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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 8


She gripped his back as he cupped hers pulling her up as he pushed down in a rhythm of their love making.. faster losing control wanting deeper & deeper. Like he knew wat she wants..just meeting to her desire that seemed mirroring his!! thrust deeper, staying there longer each time until their breath was loud as they both collapsed breathing heavily. He laid their still nestled, feeling her, the moment.. the something new binding his heart.
A wounded heart scratched with visible scars
Eyes filled with thousand cursed tears
Yet his presence, like one in a million of stars
Is sufficient to diminish all fears
By
Anniee
It was around 10 am when she turned restlessly feeling herself alone in the bed. She got up immediately holding the white spread around her frantically looking for him. Her eyes immediately became moist seeing the whole room empty. Unknown fear wrapping her heart..where is he??
she didn't know anything abt this huge place.. this room looked not very domesticated.. she clutched the spread closer to her heart..turning around nervously, calling out his name.. meekly & then her voice turned desperate..bit angered. He can't do this to her.. how could she just let him use her all over again & walk out like.. wat was she even thinking getting close to him.
Maan.. her voice stuck in her throat when her red burning tearful eyes met his concerned pair, walking out of the washroom.
Wat happened? Is everything alright? He asked worriedly.
She marched angrily to him & slapped across his face tum aapne aap ko samjthen kya ho?
Geet
he snapped back at once
Her hand raised again.. he stopped it mid way puzzled raged with a sudden rise of temper, he probably could have slapped her back for her behavior but he was way too confused to do any thing.
Wat do u think? Tumhara jab man chaha mujhe use kiya, aur jab man kiya chod diya
Geet
he glared down at her choice of words
she held the ends of the towel that was around his neck I hate u
samjhe tum, nafarat karthi hoon main tumse
her words felt so hurtful to him, though he was not expecting much from the marriage anyway but then wat they shared in past few hrs, it only grew close to his heart & now her rude words pierced his soul. He had not let anyone come so close to him so that their words could effect, but how the hell did she manage to break all the walls just make it right though in !!!


I hate u she cried slipping down .. crumbling down to his feet with the sheet partly covering her. He closed his eyes trying to compose himself, his heart that felt so pained with her tears.. & her words.. dammit wat is wrong with him!! why is he feeling sympathetic towards her. He tried his best to walk away ..he just couldn't.. he took a deep breath.. looking down at her hurt torn face. He bend down to lift her.. she pushed him away. He bit back his anger & lifted her beyond her wish & carried her to the bed. She kept snapping like a small kid in his arms.. struggling to free herself.. he made her sit in the bed.. & turned to leave.. her timid hands bond his neck stronger than steel.. she cried breaking down, why did u leave me & go? Why r u doing this to me?
He was way too annoyed at this moment. His hands went behind to undo the shackles of her arms.. that seemed more powerful than any steel.. dammit wat r u saying he struggled
she sobbed in hiding her face in the crock of his neck. Her tears wetting his skin.. make him tremble.. weak. He didn't want to .. but he couldn't as his hands held her nude trembling structure in his arms. Her lips murmuring as it rubbed against his collar bone, making him shiver.. I hate u.. I hate u.. she cried biting him, nipping his shoulder her arms holding him closer to her. She cupped his face the instant she heard him flinch in pain.. her eyes looked terribly in guilt.. before he knew her lips claimed his. Her tongue plunging into his mouth.. taking him by total surprise.. & a sweet pain as her teeth nipped his lips, & sucking the copper taste that oozed out. He responded after the initial shock, in an equal flavor.

She was all over him kissing, pouring her fear, her tears.. her anger pinning him down. He turned her around when he could no longer take it. She closed her eyes as Maan grabbed her curls & kissed her softly with his legs pushing her thighs apart. Geet let out a moan as he thrust deeper inside her. He leaned over & kissed her as he grind against her. He had no clue how could he get so hard & want in need all over again especially when she just been so mean to him. He could feel the need spread through his body.. her skin tingled with ever increasing pleasure before they exploded into their moment. She hugged him tightly .. I hate u
he closed his eyes still shaking with the aftermath.
His trembling lips softly kissed her shoulder bone.. trying to understand why she was so disturbed, her words played back in his mind.. as he was breathing heavily..
aapne aap ko samjthen kya ho?
Wat do u think? Tumhara jab man chaha mujhe use kiya, aur jab man kiya chod diya
I hate u
samjhe tum, nafarat karthi hoon main tumse
I hate u
why did u leave me & go? Why r u doing this to me?
He immediately looked into her eyes cupping her face.. I didn't go anywhere.. I was in the shower
her eyes where getting clouded as she looked into his sincere eyes
tears welling down her cheeks.
he kissed them, lying on her.. as their breath slowed down.
Why was Maan Singh Khurana giving any explanation at the first place.. he wondered as he walked to change his cloths after few mins.
Geet went into the shower & got ready. It was her first day in KM. Daadi was waiting for her to complete the rasoi puja & the other morning rituals.
Daadi was shocked when she saw the plight of their room. Maan tried to explain her there was nothing to worry, it was just an accident. Daadi got really tensed.
When Geet came out.. her eyes instantly looked around for him. She sighed in relief seeing him sitting next to Daadi.
Tum teehk hona beta
she nodded
challo hum rasoi puja kar lethen hain.
Maan left them alone to finish the rituals.

Daadi praised Geet & blessed her with a new jewelry set.
Just then nakul came in & informed them, geets parents were here. Daadi instructed him to make some tea & went to the main hall to greet them. Geet ran into rano's arms hugged her dearly. She took the blessing from her dad & mom.
Daadi ' Geet ne bahut aacha halwa banya ..aap bhi taste kijiyen
rano smiled proudly looking at her daughter
Mohinder ' aacha tho hum Geet ko pag pheren ke liyen le jathen hain
Daadi ' Maan will come after two days to get her
Geet became restless when she heard her parents conversation with daadi. She got up knotting her dupatta. Mujhe kanhi nahi jana. Her eyes her moist restless, & glared irritatedly at her own parents
rano & mohinder got really conscious at her strange behavior.
Rano tried to reach Geet.. she instantly stepped away how can I go like this? she screamed walking backward trembling.. like she didn't recognize her own mom.
She screamed Maan.. Maan .. Maan looking for him in the different rooms in the KM, leaving behind shocked Daadi, mohinder & rano.
Mohinder & rano was too ashamed to explain anything abt their daughters behaviors.

Maan stepped out of his study hearing her scream exactly the way she was in the morning. He got really worried especially now as she was supposed to be with Daadi & others in the Mansion. She came running into his arms.. mujhe kanhi nahi jana
wo mujhe .. wo mujhe
she cried pointing down
she held his arms.. how can I leave u like this & go
dehko kitni chot lagi hain
dr ne tho aapko araam karne ko kaha hain na
she hugged him tightly when she heard some steps coming close to them. Maan confusedly patted her head that rested near his heart. Daadi & her parents looked at them puzzled.
Maan sighed..rubbing his forehead
wo kal raat ke incident se thodi pareshan hain shayad.
Daadi smiled weakly ' beta yeh tho rasam hain
Geet clutched closer into him.
Maan ' I will myself drop her...
her hands came numb.. hearing the word drop.. tears rolled down fearfully
his heart felt fastened with unspoken words.
he took in a deep breath, softly caressing her back ' I mean, hum saat main aajayenge.
precap
Maan & his passion.
-PREV PART 7 NEXT PART 9-
look out for this book sweets I am sure u will fall in love with the DEVIL!!!

please leave me lots of comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me first...🥳
First she sets the fire...n now is hell scared for him...
She can't stop loving him nor hate him...
Poor geet
Love how you penned the part...👏
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

first of all i big HUG for this update

ohh god...i read it again n again...as cud not get enough of it...ur each n every words brought tears in my eye...why this is so painful😭...but i love it...i love this pain...falling in love wid this FF of urs...me still feeling choked wid emotions...

cant see geet in so much pain...its really heart wrenching to see her insecureness and her emotional turmoil...poor gal has gone into immense depression...and maan is sounding genuine wid his acts...me getting highly confused wid it...how can man who brutally raped a gal both physically n mentally acts so caring...please yeh confusion dur karo...i so want maan to be nice to her n bring out of this depression...

a big LOVE U for giving us diljale...
n i bow down in front of u for ur writing...each n every word feels like a pearl...striking right thru our heart...
love u n...takecare of urself n d lil one...





Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. Awesome update. The way you write is amazing. So many question going on in my head. Does Maan not remember Geet at all??? What made him change??? He seems so different to the earlier updates. Ughhh the suspense. Can't wait to read more. Please try and give the next update quicker Please.
Oh and thank you for updating.
❤️
Edited by Mino_M - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my God
such a wonderful update
simply loved it
superb👏
the way she was reacting
was so heart touching
nowi am more confused than maan😆
plzz suspense khol do
and hey thanks for using the poem.. so happy
that u liked it😳
Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye muski change it to pg 39

damn you confused me😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update di
what happens when msk learns what he did to geet
and in first place geet is gud with him
and he is giving explantion
why he did not remember geet at all
wow what a cover up she is afraid of yesterday when she only did that
waiting for the next update di
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyy
for diljale
A wounded heart scratched with visible scars
Eyes filled with thousand cursed tears
Yet his presence, like one in a million of stars
Is sufficient to diminish all fears
awesome .. thanks alot
this is soo dam cool
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar ab tohj muje lagta hai ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.yeh geet ka rape geet ki dreamz mein hua hai🤢,...she had obsessed wid maan so much that she might have presumed that,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.warns maan toh,.,.,.,.,.,.,.tauba tauba kabhi nahi😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update..
Geet's heart s so much affected by that incident...she didn''t noe whether to hate him or love him..
I m really confused for ds couple..

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