Love Digger's husband Ch 33 6/5 - THD 2 LNK

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Asmi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Maanstein as Frankenstein😊 but what monster has Maanstein created?? The last paragraph tells that Geet thinks not very high of herself but Maan l think doesn't share d same thoughts

Lovely part

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Mishti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

😳 🤓
Ehm Salaam
After 10chapters I manage to save myself a space for comment...
Mere Saare reasons ek taraf aur aap ki kahani meri taraf Hehee...
I miss being here Ji...kuch zyaada hi
Lappy broke but I love reading it from my phone...il come back to write my chota sa analysis after..
And lastly, Thank Youuu for continuing with this second piece of art.. there is this sense of belonging here and more than the story its about u and all the readers here...
Ishq Shavaa et Mushq shavaa ... Love is cure and its fragrance is the cure and I see that 'shava' in ur work..
Without Wax
Mishtiii

edit**
Sorry toh bola hi nahi for being Gumshuda...maafi please 😳

Edited by mishtimohabbat - 12 years ago

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

It seemed as if nothing much actually went wrong ... but still it all went wrong for Geet ! This Geet..this Geet..I feel like giving her a hug.

Aaah..I don't quite like this Freaking Maanstein Scar-enstein's mocking smile! Let him have lunch with Tara. Doesn't even matter!

Aha...Meera returns with 'The Painting' but thankfully there's no painting now..right? Or Will it soon make an appearance too??😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
😳 🤓
Ehm Salaam
After 10chapters I manage to save myself a space for comment...
Mere Saare reasons ek taraf aur aap ki kahani meri taraf Hehee...
I miss being here Ji...kuch zyaada hi
Lappy broke but I love reading it from my phone...il come back to write my chota sa analysis after..
And lastly, Thank Youuu for continuing with this second piece of art.. there is this sense of belonging here and more than the story its about u and all the readers here...
Ishq Shavaa et Mushq shavaa ... Love is cure and its fragrance is the cure and I see that 'shava' in ur work..
Without Wax
Mishtiii

*faints and hopes to fall in Maan's arms*

Did I just land below Mishti ji Mohabbat ji's ever-poetic comment?

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Mishti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

*faints and hopes to fall in Maan's arms*
Did I just land below Mishti ji Mohabbat ji's ever-poetic comment?

Ufff u make me blush to a morbid red!! Am I really soo Guzaarish-type!! Haaayee don't mean to compare myself to the Gulzar lekin iss naacheez ki itni khilli mat udaoo...I'm not carcasion enough to turn more red!!

It's my most pleasant surprise to see u here!!!! Didn't know u are back to this side of the world... Hadippa moment... Haayee

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Mishti ji, Aisa kyun hota hai ki jab bhi hamaari nazar aapki in khoobsurat lafzon pe padti hai toh humaare hothon pe yeh muskuraahat chaa jaati hai?

Aap toh sabko hi kavitaaein likhne pe majboor kar deti hai! Isn't this such a poetic moment!
🤗 😳

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Hey Hi once again... just read few parts as got some time. Not many but precisely just two parts... I know I'm quite lagging behind with you updating in quite a good speed... but hopefully will able to be in sync with the recently posted updates...😊

I must say both 5 & 6 parts had so much variations in it... each character contrasting the other, simultaneous stories running parallel ... & hopefully will intersect at some point. I really can't figure out at present where all of this is leading, but I guess at some point all of these will make some sense & have a meaning of all that is transpiring at the moment. Your way of narrating each character, views & the whole concept... though is quite confusing & unpredictable, but must admit that it makes me wanting for more just to reach the real sense to it, has me hooked onto it. You potray & present all in a platter in the raw form which you make others to serve themselves in ways that appeal to them yet at the same time you have a complete control on the actual content to be served.. ... & has me completely hooked on to this FF... ( Am I even making sense with all my analouges ... or is it all a big Jargon...😆😆😃)

Geet here is a mixed bag of all surprises, unpredictable & blunt all rolled into one. I guessed it right she mistook MSK to be DSK... & cretaed all the mess. Wonder why does she dislike Dev this much. Her writing of the "FRANK" diary & her writings in it... I was 🤣... To confess most of the times I too fall prey to those mentioned spelling errors...😳😳. Her inner voices were too good. But she's a mystery here...

Dev is an interesting character now... quite well shaping up. I know that try as hard I won't be able to correctly figure out the actual dynamics & bonding between the two brothers... & somewhere I guess there is going to be a completely different perspective of their relation...😊

What's with ASR here???? & the Brij connection in all of this????

Guess will have to read the next parts... will do so & comment later...😊

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mayukha

@mayukha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Tum ek doge to WOH (in this case ME) tume dus dega!!!!!!!!!!!!

Looking at Y2K, I thought Meera Modi would be M^{2 😆}

^{The Mascot and the Maanstein going for lunch 😲😲...more M&Ms than I expected.}

^{This geet is such a tease..she left Murphy's love story in the middle of nowhere and started off with a National Geographic expedition.}

^{I say sheesh is much better...she atleast finishes 1 epic before starting the other.}

^Love

^Mayukha

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

whn maan was laughing abt her ordinary looks n fatty body...did i miss it...NT-maan had lunch together...isnt it strange...by th where is th CEO yaar...geet is still nt aware tht though she is working for th CEO, who is actual boss here...n it will b fun...does NT everydy have lunch wth office staffs...sheesh i like ur stretching th story dear n i knw whn u feel its too mch u will stoop it there urself...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

I feel Maan is something else what he shows the world...

if Dev is CEO then why Maan is signing contracts...

I think Dev is just scapegoat for Maan...Maan is a big player here...

ah in this FF u have made just opposite of everything in TSWL...there Maan was in front and Dev respected him...here Maan is hiding behind Dev and Dev hates him...Geet was totally awed by Maan in TSWL and here Geet is cursing him all from the beginning...but to be true this is simpler than TSWL...half of the things about comuters and programming went over my head but apart from that story I was able to understand but this is having simple language and story is also very easy to guess...

but yaar tumhara koi bharosa nahin hai...kab kahan turn kar do story ko pata nahin...but please language simple hi rakhna...

OMG yash's name Y2K...

Geet is having inferiority complex in front of Naintara and somewhere she is feeling bit emotional because Maan went with NT and is mocking her...

one thing is confusing that Maan was once attracted towards her...now why he is insulting her so much...is it because she called him liar...but then she cleared that it was just misunderstanding on her part...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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