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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
awww maan jealous...
luved it..
karan seems interesting..
continue soon
nish025 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is so lost in geet tht he doesnt realise tht karan is flirtibg wid janani!!
superb..
waiting 4 more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zabardast update...

Karan Vadera... Nice character.
Me happy for a new entry.

Oh wat a flirt he is... Yeh tho
Maan ko competition dega.

Liked Geet n his frndship..

Maan ko jealousy hui seeing
Geet wid him.
N he disnt realise that Karan
Is flirting wid Janani.

Now how will Maan take her
To the venue??

Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update. Oh so Maan getting jeleous wow. story aage badh rahi hain. Now Geet also feel something for Maan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow tat was nice...unexpected entry...i was wondering how u gonna make janani happy at the end...this s really super..
Want more of this jelous game...plzzz
Plzzz update soon
Are they gonna go n bike?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting update.
So Maan was thinking about Geet and Karan and had not even spared a thought for Janani.
Good going dear.
Pls continue soon.
Thanx for pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing update..maan felt jealous for geet,n not janani..so maneet started to feel for each other..continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


CHAPTER 13

Maan drove the car while geet was beside him cursing him …………..

" see if u don't shut up I ll not go further " maan said
" as if I m gonna die if u didn't accompany " geet said

they stopped at a dhaba for food as they have whole night to travel ……………..

" I told u we can bring packed sandwiches oh god now we have to eat here …………………. Its so unhygienic " geet complained
" geet why can't u stay quiet for at least a minute ……….. since when we started ur eating brain " maan said

A small boy served their Rotis and dhal ………..


" I doubt if they used quality incredients………….. what if the plates are not washed " geet said looking at the rotis
" what is the guarantee that star hotels cook hygienic food ……………… see in dhaba the kitchen is right before ur eyes so u can check if the make good food but in hotels kitchen is isolated somewhere guess what they would be doing there " maan said seriously which made geet think for a while before snapping at his stupidity

Geet was standing in alone while maan was paying …………………. Some guys who saw geet whistled and passed cheesy comments …………………. Maan came and stood near her ……………….. he looked at those guys ………….

" arre look here comes our hero " one of the guys commented
" oh do u gonna fight ? " the other asked sarcastically

" fight? No way ……………….. but yeah I will try to save u all from her ………………….. don't go with looks she is no less than a dragon u know dragon ? with fiery eyes and lava from mouth she is the last existent left in that species ……………. I m just warning you " maan said


Geet's mouth drooped down ……………… she gave killing look to maan and stamped his leg ……….

" ahhh………… see guys I told u " maan said holding his leg in pain

" buddy I think she is dangerous " one guy said

Before other guy could answer he received a tight slap ……………. The guy looked at geet with horror written face ……………….. the other guy tried to say something but geet punched his stomach and he fell down …………………… the first guy tried to run but geet blocked his feet and knocked him down ………………….

" this is for teasing me " she said

She kicked both hard in their stomach which made them growl in pain

" this is for listening to this idiot " she said pointing to maan

Maan stood there stunned seeing her ……………….. he has never ever seen any girl attack two well built guys like this …………………. Maan looked at the two guys apologetically………………….

" send ur hospital bill to this address I can help " maan said giving his card

Geet was standing near the car and maan reached there /…………….

" oh my lady rajinikhant I never expected u to do that lioness " maan said defo impressed by her skill
" u better shut ur mouth or else u ll get same treatment " geet said glaring

They continued their journey this time geet drove ……………….. Suddenly car stopped near a forest ……………..

" what happened ? " maan asked
" I don't know may be engine is hot " geet said

Maan tried his mechanic skill but the car didn't start ………………….. so geet advised him to push the car from behind …………………… maan went behind and was about to push the car when it started suddenly and zoomed away …………………… maan rubbed his eyes to check if that was a dream or what but hell she has really left him in the jungle ……………. His phone buzzed he opened the text msg it was from geet ………………..

" u moron what did u think I ll not know that u kept my phone switched off for the whole day ………………. U were planning to spoil the &&& deal How cheap can u get to destroy me …………………… this is my revenge for switching off my phone …………….. let me tell u two happy news …………………..first u wallet is with me ?( hurrah!!!) u can't take bus or cab …………………. Second probably ur phone has 1% charge which will shut down as soon as u read this msg ………………… so poor baby bye ………….."

Maan cursed himself for travelling with geet without precautions …………….. now he understood why geet insisted on using his phone throughout the way to down his phone's battery …………………. God he didn't switch off her phone intentionally ……………………. Now what will he do ? defo he is not gonna get a ride until morning unless he is 100% lucky ………………..

Maan walked aimlessly in the road ……………….. he had no idea what to do ………………….. he can't contact anyone nor he had money …………….. he never expected geet to do something like this ………………….

" babaji why me ?... now do u expect me to walk all 75KM ?... out of all men in the world why should I get a wife who is hell bent in ruining me ?... did I tell wife ? nay cut that word and add boss no enemy or may be some stupid word but defo not wife …………………….. if any man get her as a wife then he can get volunteer pass to hell coz that will be better " maan was complaining to himself when suddenly the road lighted

Maan turned back to see a jeep coming in his way …………………. He jumped to make his existence shown and fortunately it stopped …………………….the guy in the jeep looked young though maan couldn't see his face clearly and was wearing a white loose T-shirt ……………….

" thanks for stopping ……………. Actually I want to go Green Park hotel " maan said
" sure " the white T-shirt replied

Maan got into the jeep ………
" why were u walking ? I m sure u would have come in some vehicle did it got flat tyre or what ………………. " the white Tshirt asked
" that's a tragic story my boss / enemy / dragon left me in the middle of forest road to suffer …………….. if it wasn't u I would have walked all the while to hotel " maan said

" u r boss followed by slashes seems to like u a lot " the guy said
" yup she always thinks about me , ways to make my life hell u know" maan said

" u must have done something to get the hatred boss followed by nick names of urs" the guy asked

" well I unfortunately married her " maan said

" What ? really !! I m sorry woh I mean congratulations " the guy said

" I need pity more than wishes " maan said

" u know what ? frankly woman have many colors ……………. Yesterday she was being nice with me and today she again came to her devil self " maan said

" u r right and the saddest part is each and every girl possess all shades of colors unlike us men " the guy said


" one time pure white the other time devilish black ………………. Once water blue the other fire red " the guy said

" exactly when I expect her to shout she stays calm as if nothing is abnormal and when I really didn't do anything she ll curse me " maan said remembering how he expected geet to make a big issue of kriya staying with them but she was composed but now when maan was not to be blamed she deserted him an a forest

" they know that they have love and concern but never ready to accept " maan said remembering how geet apologized for her behavior with janani and made sure that no one in the office taunt her

" seriously when they know that what they want then why can't they accept " the guy said

" why will they accept ? I tell u women have bigger ego than men at times ………………. They can be so stubborn when they want to be " maan said

" why should they punish the one who is not to be blamed " the guy said

" yup and then throwing the blame of their irresponsibility on our head " maan said

" so that they can hide their emotions " the guy completed

Maan and the guy looked at eachother and said " GIRLS " in unison sarcastically …………………….

" is ur gf troubling you " maan asked
" no yaar Its easy to handle GF this is more worse " the guy said

" ur mom ? "
" nay "

" then ? "
" my sister " the guy said
"ur sister ? "

" yeah …………… she is not talking with me for the mistake is not mine in any sense " the guy said
" may be she is as stubborn as my boss " maan said
" yeah "

They both drove discussing random topics and mostly cursing girls ………………………… finally they reached the hotel ……………….

" thanks buddy " maan said getting down from the jeep
" welcome anyways I m also staying here " the guy said

" oh cool then catch u later buy " maan said
" buy " the guy said

Maan walked away into the hotel and shouted " good night " from far

" good night ………….." the guy shouted back

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well u might have guessed who the guy is

the later part of maan's talk with guy is so much inspired from D3 rey and swayam's talks
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update... Poor maan... Waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update.
geet beating those guys and leaving maan in jungle.
its hilarious. 🤣
of course the guy is geet's brother.
continue soon.

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