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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Owww! Geet did feel the change! She was no longer her own! She was just same as words of Maan being Mrs.Khurana !! Glad she stood up for herself! Being the one she is!
Maan doesnt realize he had liked( or loved as Mel says) Geet for how she is not like high society people!
Awwhh Geet tried to win Maan at every step while Maan had failed Geet!!
Loved how boldly she accepted the truth about herself!
Grrr This Sameera!!!
Now why Maan is shocked huh! that time he was playing very coolly with his mobile when ..


😆 loved the way you said loved as mel says 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Geet was telling him about her past!
Geet is too much hurt now and Maan too much angry!
Lets see what is Maans reaction! He is so wrong thinking she would never succeed!
Continue soon
Kamini yahan koi stop karta hai kya?


😆 yes a angel devil does
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Posted: 13 years ago
Welcome
Thanks
And who is that so angelic yet so devilish person? *innocent face*
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar this is too much..
hate this maan
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Edited by maaneetmaahi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
waiting for next update
continuie soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Welcome
Thanks
And who is that so angelic yet so devilish person? *innocent face*


hmmm someone called mel
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 11
N:What beta your a waitress
M:N

Geet interrupted Maan.

G:Yes I am. I am a middle class orphan whom is also a waitress.

Tears tried making there way out but geet wasn't letting them no she wouldn't break down. Maan's anger had reached his peak.

N:Maan you don't seem to know a lot about her.

Maan didn't reply back.

N:Acha forget it Geet beta let us hear a song
G:No aunty
N:Come on beta
S:Aunty leave it na Geet is to shy she is not star material.
G:I will sing
M:No you will not. You have done enough damage now don't make a fool out of yourself. You can't sing.

Maan whispered so that no one except Geet heard it. Geet looked at Maan with pain in her eyes.Then she heard Neelam aunty saying guys Maan's girlfriend will sing a song for you guys tonight. Geet sighed and walked towards the stage and started singing.

G:
I need to feel your heartbeat
When you say you love me
I don't wanna hear it I
f it's something that you don't mean

She sang looking directly in Maan's eyes. Maan gave her a stern look telling her to stop singing.

G:
If I had to leave you now,
there would be an empty space
It doesn't matter anyhow,
you can't take your things,
and go your own way!

Maan got angry when he heard her sing those words ow so he could leave Fine. He wanted to walk away when Sam grabbed his hand.

S:maan don't ruin your mood everyone is here. What will everyone think if they know Geet is meaning al these words to you. Maan I think you should act like nothing is wrong, it's not good for you image.
M:You right sam

G:
Yea there's two more lonely people,
in the world tonight,
baby you and I
And there's two more lonely people,
who gave up the fight,
yea I'm on a ride

Geet walked towards Sameera and Maan whom where talking. Laughing Sam was trying to make Maan laugh and Maan whom didn't want people to knwo something was wrong laughed fakely. She walked around Maan while sinngin the next pair of lines.

G:
Well, you know my heart is achin'
and you don't have to break it,
if love don't change your mind
Yea, there's two more lonely people, tonight'

She looked straight into maan's eyes and sang.

G:
Well, we got somethin' special, that should be enough
Nothing unpredictable when it comes to love
Maybe, lately, baby, we could feel a little love
And if you would walk away tonight
There'll be two more lonely people, in the world tonight, baby you and I
There'll be two more lonely people, who gave up the fight
Yea there's two more lonely people, in the world tonight, baby you and I
Well, there's two more lonely people, who gave up the fight, yea I'm on a ride
Well, you know my heart is achin' and you don't have to break it, if love don't change your mind.
Yea, there's two more lonely people, tonight'


Maan walked away from there he couldn't handle it any more.Cheers roared around the hall people where impressed. A huge music director called Remo had seen Geet sing. He was truly impressed. He could feel her pain. He loved it she was amazing he thought. He walked towards her.

R:Hi I am Remo the owner of Hits
G:Hi sir I am Geet.
R:Geet your amazing.Would you like to sign a contract with us?
G:Thank you and Yes.
R:Good I am flying to Austrialia tomorrow in my private jet. Why don't you join me.
G;Tomorrow
R:Yes think about it and tell me you answer in two hours
G;yes sir

Geet decided to search Maan. She needed to talk to him. She needed to make him understand that she too had dreams and feelings and that he did mean a lot to her.

Maan was lost in his own thoughts. He was dahm angry.
How could see not where the dress he asked her then she told everyone that she was a waitress. And how dared she to sing when he told her not to and what did she say.Ow he didn't need to tell her he loved her if he doesn't mean and he can go his own way. The courage of that girl.His thoughts where interrupted by Pammi.

P:Maan I told you that Geet was not the one to be MRS. Khurana what did you say give her one chance dehk liya Maan. She told everyone she is a waitress oww and a orphange to. There is no respect left for us Maan. What where you thinking huh I told you have your fun but you wanted to make her Mrs. khurana what's wrong with you. I told you I have a girl in my mind that girl is Sameera. Maan I need my respect back there is only one way dump that girl and Marry Sameera kapoor.
M:Mom your right she doesn't fit to be Mrs. Khurana she to ziddie a

Geet interrupted Maan she ahd heard everything.

G:I am not ziddie Maan I am just not your doll anymore. And you know Maan aunty is right Sameera suits you perfectly. I hope you will find all your happeniss with her.

She came forward and gave Maan a kiss on his cheek for the last time.

G;Bye Maan and I am sorry to hulimate you before your high society

Maan was feeling disturbed. But before he could think or react. Pammi spoke up.

P:Bye Geet you can leave take your stuff from the outhouse and leave.

Geet gave one last look to maan and left. She called Remo and told him she is coming to Australia with him. Maan came to the outhouse Geet was gone, gone forever. Maan felt a weird emptyness inside He was hell angry how could Geet decide to leave him. He was the one who made all decsions. You know what he didn't care. The hell with that girl. He doesn't need her.

Guys mera ff hai seperation toh bahnta hai nah
part 12
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
uff mel u stopped at the wrong time.i didnt like when maan told that she has to change .she is not a clay that she can be moulded in to his desired piece.well maneet moment was less today.i dont like the way he orders thinks and geet does it as if she is his pupet
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...😭
ho maan said she is not fit to be Mrs MSK...😡.😡😡
well this separation is better than his humiliating words..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot Mel for not making Geet bow so low that she would have lost her self respect.
I guess Maan will have to learn the hard way

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