her everything to all relationships. Then why did Mohinder do this to her? I feel terrible for her. There's hardly anything that can be more wrong for a married woman than to find out that her husband cheated on her!

Needless to say, I hated Mohinder - not only for his actions, but also for being the coward to hide this and being a pretense...Please ensure he gets punished well.

I thoroughly love Tej's character. He just grew up earlier - all he wanted was to care for his family. These children due to no fault of their own had to face these circumstances. I donot hold Mrinalini responsible for getting submerged in her own grief, nor Tej for turning hard, nor Geet for being vulnerable - its all natural.But I'm sure he must have had a hand in the way Geet turned out...

Please continue soon.😃



I am overwhelmed , my thank you , u did wonders to my writing spirit, really all i wanted to say is all in here and that to short and exact.

Punishment for Mohinder, idk i have not thought along those lines but i'd like to say this he is not a villain but does not mean i am going to make a saint out of him he is all flesh and blood with his own strengths and shortcomings and rest assured he has lived his life in unending guilt that i think is not a very nice way to live.

Continue reading and a few more comments like this and i might never stop writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
beautiful ff...read it in one go
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: spicefactory

Thanks...

'Tej did something' ????
didn't get it, do you mean if he hurt geet?



I meant Tej is involved somehow in making G from Geet?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika



I meant Tej is involved somehow in making G from Geet?



aaha well u'll just have to wait for the next part...it will de up in a day or two
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry read this but forgot to comment. This update becomes the base for almost all the characters. Who what why they became who they are now. I like the glimpses you gave into each esp Mrinalini. Poor Geet, what a way to be raised. No wonder she is the way she is. Waiting for more.

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